SPFBO – Finalist
19 August 2015
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Tags: Mark Lawrence, Self Published Fantasy Blog Off, SPFBO
For the past few months I’ve been taking part in the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off. This idea was hit upon by Mark Lawrence and brings together 10 bloggers, each undertaking to read 25-27 books submitted by self published authors with a view to putting forward one book from their pile. The 10 books that are then put forward will then be read by each blogger and scored and eventually an overall winner will be hit upon. The full details are here.
In today’s post I’m announcing my overall winner. I’m probably doing things a little back to front here because I haven’t reviewed the book yet (or a number of the other books that I actually completed). This is simply because I focused on completing the task in front of me and in particular on finding my ‘one’ book.
I can say that this has been a very difficult challenge for me for a number of reasons. I hate being critical – I really do! And yet I have a list of books and only one to take forward. This certainly acted as a motivation in making me focus. Also, I think writing a book and putting your labour of love forward for an event such as this must be really tough and I appreciate that and don’t want to discourage anybody.
What I can say about the books submitted on my list – I had some enjoyable reads here – in fact probably more than I expected (which was something of an eye opener and a revelation) Maybe I wasn’t as open minded about self published books as I thought and in that respect I think this challenge has been a learning curve.
In terms of the reading I didn’t complete all the books and this wasn’t necessarily because I didn’t enjoy them but more because I already knew that they would not be the book I put forward for one reason or another. In total I completed 10 books – I’ve already written a short review for a couple of those plus a full review for one of the others. The others I intend to write reviews for over the next few days starting with my finalist. I think I gave all the books submitted a very fair chance but at the end of the day the book I chose just stood out for me as up until that point I was undecided about which book I had enjoyed the most.
I would like to thank all the authors who submitted books for this challenge and hope that none of you are discouraged at all, at the end of the day I had to be fairly hard in terms of elimination. Put simply, some of the books were not my style, or maybe felt aimed at a younger target audience and some I had issues with the writing style that didn’t particularly work for me.
My finalist for this round:
The Weight of a Crown by Tavish Kaeden – review to follow.
The other books that I read fully but have not yet reviewed:
- Iduna by Maya Michaels
- The Duchess of the Shallows by Neil McGarry & Daniel Ravipinto
- Forging Divinity by Andrew Rowe
- In the Dark by Melody Taylor
- Thief of Hope by Cindy Young-Turner
- Blade of the Broken by Jake Scholl
The following three books I’ve already either reviewed or given a short write up of.
- Naming the Bane by Kal S Davian
- Klondaeg the Monster Hunter by Steve Thomas
- His Own Good Sword by Amanda McCrina review here
The Liar’s Key by Mark Lawrence


The Liar’s Key by Mark Lawrence is the second instalment in the Red Queen’s War trilogy that once again follows in the footsteps of two of fantasy’s most unlikely companions in Prince Jalan Kendeth and Snorri ver Snagason. I’ve eagerly awaited this and it didn’t disappoint.
The story begins as Snorri and Jal take a somewhat less than cheerful departure from the Northern town in which they’ve been Winter bound. Whilst Jal dreams of returning to his sun soaked home and jumping back into his former hedonistic lifestyle Snorrie has other ideas and ultimately, the two being connected by strange magic, and Snorri having a mission of sorts, it looks like Jal’s desires will meet with temporary suspension. Joined by the one remaining member of Snorri’s clan, Tuttugu, the three set sail on a dark quest. Snorri has designs to use the magical key that he now owns to unlock the Gates to the Underworld and recover his family. This key is very powerful, it can open any doors, it was forged by a trickster however and it is ultimately sought by others. Snorri’s road is certainly not going to be an easy one to travel – along the way there will be magic, necromancy, trolls and huge wolves, plus running away.
As I mentioned in my review of Prince of Fools this series has an old school feel to it in that we have a group of people on a journey encountering hardship and difficulties along the way and sprinkled with laughs and a few lighter moments. Once again we traverse, by boat and on foot, the strange landscape of the Broken Empire stopping in at villages and climbing mountains – all the while whilst being hounded by armies and beasts. Snorri, Jal and Tuttugu barely keep one step ahead as they undertake the first leg of their journey and try to discover where the door to the Kingdom of the Underworld s located.
So, being the second in series we’re already familiar with the world and the characters that inhabit it and similar to the first instalment Liar’s Key involves a good deal of travelling – an aspect that I thoroughly enjoy. We set off in search of a ‘wise woman’ or Volva and in doing so pick up a new character – Kara. Apprenticed to a Volva herself Kara is an interesting combination of strange magical ability and not quite trustworthy intentions. She’s an interesting character to read about – she doesn’t succumb to Jal’s charms and neither does she enjoy the visitations that Jal and Snorri receive from Aslaug and Baraquel. She’s a cunning one and one that bears watching as she may have her own personal agenda in joining this mission but it was certainly refreshing to have her along as she broke up the dynamic somewhat and livened up the interactions between the group. We are also joined by a young boy whose father dies when becoming embroiled with the army following in Snorri and Jal’s wake.
In terms of Jal and Snorri. Well, Jal is still his own worst critic, part of what he says of course is true – womaniser, liar and coward and yet at the same time in spite of that he frequently seems to come to the rescue – even if sometimes it seems to be in the most outlandish way possible. He also brings a much needed injection of humour into some of the darker situations with his wriggling and cowardly behaviour. You can’t help liking him to be honest and more to the point it’s interesting to see what he will come up with to try and get out of a tricky spot. Snorri – I felt was different in this novel. It may be simply because he’s under a curse of sorts and is incredibly driven or that he doesn’t have quite as much page time in this instalment but for me he lost a little of what made him enjoyable in Prince of Fools. He’s still a great character but he simply wasn’t as imposing this time around. It felt as though he was becoming a little darker somehow. Not to mention you can’t help question the whole logic of what he’s trying to do – seriously, what is he thinking? Don’t get me wrong, I still like him – but he’s definitely a little different.
What I really love about this book, and for that matter the last, is the quality of the writing and the overall vision of the story arc. I’m not going to deny that this is quite a hefty book to read and not a book that you’re going to race through. This book needs to be read in a way that makes you savour the story. There’s a lot to take in, there’s a lot that happens and there are a number of flashbacks that give us a deeper look into Jal’s childhood and the early beginnings of the Red Queen and the Silent Sister and all of it deserves close attention.
This is a great second book in the series. Lawrence takes what we already know and with his own inimitable style continues to layer extra goodness on top. The characters adapt and develop as the tale progresses. The worldbuilding is thoughtful and continuous. We revisit the Broken Empire yet still manage to maintain a standalone series written in a very different style to the first series by this author.
The only problem now is the wait for the final piece of the puzzle in the Red Queen’s War which promises to be dark indeed.
I received a copy of this from the author. The above is my own opinion.
SPFBO Update
3 April 2015
Filed under Book Reviews
Tags: Mark Lawrence, Self Published Fantasy Blog Off, SPFBO
I’m currently taking part in the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off – details of which are here. I’m going to write a few updates as I go along regarding the books I’ve so far attempted. Some of the books just simply won’t be my cup of tea but I’m going to give a short write up for those because they may work for others and try and make sense of why they didn’t work out for me. Some I might not finish Some I might finish but won’t necessarily be carrying them foward. There are 27 books on my list, I won’t be fully reviewing all of them but I want to be fair to the books and the authors so will give some kind of synopsis plus links to the books and, if it was a book that didn’t work for me, try and outline briefly why not.
Books read so far:
- Amanda McCrina – His Own Good Sword – review here
- Wayne Miller – The Dung Ball Chronicle – DNF
- Steve Thomas – Klondaeg the Monster Hunter
- Jack Kerr – Tommy Black and the Staff of Light – DNF
- T.C Pearce – Into the Aether – DNF
- Kal S Davian – Naming the Bane
His Own Good Sword by Amanda McCrina – This was my first read and a good start. My review is above.
The Dung Ball Chronicle by Wayne Miller
Unfortunately I didn’t finish this particular story. It’s an unusual tale and I’ve cut and paste part of the description from Goodreads: ‘The narrator is John Densch, a frustrated husband, father and low-level technocrat who starts the whole ball rolling with a joke about a “bog monster.” We meet his wife, Doreen, who wants so badly for John to move beyond the imaginary ensnaring him, but finds that everything comes with a price; Bollum, a voice in young John’s head that told him tales of alien abduction and of a technological utopia for humanity, albeit one with an expiration date; and Derek, an abductee trapped on Bug World, at first a character in Bollum’s tales, but in time an alternate existence for John.’
As I said this was an unusual story. Unfortunately it just didn’t quite work for me, it could be a mood thing on my part but I was simply unable to become absorbed in the story and I was doing that thing where, when you’re not really loving your current read, you become really ambivalent about picking the book back up. I must admit I don’t like giving up on a story but sometimes you simply have to acknowledge that the book isn’t working for you and that was the case here. I probably read about a quarter of the story.
Klondaeg the Monster Hunter by Steve Thomas
Klondaeg is a dwarf with revenge on his mind. When he was a young dwarf his parents were killed by a monster and now he wants to rid the world of all other monsters. He carries with him a split personality, talking axe called King’s Rest. In case you were in doubt this is a bit of a tongue in cheek collection of short adventures starring Klondaeg. Klondaeg flits about from one mini adventure to the next killing all manner of monsters along the way. He ends up with a strange collection of characters joining him on his travels as he tries to uncover the monster that killed his mother and father and even visits with a God in an attempt to reverse a prophecy.
This was okay and I did complete the book – I’m not going to say I loved it or that I had no issues but it was a lighthearted story with the emphasis more on fun. If you want to scrutinise the finer detail or are looking for something a bit deeper or with more character development then this probably isn’t for you but if you want a tongue in cheek, fun adventure with a bit of a madcap character then you may like this one.
Tommy Black and the Staff of Light by Jack Kerr
I would describe Tommy Black as a coming of age story – probably aimed at middle graders. Tommy travels through a number of adventures whilst coming to terms with the existence of magic and his own inheritance in that respect. Tommy has lived in ignorance of magic, protected by his grandfather. At the start of the story he’s about to have his eyes opened and from there things are going to become very strange very fast. Whilst I didn’t actually finish this I will say it shows quite a lot of promise. I don’t think I’m really the target audience and therefore for me personally I found myself with a few niggles – I read almost half so there’s always the possibility that these could have been all wrapped up by the conclusion but like I said I don’t think I’m really the target audience for this one. I think my main issue here was that we have Tommy – and then we have people with knowledge that they could pass to him but instead of doing so there was a sort of ‘we need to talk’ statement – usually followed by ‘after you’ve slept/I’ve slept, we’ve eaten’, etc, If that was me – no, you’d be having that talk now. Like I say, that’s just me, and doubtless that would have been cleared up later in the story but, it wasn’t as though the ‘talks’ were being delayed because everyone was running for their lives, that would be fair enough but to constantly put things off when there seems to be plenty of time to discuss them just feels a bit like a clunky plot device because the author doesn’t yet want to relate those things to the readers – like I said, above – not really aimed at me so my niggles may be unfounded and as I said this shows a lot of promise.
This is an original storyline that brings together quite a few different elements. We start with a young girl who can walk into and out of people’s dreams. We meet a man on a plane who seems to be of interest to more than one different party and finds himself being almost abducted by something that is a bit demonic and we meet another woman who seems to have premonitions of future events. There’s a lot to tie together with a strange world living hidden alongside our own.
I got off to a good start with this but then ultimately found myself struggling a little – I’ve read just under 50% so I do think I’ve given it a good shot. I don’t dislike it and in fact may read on just to satisfy my curiosity but I’m finding myself irritated with certain things and they’re just giving me a mental block. For now, I’ve put it to one side just simply because of the issues that I was finding irritating but I may pick it back up and give it a little more time. This certainly isn’t a badly written story and it has a fairly original (to me) concept. I think my main issue is the way that some of the people act which doesn’t always come across as believable but simply convenient for the plot – Lara’s mother is a prime example of this although I sometimes feel that the parents in YA books can often be a bit unreal. Again, as with the Jack Kerr book above I don’t really think I’m the target audience here so my irritation could be simply that. Like I said I might pick this up later on in the challenge just to see how it finishes and if I do so I will give it a fuller review.
Naming the Bane by Kal S Davian
Daggis is a man cursed from birth and, in a world where the Goddess hunts and kills those that are cursed, his life hasn’t been easy. At the start of the story Daggis is travelling with his wife and daughter as part of a caravan with other cursed and misfits. Their life is one of constant movement evading capture until the army finally catches up with them and all hell breaks loose.
I quite enjoyed this and think it shows a lot of promise. I did have issues with it but I completed it quite easily in one sitting. However, this is only an excerpt from the world created by Davlan and as such I found myself not satisfied! I think personally I would prefer to have read a larger instalment where I can get a proper feel for the characters and world and make a more balanced judgement. As it is we only see a small snippet and whilst things are alluded to they’re not really cleared up here. I do think this is an interesting world and I’m curious to know what these curses are exactly. There’s plenty of action and no lack of imagination. In terms of criticisms I think this could have been strengthened. There were certain scenes that were too quickly brushed over where I wanted to feel a bit more emotion. As it is, I thought this was a good introduction to the world – I just wanted to feel more for the characters and didn’t really have a chance to make that connection.
I can’t say I enjoy eliminating books from this challenge but at the end of the day there can be only one.
This is a recap of my progress on the SPFBO for March. I would like to thank all the authors for allowing me the opportunity to review their books.
Blog off – SPFBO – Update

Just a quick update. I’m taking part in an event details of which are over at Mark Lawrence’s blog. These are my books:
- Noel Coughlan – A Bright Power Rising
- R.P Rigoli – Red
- Jennifer Bell – A warrior’s legacy: Jamie
- Andrew Rowe – Forging Divinity
- Melody Taylor – In the Dark
- Tavish Kaeden – The Weight of a Crown
- David Pedersen – Angst
- Adam Lee – Dark Heart
- Kal S Davian – Naming the Bane *
- Patrick J Loller – Forged by Battle
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T.C Pearce – Into the Aether*
- Will Kay – Requiem of Innocence
- Benny Hinrichs – The Oneironauts
- Neil McGarry & Daniel Ravipinto – The Duchess of the Shallows
- Nick Marsden – The Light of Theolan
- Janice McKonly – Welcome to Mystery Interior
- Steve Thomas – Klondaeg the Monster Hunter*
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Wayne Miller – The Dung Ball Chronicle*
- Amanda McCrina – His Own Good Sword – review here*
- Jack Kerr – Tommy Black and the Staff of Light*
- Scott Decker – Gemstone Wyverns
- Terry Simpson – Game of Souls
- Cindy Young-Turner – Thief of Hope
- Ruairi Cinead Ducantlin – Verum – Exercitum ex Nihilo
- Jake Scholl – Blade of the Broken
- JR Karlsson – Escana
- Maya Michaels – Iduna
So far, I’ve read and reviewed one book. I’ve started two others but ultimately they haven’t grabbed me – and yet, I still want to give them more of a chance (although I have read about 40 pages of one of those and probably about 100 pages of the other)!
My main niggle at the moment is that I have a policy of not reviewing books that I don’t finish. Well, here’s hoping for lots of finished books then.
Titles that iintrigue me: 2, 8, 14, 16, 17 and 21 – although, actually, also 18 – The Dung Ball Chronicle – come on right??
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Finally – my books choices are completely random. I won’t be adding books as ‘currently reading’ on Goodreads or posting to Goodreads as I want to keep an open mind on all the books until the end.
That’s it for me so far. Happy reading to all the others.
His Own Good Sword by Amanda McCrina
10 March 2015
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Tags: Amanda McCrina, His Own Good Sword, Mark Lawrence, Self Published Fantasy Blog Off
His Own Good Sword gets underway the first of my reviews for the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off, brainchild of Mark Lawrence (in collaboration with Bookworm Blues) the details of which are here.
I randomly chose His Own Good Sword to start off with and actually I was pleasantly surprised with this book. It did get off to a little bit of a slow start but I soon became quite intrigued with the story of Tyren Risto.
This is very much what I would describe as alternative history with the Roman-like Varenos having conquered the Cesins. This has been far from a smooth occupation and over the years a number of rebellions have flared up. At the start of the story Tyren, second son to the noble Risto family, has been sent his new commission. Unfortunately he’s been posted to Souvin, not only an outlying backwater but something of an insult to the Ristos. It turns out that the Ristos have a long standing history of bad blood with the powerful Marro family and following a spat between Tyren and one of the Marros this Commission is a demonstration of just how powerful that family have become.
There are two strands to the story. Tyren’s posting in Souvin and the difficulties he encounters there in terms of rebellion and potential uprising and the story of the Risto family and the political maneouvering taking place behind the scenes to undermine not only them but the Senate itself.
I guess I’d call this something of a gentle read and I suppose what I really mean by that is that it crept up on me unexpectedly. Also, although the story involves conflict and bloodshed it’s not particularly violent or gory. The details of the fighting and injuries are almost delivered in a calm and measured tone. I don’t mean to underplay it by describing it that way – just that it has a realistic feel but narrated in a non-dramatic style. I liked, for example, the fact that during battle Tyren does become exhausted and the injuries he sustains have a real impact that knock him out for days and continue to cause him problems even later in the story.
We read primarily from the POV of Tyren with occasional chapters being led by his father Torian and this helps the plot to unfold in a fairly easy to follow style with a view on the bigger picture rather than focusing only on the potential uprising in Souvin.
I would say the story is primarily character led with Tyren being the main protagonist and quite a good supporting cast although that isn’t to underplay the plot which builds subtly to become quite compelling. The world building is fairly low key – not a problem although I thought it could have been added to a little just to give it a bit more flavour.
In terms of criticisms. Well, the pacing was a little slow and the dialogue felt a bit unpolished, particularly at the start of the story. Also, I did at times feel a bit put out with Tyren – he certainly didn’t make the best decisions and his lack of foresight and naivety proved costly to quite a few others – I sort of tempered this with the fact that he’s an idealistic 19 year old finding himself in charge of a garrison soldiered by older and more cynical men. I was also a bit perplexed with Tyren’s sudden liking for one of the rebel women – it just felt like it came out of nowhere and wasn’t entirely believable. I would say it took me a little while to become truly invested in the story but once I did it was definitely a good read and to be honest one that I would continue with.
The other thing I would mention is that if you’re expecting any fantasy elements in terms of dragons, swords or sorcery or unusual characters with pointy ears then you may be disappointed (well, not on the sword front maybe). This story is fantasy purely by dint of it being completely fictional. In other words it isn’t a work of fiction set in Rome and based on the wars and deeds of that time and place. The entire place, people and wars are fictitious.
I think that if you enjoy alternate history, particularly when based on the Roman Empire with politics, conflict and underhanded behaviour together with a protagonist who hasn’t yet proved himself but looks set to take events further with plenty of potential for development then this could be for you. I would continue with the series as I’m curious as to where it will go next.
I think this was a good start to the SPFBO




