The Shadow Master by Craig Cormick

Just finished reading The Shadow Master by Craig Cormick.  I must confess that I’ve come away from this book feeling utterly puzzled.  And not really in a positive way to be honest!  However, let’s not get ahead of ourselves.

This book has got such a great premise.  Set in an alternative Italy, historical in nature and revolving around two families at war and a pair of star crossed lovers – sound familiar at all?  Yes, the main pair are clearly based on Romeo and Juliet.  The plot has strange magical devices and throws into the mix Leonardo and Gallileo – two great inventors who work not only on their scientific creations but on keeping peace between the opposing families.  On top of this we have a strange fanatical religious sect and a world rife with the plague.

The Medici and Lorraine family run the show.  The spices they import help to keep the plague at bay for the inhabitants of this walled city.  But both of the families seek ultimate control over the other and their rivalry turns to war after one of the Medici brothers is killed by assassins.  Obviously the Lorraines are the chief suspects and so begins a game of maneuvering with a third party, the Shadow Master, contriving to play his own game whilst sitting at the centre of everything pulling everyone’s strings and directing the course of events like a spider sat in the middle of a web.  Now on top of that we have the unfortunate lovers – not really destined to be together when their families are at war or maybe they’re exactly what’s needed to save everyone!

There is just so much to like about this book.  Such a lot going on.  It’s certainly a fast read and don’t even get me started about covers.  So why didn’t I love this book?  The thing is I very rarely write negative reviews because I don’t often finish a book if I’m not enjoying it so in that respect this book did hold me to the pages until the very end – which is a positive!  I think the things that prevented me from enjoying this book were.  The romance didn’t work for me.  I wasn’t convinced by the love the two characters felt in fact it was like being told they’re passionate but not really being shown on the page.  On top of that, the love making scenes were simply bizarre.  I can’t really explain it any better without giving away spoilers but some of the terminology just made my eyes pop or made me cringe a little.  The strange thing is I have a horrible feeling that I’m simply missing something and that the constant reference to metaphors and the use of such odd descriptions should mean something more to me but frankly they don’t and they didn’t.  I just can’t help feeling that I’m missing something fundamental or maybe that certain elements were meant to inject humour but it didn’t quite work out for me in that way – that’s the thing with humour though the same thing won’t appeal to everyone.  It also felt a little like there was just too much going on.  Now, this certainly adds to the entertainment value and keeps you a bit on pins and wanting to read on to solve the mystery but it also detracts a little bit from the world building and the characterisation.  I think on reflection there wasn’t a single character in this book that I actually engaged with or really cared for.  Nor did I actively dislike any – even the crazy baddies!  On top of that I’ve finished the book and I really can’t put my finger on what has actually happened or why.  I’m sure there’s a next in series and maybe it will all become clear at that point but for now I don’t understand so much of what took place and the conclusion of the story didn’t help with this.  I mean, what was the significance of what was going on beneath the city in the labyrinthe of tunnels?  Other than to add a horror element to the story?

I give in – I just felt a lot of things didn’t work for me personally so whilst I was desperately reading on trying to find out what was happening I don’t feel I ever reached any sort of conclusions.  Now, like I said, the next in the book could solve all of that but that won’t be a book for me I fear.  I just didn’t really feel this gelled for me but it could work for you and I would certainly be interested in having some light shed upon the events here.

Thanks to the publishers and Netgalley for providing me with a copy of this book.  The above is my own opinion.

 

Tough Travel through fantasy..

Each Thursday the Fantasy Review Barn takes us travelling through fantasy tropes.  This week’s instalment looks at:

‘MENTOR.  A tour official who will be at your service until halfway through the tour, when you will unexpectedly lose him‘

Well, I confess that I so wanted to throw Dumbledore and Gandalf into the mix here but as I seem to have either Harry Potter and LoTR virtually EVERY week I’m leaving them out!

Delauney – mentor to Phedre

Kushiel’s Dart is the first in Jacqueline Carey’s Kushiel’s Legacy Series.  Based in Terre D’Ange, a nation founded by a rebel Angel called Elua, and his companions.  An unusual concept where the inhabitants are the descendents of fallen angels.  Kushiel’s Dart follows the story of Phedre whose beauty is marred by a red mote in one of her eyes.  She is sold into the House of Night where a wealthy benefactor recognises her for what she truly is.  An assignette – one of the only ones borne for many years – marking her as somebody who likes both pain and pleasure and turning her into one of the most sought after courtesans.  Her mentor Delauney however has more ambitious plans for Phedre than simply pleasing the nobles whilst between the sheets!

Chains – and the Gentlemen Bastards

The Lies of Locke Lamora by Scott Lynch.  Chains is a great character.  He teaches his little band the art of subtlety, how to blend in with a crowd, how to spot a mark, how to speak multiple languages, cook, read and fight with their weapon of choice.  His charges are experts in the art of disguise and deception.  They play the long game and entertain with their snarky humour and bad language!

Jasnah and Shallan 

Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson.  Jasnah is sister to the Alethi King.  She is a great scholar and also something of a renegede – refusing to believe in religion and preferring cold hard facts.  Shallan becomes Jasnah’s apprentice after hatching a plot to actually steal from her but her plans don’t go according to plan.  The two of them share a lot in common and Jasnah begins to train Shallan in more than the ways of a scholar.

Kelsier and Vin

Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson.  Vin starts off the series as one of the lowliest members of a street gang who is recruited by the underground movement gathering force to overthrow the Lord Ruler.  Kelsier is something of a legend.  One of the Skaa who has escaped from prison and discovered his mistborn powers.  He undertakes to train Vin in the use of her own magical abilities in order to persuade her to join the movement.

Abenthy and Kvothe

The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss.   Kvothe is the young son of a couple who travel as part of a performing troupe.  During the course of their travels they are joined by a scholar named Abenthy who befriends the young boy and once he discovers his mental abilities teaches Kvothe in the ways of science and ‘sympathy’.  This is to be the inspiration for Kvothe wanting to join the University (well that and his desire to gain access to the archives and learn more about the monsters who killed his parents!)

Granny Weatherwax and Tiffany

The Tiffany Aching series of books from Terry Pratchett’s Discworld.  Granny Weatherwax is the ‘first’ witch amongst all the other witches and whilst Tiffany is trained and lives with other witches during the series I would say that Granny Weatherwax is the most inspiratiional.

The Blasted Lands by James A Moore

The Blasted Lands is the second book in the Seven Forges series written by James a Moore.   My review of The Seven Forges is here.  Now, if you haven’t read No.1 in the series you should be warned that this review will undoubtedly contain spoilers for that book!  Be warned.  The first book in the series got off to a really good start.  I had a few niggles and I can’t say I was in love with the cliffhanger ending – given the waiting time to find out what was going to happen next – but, the wait was worth it.  This book builds very effectively on the first in the series and does not suffer at all from ‘second book’ syndrome.  On the contrary, the world building was much improved.  The characters more developed.  And, some of the intrigue given explanation.

In the last book we were made familiar with the Empire of Fellein and it’s people and Emperor.  At the same time a band of characters travelled the Blasted Lands in pursuit of knowledge of the Seven Forges where they met a race of previously unknown people – the Sa’ba Taalor.  I’m not going to recap all of the previous story – just suffice to say it ended with the Empire and the people of the Seven Forges looking set to go to war.  A quick recap of characters – Desh (The Magician), Merros (a soldier – now made General), the sisters (magical assistants to Desh), Tega (magical apprentice to Desh), Andover, (from the Fellein empire – lost both of his hands in an attack and received a strange gift from one of the Gods of the Seven Forges), Tusk – a king of the Sa’ba Taalor.

The Blasted Lands continues with Andover’s journey, as an ambassador of Fellein to the Seven Forges where he will meet not only the people but the Gods they worship.  He’s going to face trials and hardship along the way and in doing so will introduce us to this strange race of people who are so devoted to the serving of their Gods that they literally have no fear of death itself.  This is a really interesting race of people.  Their way of life is simple.  They live by fairly strict codes.  They answer to their Gods implicitly, some serving only one whilst others serve a number.  I’m still not quite sure what to make of Andover.  In one respect I’m hoping that he will be an intermediary between the two races but on the other he seems so overwhelmed by the way in which the Sa’ba Taalor have accepted him amongst their people that it seems quite possible that he could be used by them in some way and simply go along with things in order to feel part of something.  I confess even after finishing the book I’m still unsure as to what his eventual purpose will be but the journey he has made so far has certainly been fascinating and held a number of revelations – not least of which uncovering the reason why the Sa’ba Taalor hide their faces behind a veil.  I won’t say more!

Back in Fellein Merros, Desh and the new Empress (Nachia, cousin to the murdered Emperor) are making preparations for war – not easy with a nation that has gone soft of course and impeded by rumours of black ships attacking other parts of the empire and strange foretellings of doom by the ‘sooths’.  Not to mention attacks by strange monsters that seem to be the result of necromancy.

The Sa’ba Taalor are not of course standing idle.  They are making their own plans and what is intriguing is that they all go about separate missions, directed by whichever God or Gods they serve and yet their ultimate purpose seems to serve the same goal.  This is a ruthless set of people, cold blooded, unafraid, frankly quite scary and tough as old boots – not to mention they’ve got a few tricks up their sleeves when it comes to tackling any wounds they receive during the course of any skirmishes they encounter and a few ways of blending into a group or crowd of people unnoticed.  There is also a bigger picture here that is revealed at the end of the book and uncovers a little bit more background – only a little, almost a teaser, but still quite a light bulb moment.

I enjoyed the first book in the series but without doubt thought this was better.  In fact I really had no quibbles at all.  I suppose you could argue there maybe isn’t as much action in this instalment but in spite of that it’s still a fast paced novel and the world building and time spent with each character definitely adds extra value.

I received a copy of this from the publisher through Net Galley.  The above is my own opinion.

I’m submitting this for my Once Upon a Time event under the heading of ‘fantasy’.  Stop over to Stainless Steel Droppings to check out this event.

 

What’s next off the tbr…

b2bf5-toptentuesday2This week at The Broke and the Bookish the topic for Top Ten Tuesday is:

Top Ten Books On My Summer TBR list

It’s difficult for me to pin down a top 10 for this because my ‘next’ reads are always a bit of a movable feast so I’m just going to pick the first 10 books that immediately spring to mind that I’m really looking forward to and that I already own or have pre-ordered:

  1. Half a King by Joe Abercrombie
  2. Tower Lord by Anthony Ryan
  3. Sworn in Steel by Douglas Hulick
  4. Fool’s Assassin by Robin Hobb
  5. Annihilation by Jeff VanderMeer
  6. The Copper Promise by Jen Williams
  7. Corroded by Karina Cooper
  8. Bloodshot by Cherie Priest
  9. Dandelion Wine by Ray Bradbury
  10. Shadow of the Wolf by Tim Hall

That’s it for me – what lucky book will get promoted to the top of your TBR?

 

The Museum of Extraordinary Things by Alice Hoffman

Alice Hoffman is one of those writer’s whose books I keep a lookout for.  She usually writes stories with a slight fantasy or magical element, although The Dovekeepers was a step out of character in that respect.  So, did I crack open the pages of this book with maybe slightly elevated and maybe higher than average expectations?  Maybe.  Did it meet my expectations?  In some respects, yes, although perhaps not all.  I confess that I have slightly mixed feelings for this book.  I enjoyed it and it was easy to read but I can’t with honesty say that I absolutely loved it which is puzzling because it’s such a good concept and set in a fascinating period of time.

The story is set in New York during 1911 and uses actual events of the period to progress the tale.  We follow two main characters.  Ezekiel and Coralie.  Ezekiel is a Jewish immigrant who fled with his father after their small village was razed and the other inhabitants murdered.  They eventually wound up in New York city where they struggled to make a living both working in clothing factories and suffering dreadful working conditions.  Coralie is the daughter of the local museum owner which in actual fact is more like a sideshow of oddities – the painted lady, wolfman, etc.  She’s led an incredibly sheltered and withdrawn life suffering herself from a slight affliction and with a father who has raised her to think of herself as something that must be hidden.  She’s at ease with the unusual objects contained behind the curtains of the museum that separates the displays from their home life and equally content around the employees that her father takes on during the high season to attract customers.  Coralie eventually becomes one of the attractions on display at the museum and to this extent her father has raised her to be a strong swimmer, encouraging late night swims in all weathers and trying to prolong the length of time that she can stay underwater without having to surface for air.  In the eyes of the patrons Coralie is a mermaid!

During Coralie’s progression into this role Ezekiel’s story is also moving forward.  He feels bitterness for his father, believing him to be cowardly, he also feels great anger for the way in which they live holding strong resentment for the factory owners and the comfort in which they live at the expense and misery of their employees.  He eventually rebels against his father and his religion and leaves home.  Following a chance encounter he becomes an apprentice to a well known and ground breaking photographer.  This in turn leads Ezekiel (or Eddie as he is now known) to work on the local newspapers where he encounters many disturbing and grisly sights.  He is called to work on an event when a factory blaze results in the deaths of many workers who it appears had been locked into their workroom on the ninth floor.  Many of these workers jumped to their deaths rather than being consumed by the flames.  It’s a terrible and horrifying evening that provokes unrest throughout the city.  During the events of that night a young woman goes missing.  It could be she was killed in the factory but her body has not been recovered and her father has sought out Eddie to help him search for her.  Eddie’s searches will eventually draw him to the river Hudson which is where he will have his first encounter with Coralie – although he doesn’t actually see her as she watches him from the secrecy of the forest he is aware that he’s being watched.  From then onwards their stories start to entwine more with both of them feeling unaccountably drawn to each other.

What I really liked from this story and took away from it was that things are not always as they appear on the surface.  Both characters have very different upbringings but whilst Eddy is angry and resentful of his family he has in actual fact been the focus of more family love than he is aware.  On the other side Coralie seems to have been raised by a father who loves her and keeps her safe and protected and yet his motives are not completely selfless.  It’s an interesting concept that makes you think about the story for days after you finish reading.  And, things are not what they seem on other levels than the two main families.  There are the deceptions within the museum and between the employees of Coralie’s father.  On top of this I also thought Hoffman created a really exciting ending with plenty of tension.

In terms of criticisms – I struggled a little with Eddie.  I could understand Coralie’s behaviour a lot more than his and whilst sometimes I felt frustrated with her because I wanted her to be more courageous I could understand why she wasn’t able to rise to certain challenges and was so browbeaten.  Eddie’s actions on the other hand feel a little contrived for me.  He’s not a bad character per se but certain of his actions just puzzled, frustrated or plain annoyed me.  I can see he was supposed to come off as a very brooding and dark individual and I like that and think that Hoffman succeeds in that respect I just don’t think his actions always felt real.  And, in spite of his moody and antagonistic nature he certainly seemed to attract his share of people and animals who help him throughout his life.  I suppose I wanted to feel more for him than I actually did.  I also felt the two storylines took quite a long time to eventually cross paths and yet once they did the love story element was instantaneous.  I don’t mind the slow burner aspect but I felt that once Eddie and Coralie finally met things were just too rushed.

On the whole, this was a good read.  I was quite captivated by Coralie and her story.  The time period was fascinating to read about as was the setting.  I also liked reading about Eddie’s past.  The writing is evocative and although I didn’t find this quite as magical as some the author’s previous works it was still an enjoyable novel.

I’m adding this to my reads for Stainless Steel Droppings Once Upon a Time reading event.

 

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