Girls with Sharp Sticks (Girls with Sharp Sticks #1) by Suzanne Young
I had a thoroughly good time with Girls with Sharp Sticks. It’s a suspenseful book that kept me racing through the pages with desperation to find out just exactly what was going on. It was so tense and the anticipation had me in it’s grips.
Let’s start at the beginning. We make the introduction of Mena and some of her friends when they’re out on a school trip. It’s immediately obvious that something is a little bit ‘off’ with the girls. They’re so very well behaved, never putting a foot out of place and barely saying a word. Unfortunately rain puts a stop to their outing and they’re all bundled back onto the school bus to return. Along the way, stopping at a petrol station to allow some of the girls a bathroom break, Mena sneaks off to buy candy – something that is strictly forbidden, and she bumps into a young man and stays to chat – something that is even more forbidden! Things quickly go a little bit pear shaped and the school guardian handles Mena very roughly when forcing her to return to the bus. Now, rather than giving the guardian some attitude – which you can more than imagine happening, Mena is devastated by her own bad behaviour and overcome with remorse, not to mention an element of fear that she may be sent for ‘correction’.
The Innovations Academy is a finishing school with a very different agenda. Here the focus is not on achieving brilliant minds but rather on making the girls attractive to look at, well behaved, well mannered and with the right balance of conversation to be an asset to any future partner they may be lucky enough to meet! Doesn’t that just sound swell. The girls have their makeup and hairstyles dictated, they undergo regular fitness regimes to keep them in shape and their food is carefully monitored – well, I say carefully monitored but basically all they’re given to eat is a gloopy green drink (supposedly packed with all the important nutrients) and incredibly bland salads. They’re given ‘vitamin’ pills each night and if their behaviour is anything out of the ordinary, if they question the teachers or appear to act in any way different than the ways dictated by the school they are either given more ‘vitamins’ or sent, as a last resort to be corrected. None of the girls know what happens if they’re sent to the doctor but there seems to be an undercurrent of fear about the whole thing and it’s generally perceived to be something to avoid at all costs.
Now imagine that some of these perfectly behaved girls start to be curious, about boys and other things, their curiosity is usually shut down immediately by the tutors but this really only seems to intensify their curiosity and the school responds accordingly.
Girls with Sharp Sticks is a difficult book to review in too much detail because the potential to spoil the whole read is very real so I’m not going to go further into the plot.
What I particularly liked about this story was the element of suspense. And, in fact not just the suspense but also the girl’s, or at least Mena’s fears which became quite infectious.
So you may be wondering what the girl’s parents were thinking leaving them at such a place – I was certainly wondering why – they’re basically ambitious, they have plans for their girls and this is an elite school with very few places so being granted a slot is so rare that the parents practically bend over backwards to accommodate anything the school wants, turning a blind eye to anything untoward In fact the girls rarely see their parents, just at a number of scheduled school events where patrons of the Academy are also in attendance.
That leads me to the creep factor. The tutors, doctor, head, guardian – well, all the staff at the school, are male – and let’s just say there’s this rather horrifying element of them overstepping the line. It’s just downright cringeworthy in places and incredibly tense and threatening in others. In fact, now is probably a good time to point out that there are a few disturbing scenes so be aware of. Don’t be surprised to find yourself feeling downright angry and uncomfortable at a number of the events as the story progresses.
On top of the suspense and the slowly mounting horror which the author manages to achieve brilliantly is the friendships portrayed here. I can hardly recall reading about a girls school where the students were so nice to each other and it was a really refreshing change to be honest, the feeling of camaraderie and the lack of cliques and bitchiness. It was just refreshing – in fact at every turn I was waiting for somebody to take on the ‘mean girl’ role but it just didn’t happen.
In terms of the world building. To be honest it is slim, there are a few flashbacks but the majority of the story takes place in the school so there isn’t a wider feel for either the time or place. I would say this is set at a point in the near(ish) future. I don’t know whether I’d call it dystopian because I have no real idea at this point about how unique the school really is or whether this manipulation is much more widespread. For now I’ll go for a futuristic thriller and wait to see how things develop.
I don’t have any criticisms. I found this a gripping and fast read. I didn’t second guess the ending although others might have done so, in fact I wasn’t really trying to, I just became so absorbed with what was going on that I never really took the time to consider the what ifs. I was too busy gobbling up the pages desperately trying to find out what would happen next.
So, unusual school, sense of fear – are the girls being brainwashed somehow – what’s it all about? Well, obviously I can’t tell you, if you want to know then you’ll have to grab a copy.
I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publishers, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
The show must go on…
14 May 2019
Filed under Book Reviews
Tags: Movie adaptations, That Artsy Reader Girl, Top Ten Tuesday

Top Ten Tuesday is a weekly meme where every Tuesday we look at a particular topic for discussion and use various (or more to the point ten) bookish examples to demonstrate that particular topic. Top Ten Tuesday (created and hosted by The Broke and Bookish) is now being hosted by That Artsy Reader Girl and future week’s topics can be found here. This week’s topic is:
Page to Screen Freebie
I was going to do a straightforward book to movie adaptation list but I’ve decided instead to use all the prompts provided and give an example of each (if I can). So, here goes and I’ll just mention that I’m going with a lot of obvious ones here:
Books that became movies
Harry Potter by JK Rowlings – this is one of those fine examples of a series of books that have been very well adapted and I adore the movies as much as the books – I know! They’re books that a whole swathe of children grew up with, ageing along with the characters. I loved the increasingly dark feeling of the books and the movies caught that very well and I think the lead characters were excellently chosen.
Books that became TV shows
Game of Thrones by GRRM – bit premature maybe because the series isn’t (quite) finished yet. I have enjoyed this series and had some firm favourite characters – of course, nobody is safe with GRRM so it will be interesting to see the concluding episode! Certainly much drama so far but no spoilers from me!
Movies that became books
Red Riding Hood by Sarah Blakley-Cartwright & David Leslie Johnson. This is a book that I read that was apparently based on the movie. The release of the book was tied into the movie release date and the book was sold without an ending. I remember this quite clearly because the ending was to be made available on the internet – I’m guessing to avoid movie spoilers. As it happened, I didn’t enjoy the book and I didn’t watch the movie – or search out the ending.

Great adaptations
Lord of the Rings by JRRTolkien. I loved these movies. I thought they were really well adapted, the settings were fantastic, the tone was perfect particularly the way it changed as the film progressed. I thought the actors were well chosen and just generally this is a series of films that I could watch over and over.

Bad adaptations
The Hobbit by JRRTolkien – okay, not a bad movie I suppose – in itself – but for me a case of a movie that was changed too much. This is a film that I was really looking forward to – I was surprised that there would be three films from such a relatively slim book – but, I could go for that, three times the fun? Plus, there is a lot of background to Tolkien’s worlds – however, ultimately – remember Bilbo saying that he felt like butter spread too thinly over bread – well, just saying! What I found disappointing with the film was it felt too similar to Lord of the Rings and completely lost the tone and feel of the book itself and it felt like certain elements were changed completely. What brought this into much sharper focus was that I reread the book not long before the movie and so the changes were much more apparent. I’m sure lots of people loved the films, and I can see why, but they didn’t work for me, they didn’t capture the feeling of the Hobbit at all.

Books you need to read before watching the movie
The Goldfinich by Donna Tartt – I’ve read The Secret History and The Little Friend and I did rush out to buy a copy of Goldfinch but just never read it. The thing is – I have to read the book first, otherwise, once I’ve seen the adaptation it’s very rare for me to go back and pick it up.

Books you need to read before watching their tv show
NOS4A2 by Joe Hill – the trailer for this looks great – and be warned, seriously creepy – and I’ve had the book for quite some time so I need to fit it in – otherwise I can never watch the series!!! Doh.

Movies you loved more than the book
It doesn’t happen often but occasionally I enjoy the film more than the book. Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte – this could be a case of watching the film first (which I did and which proves my point about needing to get to the book first) – well, the book didn’t work for me after seeing the film – I just couldn’t get on with it for some reason. There it is – go figure.

Books you loved more than the movie
I am Legend by Richard Matheson. Another example of a good movie that didn’t work for me because of the changes -particularly the end. I won’t say more because their lie spoilers.

Books you wanted to read because you saw the movie
Interview with the Vampire by Anne Rice. I saw the movie first and it made me pick up the book – and in actual fact I enjoyed both – so happy endings all round.

A Brightness Long Ago by Guy Gavriel Kay
This is the first book I’ve read by Guy Gavriel Kay but it certainly won’t be my last. I absolutely loved this. Well, in fairness, when I started out I didn’t think it would be my cup of tea, there are a lot of characters, events and places and much to take on board and I thought I was going to sag under the weight of it all – how very wrong I was. Pretty soon the characters and the intrigue had completely drawn me in and my initial thoughts that this would be a bit ‘heavy’ were brushed away by the excellent storytelling.
A Brightness Long Ago is an unusual story. Influenced by Renaissance Italy and even including a couple of real characters from that period who were long time enemies. Fundamentally this is one man’s recollections of a particularly tumultuous period of his life when he took part in and influenced events and at the same time fell in love.
How to pinpoint what I really liked about this. It’s difficult to narrow down. The writing is thoughtful and thought provoking. There are a number of characters that I just loved but more than that it seems to really capture the essence of a period in history that was passionate, tumultuous, chaotic and often violent. This was a time when life was cheap, when mercenaries were called to arms on an almost regular basis, and when feuds seemed to take on a life of their own.
The story is primarily told by Danio Cerra, a young man of promise who’s intelligence secured him a place at a prestigious school and led to a position working for a nobleman referred to as the ‘Beast’. While Danio’s first post was fairly short lived it brought him love and fear and shaped his future.
I won’t elaborate further on the plot. This isn’t a story of good vs evil, we don’t have a hero trying to save the world in fact this is more a series of events, not always connected but brought together by the people in focus and the way in which their lives cross and influence one another. The thing is, that probably sounds a little bit underwhelming and yet it really isn’t. This is very much a character driven novel and it works incredibly well.
Let’s look at some of the characters. Danio. A young man of intelligence who is given a good start in life, in spite of his fairly humble background, when he gains a place at a prestigious school. I liked Danio. It would be difficult not to like him. He’s young and inexperienced in ways, he certainly isn’t a warrior and is refreshingly honest about his own limitations in that respect, but he can think fast and improvise. The other characters are Adria, a young woman of noble birth who was definitely born in the wrong period – she’s wonderful, outspoken, fearless – she’s a great addition to be honest and probably my favourite character. Adria likes to ride and to fight, she enjoys danger in fact and is a great character to read about and her uncle Folco gives her the opportunity to serve him as spy and assassin giving her a level of freedom that she never expected. Folco is the lifelong enemy of Teobaldo. Both former military leaders, now Lords, their lives constantly teeter on the brink of violence and bloodshed as if there wasn’t already enough of this with the constant fear of invasion. The two of them are devoured by this rift – but their actions almost feel like a well choreographed dance at times, they come together and beat their chests, there’s something of a standoff, they part ways and then repeat a year later although it appears that the stakes are being raised. There are other characters that play key roles, notably a young woman who is a healer with a love of travel who also finds her life intersecting in memorable ways with the above and another young noble who is something of a dandy until a close brush with death teaches him to reevaluate.
The writing is excellent. I really can’t fault it. The characters were well rounded and the world was established step by step as the story unfolded. In fact, considering everything that’s going on here and the breadth of intrigue the author makes it feel deceptively easy to understand and is even more impressive when you consider that the timeline jumps back and forth. In fact, I must make mention of a horse race that takes place. An unusual race where a number of riders are randomly selected to represent different districts within the city. The race is an old tradition and rife with underhand tactics, scheming and danger. The rivalry is intense and the description of the race itself is absolutely gripping. I was on the edge of my seat. What trickery is this – how on earth did this horse race turn into something that had me glued to the page.
Anyway, I’ll leave it there. I heartily recommend A Brightness Long Ago. It’s an excellent read packed to the gills with interesting characters influenced by a period in history that was volatile and often full of drama. This is fairly low in terms of fantasy, there is mention of ghosts/spirits etc but no magic as such.
I enjoyed this so much that I raced to the end – and then felt bereft that it was all over. I had the urge to immediately go back to the beginning to see what I’d missed in my haste and also the desire to go and delve into the period of history that inspired this piece of work. Just to be sure and in case I’ve been too subtle in this review I thoroughly enjoyed this and look forward to reading more by Guy Gavriel Kay in fact I can now look forward to looking back at some of his previous books.
I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
Weekly Wrap Up : 12th May 2019
I have had a blast this week. Lots going on and plenty of walking and reading. I’ve read four books and really enjoyed them. A Brightness Long ago and Westside were absolutely stand out books that I really enjoyed – in fact I was sorry to see them end and I’m absolutely loving Belcher’s Brotherhood of the Wheel books – will there be more, curious minds need to know?? Of course, lots of reading does mean I’m slightly behind with reviews so I’ll hopefully be posting a few over the next few days. So, here’s my week in review:
My books:
- Dark Shores by Danielle L. Jensen
- Westside by WM Akers
- A Brightness Long Ago by Guy Gavriel Kay
- King of the Road by RS Belcher
Next week’s reads:
- The Poison Song by Jen Williams
- We Ride the Storm by Devin Madson
- Orconomics by J Zachary Pike
Upcoming reviews
- Girls with Sharp Sticks by Suzanne Young
- The Gods of Men by Barbara Kloss
- Dark Shores by Danielle L. Jensen
- Westside by WM Akers
- A Brightness Long Ago by Guy Gavriel Kay
- King of the Road by RS Belcher
I’d love to know what you’re reading this week.
Wyrd and Wonder: Stunning Debut : Westside by WM Akers

(May is the month of Wyrd and Wonder – details here, Twitter: @wyrdandwonder)
The month of May is full of Wyrd and Wonder and today’s prompt is ‘Stunning Debut’.
I’ve just finished reading Westside by WM Akers and I absolutely loved it, my review isn’t posted yet but I wanted to share the love of this book with everyone and today’s prompt is the perfect opportunity. This is a story that marries mystery, urban fantasy and 1920’s prohibition New York. The setting is a divided city and the atmosphere is reminiscent of Gangs of New York. It gave me a Gaiman/Lynch vibe in the portrayal of other worldliness and the criminal underworld. A definite 5 out of 5 star read for me.
Here’s the synopsis and cover:
A young detective who specializes in “tiny mysteries” finds herself at the center of a massive conspiracy in this beguiling historical fantasy set on Manhattan’s Westside—a peculiar and dangerous neighborhood home to strange magic and stranger residents—that blends the vivid atmosphere of Caleb Carr with the imaginative power of Neil Gaiman.
New York is dying, and the one woman who can save it has smaller things on her mind.
It’s 1921, and a thirteen-mile fence running the length of Broadway splits the island of Manhattan, separating the prosperous Eastside from the Westside—an overgrown wasteland whose hostility to modern technology gives it the flavor of old New York. Thousands have disappeared here, and the respectable have fled, leaving behind the killers, thieves, poets, painters, drunks, and those too poor or desperate to leave.
It is a hellish landscape, and Gilda Carr proudly calls it home.
Slightly built, but with a will of iron, Gilda follows in the footsteps of her late father, a police detective turned private eye. Unlike that larger-than-life man, Gilda solves tiny mysteries: the impossible puzzles that keep us awake at night; the small riddles that destroy us; the questions that spoil marriages, ruin friendships, and curdle joy. Those tiny cases distract her from her grief, and the one impossible question she knows she can’t answer: “How did my father die?”
Yet on Gilda’s Westside, tiny mysteries end in blood—even the case of a missing white leather glove. Mrs. Copeland, a well-to-do Eastside housewife, hires Gilda to find it before her irascible merchant husband learns it is gone. When Gilda witnesses Mr. Copeland’s murder at a Westside pier, she finds herself sinking into a mire of bootlegging, smuggling, corruption—and an evil too dark to face.
All she wants is to find one dainty ladies’ glove. She doesn’t want to know why this merchant was on the wrong side of town—or why he was murdered in cold blood. But as she begins to see the connection between his murder, her father’s death, and the darkness plaguing the Westside, she faces the hard truth: she must save her city or die with it.
Introducing a truly remarkable female detective, Westside is a mystery steeped in the supernatural and shot through with gunfights, rotgut whiskey, and sizzling Dixieland jazz. Full of dazzling color, delightful twists, and truly thrilling action, it announces the arrival of a remarkable talent.




