His Own Good Sword by Amanda McCrina
10 March 2015
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Tags: Amanda McCrina, His Own Good Sword, Mark Lawrence, Self Published Fantasy Blog Off
His Own Good Sword gets underway the first of my reviews for the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off, brainchild of Mark Lawrence (in collaboration with Bookworm Blues) the details of which are here.
I randomly chose His Own Good Sword to start off with and actually I was pleasantly surprised with this book. It did get off to a little bit of a slow start but I soon became quite intrigued with the story of Tyren Risto.
This is very much what I would describe as alternative history with the Roman-like Varenos having conquered the Cesins. This has been far from a smooth occupation and over the years a number of rebellions have flared up. At the start of the story Tyren, second son to the noble Risto family, has been sent his new commission. Unfortunately he’s been posted to Souvin, not only an outlying backwater but something of an insult to the Ristos. It turns out that the Ristos have a long standing history of bad blood with the powerful Marro family and following a spat between Tyren and one of the Marros this Commission is a demonstration of just how powerful that family have become.
There are two strands to the story. Tyren’s posting in Souvin and the difficulties he encounters there in terms of rebellion and potential uprising and the story of the Risto family and the political maneouvering taking place behind the scenes to undermine not only them but the Senate itself.
I guess I’d call this something of a gentle read and I suppose what I really mean by that is that it crept up on me unexpectedly. Also, although the story involves conflict and bloodshed it’s not particularly violent or gory. The details of the fighting and injuries are almost delivered in a calm and measured tone. I don’t mean to underplay it by describing it that way – just that it has a realistic feel but narrated in a non-dramatic style. I liked, for example, the fact that during battle Tyren does become exhausted and the injuries he sustains have a real impact that knock him out for days and continue to cause him problems even later in the story.
We read primarily from the POV of Tyren with occasional chapters being led by his father Torian and this helps the plot to unfold in a fairly easy to follow style with a view on the bigger picture rather than focusing only on the potential uprising in Souvin.
I would say the story is primarily character led with Tyren being the main protagonist and quite a good supporting cast although that isn’t to underplay the plot which builds subtly to become quite compelling. The world building is fairly low key – not a problem although I thought it could have been added to a little just to give it a bit more flavour.
In terms of criticisms. Well, the pacing was a little slow and the dialogue felt a bit unpolished, particularly at the start of the story. Also, I did at times feel a bit put out with Tyren – he certainly didn’t make the best decisions and his lack of foresight and naivety proved costly to quite a few others – I sort of tempered this with the fact that he’s an idealistic 19 year old finding himself in charge of a garrison soldiered by older and more cynical men. I was also a bit perplexed with Tyren’s sudden liking for one of the rebel women – it just felt like it came out of nowhere and wasn’t entirely believable. I would say it took me a little while to become truly invested in the story but once I did it was definitely a good read and to be honest one that I would continue with.
The other thing I would mention is that if you’re expecting any fantasy elements in terms of dragons, swords or sorcery or unusual characters with pointy ears then you may be disappointed (well, not on the sword front maybe). This story is fantasy purely by dint of it being completely fictional. In other words it isn’t a work of fiction set in Rome and based on the wars and deeds of that time and place. The entire place, people and wars are fictitious.
I think that if you enjoy alternate history, particularly when based on the Roman Empire with politics, conflict and underhanded behaviour together with a protagonist who hasn’t yet proved himself but looks set to take events further with plenty of potential for development then this could be for you. I would continue with the series as I’m curious as to where it will go next.
I think this was a good start to the SPFBO
And in other news…..
6 March 2015
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Tags: Events, Killer Crime Festival 2015, Killer Reads, Maria Snyder, Mark Lawrence
This is a quick round up of a number of things that are ‘out there’ that you might or might not be interested in.
Firstly, Mark Lawrence has arranged this.… and I’m taking part. Yay and Eek all in one – so, Yeek! Lots of other excellent posts out there about this event including:
Fantasy Faction, bookworm blues, Beauty in Ruins – okay that’s enough!! I won’t list them all
Bit late this but: HarperCollins Publishers and Waterstones launch the Killer Crime Festival 2015; the only combined virtual and traditional literary festival in the UK.
If you want to sign up for a virtual free ticket look here: and if you’re tweeting about general crime in general during the event use: #KillerFest15.
On top of this : Killer Reads is inviting submissions from across the crime genre, ranging from police procedurals to psychological thrillers, to high-concept thrillers and beyond. From 13th March Writers can submit their full manuscript, a synopsis of their novel and an author biography, by emailing: killerreadssubs@harpercollins.co.uk from 13th March and the inbox will remain active to 19th April – so if you’ve got a manuscript fitting this criteria, plus (all entered novels must be complete, written in English and at least 70,000 words long. For full terms and conditions please visit www.killerreads.com) Don’t hesitate – get your manuscript in!!!
Just in case you wanted to know – spreading the word etc etc
Also, for the UK folks, I understand that the lovely Maria V Snyder will shortly be taking a tour of the UK – I’ll certainly be looking out for her dates and venues and will keep you posted and if you would like to reciprocate – then thank you kindly!
That is all for me. I have a good book and a glass of wine and I’m not afraid to partake of either.
Have a lovely weekend.
Are you a future classic???
3 February 2015
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Tags: Classics Club, Classics from the year 2000 onwards, Mark Lawrence, The Broken Empire

This month at the Classics Club the monthly question is:
What about modern classics? Pick a book published since 2000 and say why you think it will be considered as a “classic” in the future.
This is a tough question because I have a number of books that I could think of in terms of future classics. So, it was undoubtedly a question that provoked a bit of turmoil for me! And, I think my choice may seem irregular being a grimdark fantasy series – however, fantasy has a large place in the classics and this is one of the ways that it’s being revamped giving it a darker edge and more modern feel. I’m not going to go into a deep and meaningful essay here – I’ve given my points in brief and I’ve chosen a recent fantasy trilogy that I really enjoyed – let me know what you’d choose please!
I’m going to go for the Broken Empire by Mark Lawrence (Prince, King and Emperor of Thorns). Below is my reasoning:
- Firstly, and most importantly, I loved this series.
- I had a number of candidates for this. I love The Name of the Wind and Wise Man’s Fear, for example, and think they will definitely become classics, however, the Patrick Rothfuss series isn’t finished yet so I don’t think I can reasonably put it forward – and in this respect the same goes for The Stormlight series by Brandon Sanderson and The Gentleman Bastards by Scott Lynch. I’m sure they’ll ALL be classics but they are as yet unfinished.
- Three is a lucky number – three books in this series and three books in Lord of the Rings!! You just have to love a trilogy. Yes?
- New to me – grimdark is relatively new to me and I would say Mark Lawrence was my first introduction. Another reason for me feeling all the love for this series. Now, I realise that there are other series written in a similar style, but, like I said this is the first for me.
- I like the way that Jorg grows up as the series progresses. I also like the style of jumping back in time to see some of his earlier memories. You might think this would take you out of the story but it’s actually a great way to find out his back story without a huge info dump or writing the story in a more traditional timeline style.
- It’s very well thought through in such a way that when you reach certain stretches of the story and things are revealed they definitely have the ‘wow’ factor.
- Jorg – I do like this character. Okay, he’s not your typical hero – in fact he’s all anti-hero. But you will end up in his corner.
- I think there’s a fine line between too much detail and not enough. Now, I love Tolkien but some people think he’s overly descriptive (not I). I think the Broken Empire succeeds in a good balance between character development, plot and world building. It’s easy to imagine the setting and the places which all seem very familiar but with a twist.
- The three books in the series have been on mine (and plenty of others) ‘best of’ lists come the end of the year. I like all three books. There was no ‘middle book’ syndrome. In fact, I would say that the books got progressively better!
- It’s the classic Good vs Evil – I mean, you wouldn’t necessarily call Jorg ‘good’ but in terms of this story he’s definitely the lesser of two evils!
- I would reread this – if and when I ever got the time! And I think that’s a good indication of a book’s real worth – if you’re prepared to reread it!
- I think it would also make a very good readalong for people who want to have more detailed discussion because there’s no shortage of things to talk about!



So, what would your choice be???
Prince of Fools by Mark Lawrence
19 May 2014
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Tags: book No.1, Mark Lawrence, Prince of Fools, Red Queen's War
Just finished reading Prince of Fools (PoF) by Mark Lawrence – who is definitely becoming one of those authors that I simply must read and eagerly anticipate his next in series.
Now, the next few sentences, I’ve unashamedly stolen because I don’t want to go too much into detail plotwise (and also I think you just need to read it yourself):
“The Red Queen is old but the kings of the Broken Empire fear her as they fear no other.
Her grandson Jalan Kendeth is a coward, a cheat and a womaniser; and tenth in line to the throne. While his grandmother shapes the destiny of millions, Prince Jalan pursues his debauched pleasures. Until he gets entangled with Snorri ver Snagason, a huge Norse axe man, and dragged against his will to the icy north.”
I’m sure that I’m not the first, and probably won’t be the last to say this but I approached this book with almost equal measures of anticipation, expectation and trepidation. After all, this isn’t Jorg but it is the Broken Empire and I wondered if ML could work his magic again or whether Jal might become a little bit like Jorg in disguise. I don’t think I can deny that when I started reading I was thinking of Jorg. Then I mentally slapped himself as frankly I don’t think it’s fair to an author to have that mindset when you’re reading the next new series. Of course you compare, it’s inevitable, but I wanted to give this the same opportunity as I would have if I’d never read any of ML’s books before – so, yes, mental slapping went on! It may be that some people see similarities between the two but fortunately for me this wasn’t the case. The only similarities that I found was the consistency of the writing, the creativity and the sense of humour that ML undoubtedly manages to inject into some fairly dire situations.
So, we return to the Broken Empire but we not only go back for a visit but we also go back in time and look at things not only from a different kingdom but from a time when Jorg was still on his path of vengeance. We enter the realm of the Red Queen, a woman of iron – but then, seriously, she wouldn’t be ruling in this realm if she wasn’t. At the start of the story, apart from being introduced to Jal as he escapes a compromising situation, all the Queen’s family have been summoned. She’s brought them together to talk to them of grim portents for the future and doors that are opening that should remain closed. Of course, Jal, with his mind on other things is barely listening.
To the characters. Jal is basically a coward and a womaniser. Throw in a bit of gambling, creativity with the truth and the ability to whack a man over the back of the head (when he’s not looking) and you have something of his measure. However, as you find out as you read on, you don’t have the full measure. Jalan is his own worst critic and as the story gains momentum you come to understand that he’s got more to him that he would have you believe. Yes, he wants out of the situation he’s in particularly if it’s a bit hair raising, and occasionally he tries to think of the easiest way to do so, but on the whole he’s not as bad as he likes to make out (and a LOT of people would try and find the easier way out of a tricky situation if they could)! He’s known as a hero in his heartland due to falling into a spot of bother whilst trying to run away from another. But, really, don’t be fooled by Jal’s own self evaluation. Read it and see. Now, on top of this, we have another character who Jal travels with, well becomes inextricably linked with is probably more to the point! Snorri ver Snagason – a gigantic norseman with an axe to grind – and literally he does have an axe – and is on a rescue mission. I could give a little air punch here but you won’t see it so I’ll just say that this story has Vikings!!! And, need I really say more. I really liked Snorri – he’s a great big no nonsense character. He smiles at trouble and definitely laughs in the face of impossible odds. I just loved him down to his (probably) furry boots and his grisly beard. Woof!
The setting – well, we are back to the Broken Empire but in a strange sort of way I felt like I visited more of it in this book than with Jorg. That could be true, or I could just be mislead but this particular plot feels a lot more vast in scope and seems to range far and wide taking in many landscapes! The two of them trek from here to there and then from there to here. Sometimes they get caught up in fights. Occasionally they have horses to ride. There are skirmishes along the way. There are shady characters and even Jorg makes a surprise appearance.
In terms of the writing – ML undoubtedly has a gift with words. He can make you feel comfortable with a character or envision a setting with ease. He doesn’t info dump and his writing flows in a very easy to read fashion.
Without a doubt, what made this novel so good for me was the fact that it almost feels like old school fantasy. We have Jal and Snorri bound on an adventure. Sometimes they find inns along the way, quite often they find trouble and they also find friendship. On top of that I found myself caring about both characters which I think is an accomplishment in itself. Old school-modern style. It of course has a few unexpected twists along the way and for your entertainment there are witches, circuses, fortune tellers and zombie type soldiers.
I received a copy of this book through the publishers. The above is my own opinion and I would certainly recommend this book to fantasy lovers.
I am submitting this for my Once Upon a Time event over at Stainless Steel Droppings and also my 100 books challenge.
Emperor of Thorns by Mark Lawrence
18 July 2013
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Tags: dark fantasy, Emperor of Thorns, Grimdark, King of Thorns, Mark Lawrence, Prince of Thorns
Mark Lawrence is the author who brought to us Prince and then King of Thorns. Both excellent reads. The first book a quite unique experience for me in fantasy and the second which I felt actually surpassed it! (No small achievement) So I confess I went into Emperor with a certain amount of trepidation about whether or not the author could pull the rabbit out of the hat yet again. Personally I think he managed to pull not only a rabbit out of the hat but a long line of knotted hankies and a bunch of other random magical props! I loved it and in fact would go so far as to say it is the perfect way to conclude the series.
How to begin. If you’re reading this review you’ve probably already read the first two books and so the violence and bloodshed that make up a part of Jorg’s life are more than likely known to you. If you haven’t, what the hell are you doing here – get out right now and go and read these in sequence. Believe me when I say you can’t join this story half way along in some half ditched attempt to find out what’s going on. Get thee to the beginning!
Okay, I always try to write a review that doesn’t contain spoilers and this review will be no different. Obviously with the proviso that a review of a third book is actually already spoilery before you even put pen to paper! The very fact that there are sequels clearly means that the lead character has survived thus far after all.
So, again, with Emperor we have a dual time line taking place. Jorg has grown a little older but we still flit to his earlier self. He’s just as ambitious as he ever was and still equally afraid of the memories he carries around with him (quite literally). His father remains the only person who can instill fear in him – something that never happens to Jorg at any other point or with any other foe no matter how terrible. Looking at the current time line, Jorg’s wife is pregnant. He still thinks occasionally of Catherine but he’s now set his sights on attending the meeting of the 100 and becoming Emperor. He’s going to this meeting of his peers and he’s determined that nothing will stand in his way (and knowing Jorg you kind of think he’ll make it happen). In Jorg’s younger timeline he’s travelling the world in search of knowledge and also support. Led on by the ghost of one of the builders from the past he goes from pillar to post – almost without knowing it being led by the nose – and yet even under those circumstances never failing to cause surprises and manipulate even the most dire circumstances to his advantage along the way.
As with the last book you need to think of the bigger picture. It may feel at points as though you’re simply reading a little anecdote from here or there. A faint reminisence of something from Jorg’s past. But this isn’t the case. The stories are, of course, all entertaining by themselves but this isn’t the overall intention so take note. Lawrence is the master of looking at the whole and nothing contained within these pages is unnecessary. Every word plays a part. Lawrence wrote a masterful story and then deconstructed it in such a way to make it both incredibly compelling and much more difficult to second guess than if it was told in a linear fashion. This may seem like a fairly simple plot device, or even like a lack of straightforwardness but for me it made all three books riveting. That’s not to say that I didn’t sometimes feel like growling when I was dragged away from the current story, just as it reached a critical scene, to be taken either backwards or forwards to another part of Jorg’s timeline. And yet, no matter how begrudgingly I might tear myself away before I knew it I was completely immersed in the new story which then seemed to gain equally compelling status. To be honest Jorg’s stories are gripping and in this final instalment we get to see so much more of his inner emotions. The more human side of him if you will. I’m not trying to say he’s become a bit of a simpering faint heart but he has developed. He longs for certain friendships, he doesn’t really love his wife but he cares for her in his own way, he’s scared to be a father. On the flip side of course, and just in case you’re getting all worried round about now, he’s still a raging psychopath who stabs and beheads people first and asks questions later. I’m not saying it’s big or clever but the way in which this is done never really gives you much sympathy for the victims because they’re frankly usually pretty horrendous and the sort who you can’t help thinking he’s doing his world a favour in getting rid of. Okay, there are a few victims who you have a degree of sympathy for, who are simply in the wrong place at the wrong time but I think Lawrence has a reason for all this. Put simply I love what Lawrence has done with all of these individual threads. Basically I think that in writing a character such as Jorg there are very few limits. He will do and say virtually anything and as a reader you’re never quite sure what to expect. You still hang on in there each time a new situation arises and foolishly expect Jorg to act in a typical fashion and of course he never does and this is his surprise. This must be such a liberating experience for the author.
The other thing that I loved in this last instalment is the resolution and the coming together of the story in a way that leaves you no internal niggles. The answers to all the ‘whys’ and ‘wherefores’. Okay, I’m not talking about a straightforward show and tell here. But, as far as I’m concerned every piece slotted into place for the grand finale. Unlike that really annoying puzzle where you get to the end and there’s a piece missing, or, the bookshelf you’re putting up only to find you have a piece missing, or more worrying a few pieces left over. This all comes together like a symphony. Taken individually and the pieces might be pleasing to listen to, interesting or amusing even but put them all together, the full orchestra and now you’re listening to something amazing that will for a moment make you sit perfectly still and listen, take you some place else.
So, as a fairly brief synopsis we have a convergence of worlds here. As in previous worlds the veil between things living and dead has grown thin. The Dark King and his necromancers, also not content with their lot in life and equally as ambitious as Jorg, are crossing that veil. The other rulers are also all trying their hand for the ultimate prize. Jorg, blood thirsty and afraid of nothing is marching forward with his retinue and another faction, not previously acknowledged as a threat, now enter the fray – the ghosts of builders past. They’re all going to come together for an explosive ending. It’s a brave ending and I think it’s perfectly fitting not to mention has a couple of twists that I didn’t see until they were upon me. It’s obvious that ML had an amazing time writing this character and threw convention to the wind and it makes it a great reading experience. As a result Jorg is unlike any character I’ve ever read before. He’s terrible but in such a way that I still want to like him! That’s just so wrong isn’t it?
Be in no doubt though – there is violence here not to mention other scenes such as torture that some people may find uncomfortable to read. You’ve been warned.
End result. A great trilogy. Dark fantasy at it’s grimmest and an absolute must read.



