Nocturna (A Forgery of Magic #1) by Maya Motayne
26 June 2019
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Tags: A Forgery of Magic #1, Maya Motayne, Nocturna
“Set in a Latinx-inspired world, a face-changing thief and a risk-taking prince must team up to defeat a powerful evil they accidentally unleashed.” I loved the sound of this book and was so excited to pick it up but, to be fair, and to get it out of the way quicky, this one didn’t really work out for me and I’m not one hundred percent sure why so this will be a fairly short review I think.
As the story begins Alfehr is returning from a three month absence to his home. He’s in the bad books with his parents and is delaying the inevitable repercussions following his disappearance. Prince Alfehr is, following his older brother’s assassination, next in line for the throne and not only is he not keen to pick up the duties he’s also not convinced that his brother is actually dead.
Meanwhile in a slightly seedier part of town we make the acquaintance of Finn – a thief with a difference. Finn can change her face which makes her pretty difficult to catch as nobody ever really sees her true face.
Alfehr (Alfie) and Finn are about to meet at an illegal card game where the stakes are very high. Alfie is hoping to win a set of black market magic books to try and find some leads about his brother and Finn is hoping to secure the same books. The two cross paths and things start to go wrong from there onwards. When Finn is given a job that involves thieving at the Palace their paths cross again and this time the Prince makes a disastrous mistake unleashing evil upon the world.
In terms of the things I liked I have to say the writing was very good and the story intrigued me enough to keep me reading until the end.
I think my main problem with Nocturna was that I failed in the first instance to connect with the two main characters. I don’t really know why but they just didn’t work their magic on me and this meant in turn that their adventures along the way felt lacking in tension and fell a little flat – basically I didn’t have that feeling where you’re scared that one of your main characters might be hurt.
On top of this I didn’t really get a feeling for the place. This is a Latinx inspired world but it didn’t feel massively different to me and perhaps that’s because I had unrealistic expectations going into the read – although I don’t think the main character having the nickname Alfie really helped with this. I liked the magic and thought that it had some very inventive aspects to it but it felt a little too easy at some points and then failed at times when it was desperately needed..
In terms of pacing. This is something of a slow starter so you need to have patience going in. The plot does change tack following the ‘incident’ and the focus deviates when the Prince has to take action to try and rectify the mistake he made. In fact this is one aspect that I meant to mention above in terms of the two main characters. I think that the author certainly manages to do a great job in portraying the youth and naivety of the two main povs.
Overall, Nocturna didn’t work out for me for a number of reasons during the read but mostly because of my lack of feelings for the two main characters. I certainly wouldn’t want to discourage anyone else from picking this up. It could be a mood thing on my part and of course I’m not the target audience so perhaps it felt too young for me overall. I’m sorry that this didn’t work for me but I will certainly keep my eye on this author in the future.
I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
Rating 3 out of 5
Can’t Wait Wednesday : Paternus: War of Gods (Paternus Trilogy #3) by Dyrk Ashton
26 June 2019
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Tags: Can't wait Wednesday, Dyrk Ashton, Paternus, War of Gods, Wishful Endings

“Waiting On Wednesday” is a weekly meme that was originally created by Breaking the Spine. Unfortunately Breaking the Spine are no longer hosting so I’m now linking my posts up to Wishful Endings Can’t Wait Wednesday. Don’t forget to stop over, link up and check out what books everyone else is waiting for. If you want to take part, basically, every Wednesday, we highlight a book that we’re really looking forward to. This week my book is : Paternus: War of Gods (Paternus Trilogy #3) by Dyrk Ashton. This is high on my list of anticipated books – due out in Fall so not too long to wait now and just check out this fantastic cover:
LET SLIP THE GODS OF WAR…
The highly anticipated final installment in the critically acclaimed, epic urban fantasy series, The Paternus Trilogy. Coming Fall 2019.
Books on my Summer reading list
25 June 2019
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Tags: Summer reading, That Artsy Reader Girl, Top Ten Tuesday

Top Ten Tuesday is a weekly meme where every Tuesday we look at a particular topic for discussion and use various (or more to the point ten) bookish examples to demonstrate that particular topic. Top Ten Tuesday (created and hosted by The Broke and Bookish) is now being hosted by That Artsy Reader Girl and future week’s topics can be found here. This week’s topic is:
Books On My Summer 2019 TBR
Last week’s theme was ‘anticipated reads for the rest of the year’. Today’s post allows me to highlight some more highly anticipated reads that are scheduled in for my Summer reading. So, another easy week where I literally just lifted the next ten upcoming reads from my schedule and posted them here. I will also, of course, be starting my Self Published Fantasy Blog Off books as of the start of July but I haven’t listed them here for two reasons – firstly, I haven’t yet drawn up my schedule and secondly, I will be posting my first six books as soon as the competition gets underway. So, here are some of my summer reads:
Soul of the Sword by Julie Kagawa

Priest of Lies by Peter Mclean

The Toll by Cherie Priest

The Kingdom by Jess Rothenberg

This is How You Lose the Time War by Amal El-Mohtar; Max Gladstone

Good Girl, Bad Girl by Michael Robotham

Gods of Jade and Shadow by Silvia Moreno-Garcia

Shadows of the Short Days by Alexander Dan Vilhjálmsson

Lord of Secrets by Breanna Teintze

Missing Person by Sarah Lotz

The Whisper Man by Alex North
I think the best way to start this review is to state quite simply that I loved The Whisper Man. It’s really that simple. It scared me and demanded my full attention and on one particular evening whilst I was reading (or devouring) it I completely lost track of the time and everything else going on around me faded into the background. I was in my own little reading bubble, and when the bubble finally popped I found myself quite alone. The darkness had set in and I was the last one to bed. So…., yeah, I had to turn the lights off and like a big girlie wuss I had a serious case of the heebie-jeebies. This involved me doing that mad dash thing where you have to switch off the light, run across the room, banging into various pieces of furniture with your big toe along the way, followed by an Olympian style dive onto the bed so that the monster underneath can’t grab you by the ankle, then finally cocooning yourself in your bed covers so that not a single piece of you is exposed and you’re nearly suffocating in the process. That, my friends ,is the effect this book had on me. Reduced to a quivering scaredy-cat. Did I mention that I’m a wuss though?
This is a thriller with supernatural elements. The sort of thing though that can be explained away if you really put your mind to it – I’m not talking vampires and shapeshifters here. More the hint of things. Its an impressive debut and the main elements of the story revolve around every parent’s worst nightmare – the abduction of their child.
As the story begins we follow a young boy as he makes his way home alone. Neil is a lonely boy, not entirely happy and prone to lash out on occasion. Strictly speaking he’s a little young to be making his own way home unaccompanied, but, it’s broad daylight after all. Unfortunately Neil’s remote path home is being watched and he’s about to pay a terrible price for his solo journey. Neil is abducted and two months later the police are no further forward in finding him.
Meanwhile, Tom Kennedy is about to move home with his 7 year old son Jake. Tom’s wife has passed away and the family home holds too many painful memories. He’s still trying to cope with the loss of his partner whilst also getting to grips with the fact that he’s now responsible for bringing up his son alone. At the same time Jake desperately misses his mother and suffers nightmares about the day she died. He seems to have acquired an imaginary friend and sometimes the exchanges between the two don’t seem altogether friendly. So the two pack up and move to Featherbank. What a wonderful name for their new home. It sounds positively welcoming doesn’t it – comforting even – you’d think you’d be able to relax in a town called Featherbank and yet the harsh truth is that around 20 years ago this small town was home to a serial killer who abducted and murdered five young boys. Known as the Whisper Man, because he lured his victims out at night by whispering through their windows, he has now been caught and imprisoned. However, this latest abduction has brought back memories from the past, particularly as elements from the original case still remain open and haunt the detective who was in charge of the original investigation.
I think that’s probably enough to give you the general idea of what’s going on here. Featherbank is haunted by it’s terrible past and still holds secrets, Tom is haunted by the loss of his wife and the guilt he feels about not being a good enough parent to his son and Jake is haunted by his imaginary friend and the memories he’s trying to avoid. It’s only a matter of time before things start to unravel. Secrets and lies have a way of coming out – they want to be discovered.
Why did I love this? It’s just an excellent combination of suspense and fear. It’s one of those stories that has you holding your breath while you read – or wanting to hold a cushion in front of your face like you do when you’re watching a movie – everybody does that don’t they? It gets off to a great start, the characters are easy to get along with and there’s this overall sense of menace.
There are a few different POVs which I thought worked really well here, you spend time with Tom, with his son and with two of the detectives and the thing is – all the characters are easy to like. Tom and Jake are very quirky and are only just starting to form a meaningful father/son relationship, they’re both sad and they’re both holding back their feelings from each other. The two detectives were also easy to get on with. One a young ambitious female, keen to learn and desperate to find the missing boy and his abductor before it’s too late and the other a slightly jaded chap who struggles to keep the bottle and his own personal demons at bay. They make a very interesting bunch to read about and I can genuinely say that I enjoyed all the different voices here. No groaning or eye rolling here when the POV chapters switched.
The world building. Well, this is a modern world so there’s no need for extensive world building really. I liked the easy way that Featherbank is brought to life though and also the cunning way that the author actually makes you realise that you never really know what’s going on behind closed doors. It’s a bit of a chilling thought which I really wish hadn’t occurred to me – but now it’s in my head so I thought I’d share it with you – you’re welcome.
In terms of criticisms. Well, I guess there’s a few cliches thrown into the mix – but nothing that was out of control or spoiled my enjoyment. I think the ending was a little bit sudden – but then I think that’s a feeling I quite often experience so I’m starting to think that’s a ‘me’ issue really, maybe I’m a bit greedy and always want more.
Overall though, I can’t fault this. It was a gripping read. There were certain vibes that other readers will no doubt pick up on – can I just say Silence of the Lambs and Sixth Sense – but, at the same time, let me stress that those are really red herrings because this book is nothing like either, more it has whispers of them (see what I did there!) Do I recommend this – oh yes. I hope I’ve not oversold the scary factor here – I know die hard fans will probably take this in their stride but I can genuinely say that this scared me and I definitely advise readers to pick it up during daylight hours. And, on the other hand, readers who are easily scared – well, I’m easily scared too and I thought this was just great so I think you will too.
I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
Rating : 4.5 stars out of 5.
Weekly Wrap Up : 23rd June 2019
Another week just flew by didn’t it. I’m not sure why everything is rushing past me at breakneck speed at the moment but there it is. I can barely remember what we’ve been up to so I’ll move swiftly on. SPFBO5 is very nearly underway – starts at the beginning of July and I’ll be posting about how I plan to handle things this time around – I’ve already posted my covers in preparation for the cover contest and just need to select my three favourites – there are some impressive covers for sure, check them out here. This week I’ve read three books, I did go off plan a little but read two of my scheduled books. The Whisper Man was brilliant, I loved it and in fact it totally creeped me out one night – I was actually scared to go to bed (obviously bear in mind that I’m a raging wuss so it might not be quite as scary for others)! I also read Nocturna and will have a review for that one shortly. It didn’t work out quite as well as I’d hoped but I think that could just be me or a mood thing. Finally, I picked up, Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson – I just couldn’t resist all the glowing feedback it seems to be receiving and so far I’ve been really enjoying it. I should have it finished before this post goes live so that makes a total of three books this week. I did also start an audiobook but then was shockingly forgetful about listening to it whenever the opportunity arose. Oh well, that’s what next week is for I suppose. I’m a little behind with reviews but hoping to catch up with some next week which will make my blog seem a bit busier than normal (assuming I stick to my plans) but I would like to get back on track.
So, here’s what I’ve been reading:
My books:
- The Whisper Man by Alex North
- Nocturna by Maya Motayne
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Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson
Next scheduled reads:
- Storm Cursed by Patricia Briggs
- Priest of Lies by Peter McLean
- Soul of the Sword by Julie Kagawa
Upcoming reviews
- King of the Road by RS Belcher
- Fire Touched by Patricia Briggs
- Silence Fallen by Patricia Briggs
- The Corset by Laura Purcell
- The Whisper Man by Alex North
- Nocturna by Maya Motayne
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Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson
I’d love to know what you’re reading this week.




