Devil’s Call by J Danielle Dorn
Devil’s Call is an excellent book that I can’t recommend enough. My immediate thoughts were ‘wow’ and the TL:DR review is ‘Just read it. Please.’ Put basically, this is a story that, for me, works on many levels. I love the format the story is told in, the writing is persuasive and evocative, and the central character makes for compelling reading.
This is a story told by a character called Li Lian in the form of a diary to her unborn child. I love this form of storytelling and it’s executed particularly well in Devil’s Call. We pick up with Li Lian as she goes back to her earliest memories of being a child and she really does tell a remarkably interesting story. The McPherson women come from a long line of gifted women. Call it witchcraft or the dark arts if you will but all of them have abilities that come naturally. They’re used to protecting themselves and disguising their abilities by keeping together in a close knit community where the women nurture the gifts that their children receive but at the same time learn to hide them from hostile eyes. Li Lian is from a young age more curious than some of her cousins. She wants to know more and shows less restraint often getting herself into trouble. As she grows this develops into a more rebellious streak that sees her running away from home in search of adventure. This is when she first meets her future husband and theirs is a relationship that grows into something so strong that it can withstand the tests of time, separation and cultural difference. The two eventually settle down together but the time they have is to be short lived. Three strangers come into their life one night and change it forever. Li Lian’s husband is murdered and Li Lian herself becomes the chief suspect. With help from an unexpected source Li Lian manages to escape imprisonment and execution and sets out in pursuit of the murderers with vengeance on her mind.
Set in the mid 1800s the story travels around from Nebraska to Louisiana and has a wonderful western vibe. I just loved this aspect of the story. It’s got a rough lawless feel, people carrying guns, saloons, dirty streets and towns that feel like they’ve shot up out of the dirt. There’s something raw and basic about it and it really comes across strongly in Li Lian’s tale. The story manages to walk that fine line of giving detail without an over abundance. You get a really good sense of place as Li Lian travels between towns, often caked in dust from the road, feeling hunger and cold alike, sleeping rough or in the back of a cart. It’s just a level of gritty realism that adds to the feel of the story.
The characters. Well clearly the main character is Li Lian. She tells the story and her narration is simply compelling. She makes an unlikely ally in the form of Roger Hawking, a butcher and a drunk and Li Lian’s unlikely saviour. He is with her the night her husband is shot but because of his predilection for alcohol his testimony provides no more credibility than Li Lian’s. The two make an unlikely pairing but their story and dialogue make for excellent reading and Hawking’s history gradually unfolds as the two move across the country. On top of this there is the main character that they’re in pursuit of. I don’t want to give away too much here as it’s something that is best learnt as the story develops but there is something deeply unsettling and scary about this character. Li Lian steals the show completely of course. She’s tenacious and resourceful and such a wonderful female character to read about. What I found really compelling was that she was believable. She has these magical abilities but they’re not over the top fantasy elements. There’s no electricity flying out of her fingers. The magic here is much more subtle, chants and incantations, concoctions and charms, nothing dramatic and flashy but the sort of ability that eventually leads to people whispering behind shut doors, hanging protective wards around their thresholds. The type of magic that could be little more than herb lore and a knowledge of healing but that eventually leads to superstition. Although, you are aware as a reader that Li Lian’s magic is real and that things in this world exist that defy explanation.
I just loved this. It has everything. Great characters, great setting, compelling story and this wonderful gritty realism that develops into something more. I will definitely read more by this author and I’m curious to know if more will be forthcoming from Li Lian.
I received a copy courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks The above is my own opinion.
Weekly Wrap Up : 6/8/17
It’s difficult to believe but we are into August! Somebody took great pleasure on Friday in telling me that we had only 140+ days until Christmas for goodness sake – the mince pies and decorations will be in the shops probably in another month (*shakes fist) and I still don’t feel like I’ve had a summer. Still, time flies when you’re having fun – exactly how much fun am I having right now eh!
Anyway, hope you all had a good week. Here are my books – although not much this past week:
- The Stillhouse Lake by Rachel – which was a step out of character for me and a real page turner to boot.

I’m also reading Naamah’s Blessing by Jacqueline Carey, this is for a readalong that I’m behind for but hoping to catch up this week. I’m also about a third into Neil Gaiman’s American Gods and loving it.
Next week I’m hoping to read:
- Princess of Blood by Tom Lloyd – I did start this one a couple of weeks ago and the fact I’m behind is not a reflection of the book – simply that I’ve not had much sit down time.
- Snowspelled by Stephanie Burgis
- The Turn by Kim Harrison
How was your week? What you currently reading?
#SPFBO Thoughts on my first batch of books

August is here and with it my thoughts on the first five books for the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off. For more details on the first five books drawn check out this post. I am intending to read 20% of each book and if one really grabs my attention to carry on and complete that particular book.
Without further ado here are my thoughts:
The Saga of Dirt and Poncho by Clayton D Baker and Michael H Kuecker

This is an unusual book so far and is the one I intend to continue reading. I won’t say too much about this one here as I will review it once complete but at the moment it has me intrigued. I can’t deny that there are a few mistakes here and there but because it has me wanting to know what happens next I’m currently overlooking those.
The Emperor’s Horn by Jordan R Murray

I thought the Emperor’s Horn was likable to the point I read up to – 20% – but, as I’ve decided to read no more than 20% I can’t really say that I’ve got a good feel for what the story is really about at this point. I think the writing and attention to detail is good – maybe even a little bit overly so – but I don’t have any negatives other than not enough has happened at this point to draw me further in and I’ve reached my cut off point. I would say it’s quite a gentle read and perhaps as an introduction to fantasy for a young person it might work well although maybe the pace needs to be picked up a bit.
Wishful Thinking by James Beach
I’m not sure if this really is a self published novel to be honest as I don’t seem to be able to find it anywhere. I don’t want to be discouraging though so I have read it – there was approximately 30 pages and it was submitted as a word document. I wouldn’t say the story worked for me, there was a lot of dialogue and jumping about, it was an original idea but far too short to ever be a serious contender for this contest. For clarity: I’m not saying that a book has to be a tome to be considered worthy – just that at 30 pages this is more of a short story.
The Tralls of Nindarry by Gayle Torrens
I think this book is aimed at a much younger age group to be honest. The writing is quite promising but for the percentage that I read I felt there was too much repetition in terms of Germaine having flash backs – again, I don’t want to be overly critical but I thought considering the age group this seems to be aimed at perhaps the action should be a bit more forthcoming and the reminiscing could be more in the form of occasional flashbacks in between. It felt like the story should have made considerably more progress by the time I reached 20%, as it is by the time I reached my cut off point I didn’t feel a strong enough pull to continue.
Sand and Storm by Patty Jensen

I think this made an interesting start although maybe a little bit ambitious in terms of what’s going on. It’s not that the book is too fast paced but more that the ideas at this stage leave me puzzled and with my 20% cut off point the book hasn’t grabbed my attention enough. It’s a shame really as there are some interesting ideas but at the moment they’re failing to grab my attention in a way that makes me want to return to the book after putting it down, I haven’t really been able to form a connection with any of the characters and I’m a bit perplexed by the world itself. No doubt some of that could be resolved reading forward so I don’t want to discourage others from reading.
I will post shortly with the next five books that I intend to pick up.
‘He knows how to play. Itty-bitty-baby-Potter.’

Here we are again with the Friday Face Off meme created by Books by Proxy . This is a great opportunity to feature some of your favourite book covers. The rules are fairly simple each week, following a predetermined theme (list below) choose a book, compare a couple of the different covers available for that particular book and choose your favourite. Future week’s themes are listed below. This week’s theme:
From the ashes a fire shall be woken (A cover which features fire)
This week I’ve gone for: Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix by J K Rowling
My favourite this week:

Which is your favourite?
Next week – Soldier
Future themes:
11th August 2017- No soldier outlives a thousand chances (A cover which features a soldier)
18th August 2017 – The world was my oyster but I used the wrong fork (A cover which features food)
25th August 2017 – If I be waspish, best beware my sting (A cover which features an insect)
1st September 2017 – Being born in a stable does not make one a horse (A cover which features a horse)
8th September 2017 – That great condenser of moral chaos, The City (A cover which features a city)
The Clockwork Dynasty by Daniel H. Wilson
I feel like I’m having a lot of luck with my books at the moment, like the God of Good Books is shining down on me and the Clockwork Dynasty is yet another fine example of that happy book streak that I’m currently enjoying. I feel like I’ve been waiting to read this book for quite a while now. I loved the description and lets just be honest that cover also deserves a little shout out for being so captivating and so I”m pleased to say this one worked out really well for me.
The Clockwork Dynasty is a story told using a dual time line that spans the ages and travels across continents. It’s fast paced and entertaining and manages to bring to the table a story of immortals unlike any I’ve read about before. These immortals don’t have fangs or drink blood. Their internal works are clockwork mechanisms and although they have learned to walk amongst us undetected they are far from human. Their strange ‘other worldliness’ has given rise over the centuries to many superstitions and myths. The fact that they are secretive and usually walk abroad at night, they don’t seem to breath or eat and their skin is pale – you can see why myths of vampires and the like sprang up in their wake. Known as Avtomat these clockwork beings have existed for eons, so long in fact that they’ve lost not only some of their memory but also their purpose. Each of them follows their own route, dictated by a word engraved within their internal mechanisms. Unfortunately, for many this purpose has become distorted over the years leading to differences in opinion and eventual war between the differing avtomats. Their existence still remains a secret to date and they guard this secrecy in the strongest possible terms killing any that discover their identities.
So, what did I enjoy about this? I really enjoyed the dual time line. I realise this might not be a style choice that works for everyone but I think it’s been really well executed here and manages to bring together two different storylines in a very satisfactory way. I think this style can sometimes be jarring for readers being pulled from one thread to another but I can genuinely say that I enjoyed both storylines so much that I never had any problems going from one to the other.
As the book begins we are introduced to a young girl, June Stefano. Her grandfather relates to her a fantastic story of his own war time experience, a story so incredible that nobody would believe it. He’s kept this story (together with a relic that he found at the time) secret for years fearing discovery and not quite trusting others with the knowledge. He swears June to secrecy and the story and relic pass into her ownership when her grandfather passes away. This aspect of the story is what leads June on a quest for knowledge and brings her into her current role where she scours the world in search of similar mechanical pieces. June has become an expert in these mechanical robots, although she little understands what they truly are and the revelation of their actual existence places her in great danger.
We then flit back to 1720’s Russia where a young mechanician is in the process of restoring two mechanical figures to present to the Tsar. Pyotr (or Peter as he becomes known later on) and his sister Elena. Their story is fascinating to read about. When they are first restored they have no memory of their previous existence. All they can remember is the word that guides their behaviour. After the Tsar dies of illness the two are forced to flee the palace and remain hidden. For many years they struggle to survive, faced with hostility and aggression they also have to hide their true nature and try to pass as human, which is never easy when neither of them show any signs of ageing. This aspect of the story gave me strong Interview with a Vampire vibes – almost as though the author has used that fictional story, almost as though it was a fact, to retell of how the vampire myth really began and to reveal that the real immortals are actually these mechanical beings known as Avtomat.
Eventually Peter will appear in June’s storyline, it was inevitable really given her search for the secrets of these automated devices, and the two of them travel the world looking for answers and seemingly racing against the clock.
The Clockwork Dynasty is well written and makes for a compelling read. The story has the double whammy of a contemporary story that delivers plenty of pace and action tempered by a thread that brings a wealth of history into play. The characters are easy to engage with and throughout the read these is a sense of urgency to discover the secrets that the Avtomat themselves are trying to get to the bottom of.
The only niggles I had were a slight let up of pace about two thirds in – although that was only a temporary blip and a nagging question at the back of my mind that begged why the avtomat couldn’t simply update their bodies and faces to either age or appear to grow older. But, this wasn’t enough to prevent my enjoyment in any way.
All in all I thoroughly enjoyed this book and would definitely read more by this author. This is a story that brings to us a new kind of immortal that was refreshingly original, I would certainly pick up more and can see plenty of scope for further stories.
I received a copy of Clockwork Dynasty courtesy of the publishers through Netgalley for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
7 August 2017




