#SPFBOX Review: The Tenacious Tale of Tanna the Tendersword by Dewey Conway & Bill Adams

Today I’m posting my seventh Finalist review for #SPFBOX (here’s a link to the Finalist table).  I’ve already posted a review for The Humane Society for Creatures & Cryptids (Teraglossa #1) by Stephanie A. Gillis,  The Forest at the Heart of Her Mage by Hiyodori, Oathsworn Legacy by KR Gangi, Wolf of Withervale (Noss Saga #1) by Joaquin Baldwin, Runelight (The Aenigma Lights Book 1) by JA Andrews and Gates of Hope by JE Hannaford.  I have two more reviews yet to post so, without further ado let’s get to my review for The Tenacious Tale of Tanna the Tendersword by Dewey Conwy and Bill Adams :

Firstly here’s the description (courtesy of Goodreads), the cover and a link

Galdifort Quillpen has grand dreams of writing epic tales of heroic deeds, just like his famous aunt. Unfortunately, he’s been assigned to Tanna the Tendersword, an excruciatingly carefree would-be-champion who can’t seem to find a qualifying entry-level quest.

When things are at their most miserable, the young Questers meet an enigmatic old woman who offers Tanna a quest: follow a peg-legged, sword-wielding rooster to help save a crying mushroom lost within a haunted forest. Tanna heroically accepts, regardless of how incredibly unsafe the odd quest seems.

But Galdifort’s fears become reality when a sorceress sends her fog monster and lizard henchmen after them. Only a true Champion should confront a sorceress, and, in his eyes, Tanna is not up to the task. But if he wants to write his chronicle, Galdifort must learn to do something he certainly isn’t comfortable doing — trust in honest friendship with Tanna the Tendersword.

He’s just a chronicler, after all, not a hero!

My thoughts

I was pleased to see this book become a finalist because I don’t think we’ve seen a MG book before and I was excited to pick it up because it seems to have such a buzz surrounding it.  This is a lovely book, well thought out and beautifully illustrated.

The plot is about two characters, a partnership if you will.  Tanna and Galdifort.  A champion in the making and her chronicler.  The two seem very ill matched, which is perhaps the beauty of the story, and the main gist is that in order to level up the two of them have been sent out to find a quest, complete it and return successful.  It seems simple enough really and all would be champions and their chroniclers are put through similar trials.

So, although Tanna is named in the title Galdifort is the one narrating the story here.  The two seem ill matched in many ways.  Tanna is reckless and has a devil may care attitude to danger seemingly believing herself to be invincible.  Galdifort on the other hand is a bag of nerves and something of a grumpy so and so.  He is wallowing around, trying not to fall into the mud and failing miserably whilst Tanna is dashing about like a maniac and usually getting them into trouble.

My feelings whilst reading this were a little bit all over the place.  I started off well and was keen to meet our two characters but I confess I did start to go off the boil a little.  I think the humour might not have worked for me and I did feel that the plot was a little slow and, sometimes, the characters, annoyed me a little.

Now, I will say that MG is not normally my typical type of read so whilst I was really curious to see how this would work for me I must say that given my lack of experience in this genre I’m probably not entirely sure what to expect, so take my thoughts with a huge grain of salt.

Overally, this is a lovely book, I’m not sure whether the pacing would be an issue or not to a younger audience and the tempo certainly picks up in the final chapters, but it didn’t entirely charm me the way I thought it would.  That being said I recognise it’s a ‘me’ thing and I think this is a fun story, well written and well presented.

I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 6.5 of 10 stars

 

 

#SPFBOX Review: Gates of Hope (Aulirean Gates #1) by J.E. Hannaford

Today I’m posting my sixth Finalist review for #SPFBOX (here’s a link to the Finalist table).  I’ve already posted a review for The Humane Society for Creatures & Cryptids (Teraglossa #1) by Stephanie A. Gillis,  The Forest at the Heart of Her Mage by Hiyodori, Oathsworn Legacy by KR Gangi, Wolf of Withervale (Noss Saga #1) by Joaquin Baldwin and Runelight (The Aenigma Lights Book 1) by JA Andrews:.  I have three more reviews to post over the next few days.  So, without further ado let’s get to my review for Gates of Hope by JE Hannaford :

Firstly here’s the description (courtesy of Goodreads), the cover and a link.

The Watcher shattered the gates. Now hope must arise from the shards.

Five hundred cycles ago, the Watcher closed the gates between the world of Lieus and its moons to end a war. Since then magic has been hidden, relegated to childhood tales. On the outer moon of Tebein, any human showing magically aligned traits would sentence their entire community to death at the hands of the native awldrin overlords.

For awldrin are immortal and their memories long.

Even peace is transient, and on Lieus, invasive monsters are encroaching on Caldera, leaving Darin and his bonded moonhound to face nightmares made real. As the creatures spread their wings, Suriin’s father is injured, and she must delve deep into the secrets of the Black Palace to try and save him.

Elissa’s magic could not have bloomed a a worse time on Tebein, as the awldrin are roused, and now she must run to save everyone she loves.

Far more than the fate of their loved ones is at stake, but will any of them see it in time?

Gates of Hope is epic fantasy but with a slice of life feel to it.

I’m not going to go into great depth about the world (or worlds) as I think there are other reviews out there that make a better go of it.  Just briefly, the planet Lieus has two moons (Mythos and Tebein).  The three used to be connected via gates which were destroyed by the Watcher during a period of war (the Watcher is a dragon now revered as a God).  After the split the planet of Lieus has become an almost uninhabitable world, the people there live in the craters and rarely venture to the surface.  On Tebein there is a mix of human and Awldrin.  The Awldrin are a very long lived race of warriors, they keep the humans on the moon subdued and magic is forbidden.

So, the story is told in three POVs.  Elissa, Darin and Suriin.  Surin and Elissa have similar coloured hair (marking them out as wielders of magic).  Their stories otherwise are very different.  Surin lives on Lieus and is desperate to leave the family home and have adventure.  Her story takes her to Redpike where she will learn more about her magic.  Darin also lives on Lieus and also has travelled to Redpick hoping to find work as a soldier to help his struggling family.  His plans change when he forms a bond with a Moonhound (these dogs rarely bond with a male) and in fact Darin struggles at first to perform the simplest magical tasks (the magic uses crystals and music).  However, his story changes quite dramatically, and quite secretly with a couple of discoveries that I won’t post here and spoil for other readers.

Elissa lives on Tebein.  She is one of the untouched – her hair is purple, singling her out as a magic wielder so she must hide her hair colour and keep a low profile.  Elissa actually bonds with a magical crystal which sets her story onto a different course of action.

I enjoyed Gates of Hope.  It’s very well written and once again the author’s love for the world and characters really shines out.

I think the magical system is very well imagined and there is a good deal of promise yet to be realised in future editions.

That being said, I don’t think this book was for me – although I have no doubt it will find plenty of readers who love it.  I found this a little meandering, there’s too much focus on everyday matters that keep the pace quite slow, and apart from Darin and his moonhound I didn’t really connect to the characters.  To be fair to the book and the author I will say that I think this is down to me and not the book.  I do love epic fantasy, I do love detailed books, but, I find myself wanting something more – that element that raises the stakes somehow or just gives it something new.

I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 6.5 of 10

#SPFBOX Review: Runelight (The Aenigma Lights Book 1) by JA Andrews

Today I’m posting my fifth Finalist review for #SPFBOX (here’s a link to the Finalist table).  I’ve already posted a review for The Humane Society for Creatures & Cryptids (Teraglossa #1) by Stephanie A. Gillis,  The Forest at the Heart of Her Mage by Hiyodori, Oathsworn Legacy by KR Gangi and Wolf of Withervale (Noss Saga #1) by Joaquin Baldwin.  Over the next two weeks I shall be posting regularly in order to fit all the Finalists in before the competition ends.  So, without further ado let’s get to my review for Runelight (The Aenigma Lights Book 1) by JA Andrews:

Firstly here’s the description (courtesy of Goodreads), the cover and a link.

Kate thought finding the puzzle box would give her all the answers.

But it only holds far more desperate questions.

Kate is a Keeper—a storyteller, magic-wielder, and researcher—but a single mystery has evaded her all her life: What happened on the tragic day when two strangers stole not only the puzzle box that hummed with magic, but so much more?

She and her brother Bo have searched for twenty years with no luck. Until Venn, a surly elf, shows up on the hidden doorstep of the Keepers’ Stronghold, with that same aenigma box—and a message that Bo has disappeared.

Kate needs a guide back to Venn’s homeland to search for him, and Venn needs to find him for reasons of her own. Reasons she refuses to explain.

Despite their mutual distrust, Kate and Venn form a grudging alliance.

Somewhere in the midst of infiltrating dwarven tunnels, discovering the secrets of the aenigma box, and stumbling onto shocking ancient relics, the alliance shifts to friendship.

But as the search for Bo grows increasingly dangerous, they uncover a complex plot woven through centuries, devastating not just individuals, but entire empires.

And even working together, the inexplicable forces standing against them may be too much.

Half treasure hunt and half rescue mission, this epic fantasy adventure is a tale of puzzles, mysteries, and the kinds of friendships—both old and new—that shape the soul.

Before I started reading Runelight I confess I was daunted by the page count which according to GRs is over 700 pages, and yet, as it happens it didn’t feel like a chunkster and was quite an easy read.  To be fair, that’s not to say that there aren’t areas that could be sharpened up, but, I didn’t find myself struggling at any point which I think is a testament to the writing which is very easy to engage with.

As the story begins we meet Kate and her two brothers.  They love searching in an abandoned mine and on one occasion they discover a strange box.  Unluckily enough it seems that others are also searching for goodies deep in the mine and what started out as a fun adventure soon takes a downward turn.

From there we jump forward a good number of years (I think about 20ish).  Kate has become a Keeper (a guardian of stories – also she wields magic).  Meanwhile, her brother (Bo) is out in the wilds searching for clues to the mystery that has haunted them both since that ill-fated day many years ago.  Kate receives Bo’s missives detailing where he’s been and he regularly sends items back to the stronghold where she lives.  When a strange elf appears to have found the hidden passage to the stronghold, bearing a gift and a message for Kate from Bo, this sets in train the start of an adventure.

What I enjoyed.  Well, I liked the characters.  I think Kate came across as a little immature for a 30 year old but I guess she’s also lead a fairly sheltered existence preferring her books and studies to scamping around outside.  Kate is a magic wielder and has the strange ability to smell the different, I don’t know, imprint – if you will – that a person leaves behind, each one being unique (strangely enough this comes in much more handy than you’d imagine), she can also wield magic creating shields and such like.  Venn is the grumpy elf that came looking for Kate with a message from her brother.  The two form an unlikely alliance at first, backtracking to Bo’s last known situation.  Along the way they also pick up another couple of companions in the form of two dwarves.  I wouldn’t say that Silas and Tribal stepped out of the norm but they did bring humour to the story and I really enjoyed the banter that took place between the characters with their inclusion.

I liked the way the story is written.  It’s a very easy book to engage with, yes, it could use some tightening, but, I found myself really enjoying the adventures that our merry little band found themselves on and the ways in which they managed to get out of numerous tight spots.

The plot also becomes a lot deeper than I originally suspected it would.  I thought this was going to be something of an Indiana Jane adventure all about the puzzle box but it turns out there is so much more involved.

In terms of criticisms.  Well, this ends on a cliffhanger.  I’m not a great lover of cliffhangers to be honest – I’m too impatient and want the payoff now.  But, is it a deal breaker?  Not really.  Like I mentioned, this could be tightened some, it doesn’t particularly break the mould in terms of certain stereotypes but regardless it was an enjoyable read.

I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 7.5 of 10

#SPFBOX Review: The Oathsworn Legacy by KR Gangi

Today I’m posting my third Finalist review for #SPFBOX (here’s a link to the Finalist table).  I’ve already posted a review for The Humane Society for Creatures & Cryptids (Teraglossa #1) by Stephanie A. Gillis and The Forest at the Heart of Her Mage by Hiyodori.  Over the next two weeks I shall be posting regularly in order to fit all the Finalists in before the competition ends.  So, without further ado lets get to my review The Oathsworn Legacy by KR Gangi.

Firstly here’s the description (courtesy of Goodreads), the cover and a link.

Rawley and Baelin make a living the only way they know how—protecting the people of Centrum by slaying the dark things that stole their childhood: Monsters, and everything evil.

Though the work never ends, and there’s plenty of coin to go around, Rawley and Baelin discover a sinister secret hidden deep within the crevices of Centrum’s past. Centuries of lies and deceit unravel before them, and they soon shift from mere mercenaries to a force that will last generations.

At least, that’s their hope.

Dwarves in the west, Wroughtmen in the north, Elves in the east, and a tyrant king ruling with an oppressive fist, Rawley and Baelin balance on the precipice of total chaos.

Will everything they’ve accomplished be enough to save them from the shadows rising, or will a plot that’s generations old finally drag everything into the abyss?

Oathsworn Legacy is epic fantasy with classic Tolkien elements.  The story revolves around two brothers who, having been orphaned at a young age when their parents were attacked by monsters, become monster hunters themselves.

Although this falls into classic fantasy I thought the first 40/50% of the story stepped out of the norm.  We had a series of adventures where the brothers go about ‘their monster hunting’ quite often getting into all manner of desperate situations.  I have to say that I found this part of the story refreshingly entertaining.  This style may not work for everyone and I confess at first I wondered about this narrative choice but it became apparent fairly quickly that each of the stories was going to be important in terms of introducing both new characters and also plotlines.  Pay attention when you’re reading these stories because they all feed in to the plot at some point.

The story then switches.  The brothers move on with the plans they’ve been harbouring for some time in the process attracting the wrong sort of attention.  From this point onwards things start to go horribly wrong eventually escalating into all out battle.  I did feel like this area of the story was a bit hastily sketched, I felt like we jumped to a fairly well established school for monster hunters and somehow I felt like I’d missed something.

My thoughts on Oathsworn are divided.  I really liked the early stories and there’s a heck of a lot of promise with some of the ideas there that I suspect the author will explore further.  I don’t think I really connected well with the brothers though.  To be fair, I didn’t dislike them but I didn’t feel fully invested for some reason.  I preferred some of the side characters but I did like the fact that the brothers were not totally rigid in their ideas but open to persuasion and I liked the way they became surrounded by good friends.

I also really liked the writing and felt that although this is quite a chunky story it certainly didn’t feel that way when I was reading in fact I read this very easily in a matter of days.

In terms of criticisms.  I don’t really have any as such but epic battle scenes don’t always work for me and so the concluding chapters weren’t my favourite.  But that’s on me obviously.

Overall, I enjoyed Oathsworn and although this reads as a standalone I am curious to see if the author returns to this world.

I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 7 out of 10.

#SPFBOX Review: The Humane Society for Creatures & Cryptids (Teraglossa #1) by Stephanie A. Gillis

I can hardly believe that SPFBO X is fast approaching it’s conclusion.  This year I’ve changed my MO and decided to read all the finalists before reviewing.  To be honest, I don’t think that was perhaps the best step on my part, mainly because there were some very chunky books this year and the reading has taken me longer than I would have liked – usually I like to start posting reviews a little earlier.  Anyhow, the best laid plans, it can’t be helped.  This is where I’m at and for the next two weeks I shall be posting reviews.  Here’s a link to the Finalist table.

Lets start with the description from Goodreads:

The Lambros family has never fit in with the town of Pandora, even from the very beginning. Since their ancestors immigrated from Greece with magical creatures in tow, the townsfolk have never trusted them and that hasn’t changed in the centuries since. Now, Melpomene, Calliope, and Thalia struggle to live their every day lives. When new girl, Asha Singh moves to town, everything changes. Thalia, once determined to escape Pandora upon graduation, finds herself growing closer to the heiress of the new resort in town and puts her plans on hold as their relationship develops. All the while, a man has entered the grounds, sent by their mother to help prepare for the newest creature en route to the house. His intentions come into question as he tries to befriend the distrustful Calliope, whose own abilities with the animals seem something out of a fairytale. With their mother missing, Melpomene struggles to keep the house together amidst the changes in the town, the newcomers to their lives, and the impending threat of their secret life being exposed to the community and the world. As the three sisters deal with their own personal problems, the divide between them grows wide when they need to band together the most or else it may end with one of them in the hands of their greatest enemy.

My thoughts below:

The Humane Society for Creatures and Cryptids (THSfC&C) was a book that I really enjoyed.  It’s very family focused involving three sisters and the secret work that they are responsible for – work that very much makes them outcasts to the community in which they live.

When we first meet the Lambros sisters their everyday life is nothing if not chaotic and is weighing heavily on all of them in different ways.

Melpomene is the oldest sister and takes responsibility for the family, house and business.  She’s a fixer and constantly worries that she’s not succeeding in keeping the family together.  Melpomene has no magical abilities as such but is a typical homemaker.  As I already mentioned all the sisters are in something of a rut as the story begins and they’re all so busy with their lives that they’ve almost lost sight of everything they have.

Calliope is the middle sister (and I confess my favourite).  Calliope shares a special bond with all the creatures and critters that her family try to rescue and protect.  The animals love her and bend to her will.  She has a troubling past and has withdrawn from society preferring the company of the critters she looks after and loves.  As the story begins she is preparing for a new creature’s arrival and her time is taken with this preparation.  Until a young man arrives, sent by the girl’s mother to help them make ready.

Thalia is the youngest sister, still at school and definitely struggling with a ridiculous amount of bullying from the locals.  Thalia is about to become a little enamoured with the new girl at school, Asha, who is also very intrigued with Thalia and the rumours that circulate about her family.  Thalia has plans to leave the town of Pandora.  She wants to see the world and explore new places and is searching for a way to make this happen.  I think in terms of her two sisters – they’re so far removed from the whole school/community feel in general that in a way they fail to see how much Thalia is struggling.

Asha is the daughter of a wealthy couple who are responsible for a new, glitzy resort in town.  In one respect her pov feels a little conveniently engineered – it gives us a person who is curious and involved with one of the family members thereby opening an opportunity to describe things afresh for readers.  That being said I liked her character well enough.

The place feels modern, cars, mobiles, the usual modern accoutrements.  We spend a bit of time at school but predominantly we are based at the Lambros property.  A ramshackle and rambling house set in it’s own extensive grounds and surrounded by forest, which helps with keeping the family business a secret – although there is a good deal of curiosity and snooping.  The house is home not only to the girls but also a wonderful selection of creatures.  I loved that each chapter gave a description for a new critter that usually played a role in the forthcoming pages.

The storyline.  Well, this is a cosy romantasy but, that being said, after a fairly mild and low stake first half the second half of the story becomes much more dramatic.  The girls have to pull together to protect the business overcoming their own fears to unite and strengthen.

What really worked for me.  I enjoyed the writing, the family dynamic is really good, all the characters have clear and individual voices and although (I think) this is over 500 pages it felt like a quick and compelling read.

In terms of criticisms.  Well, nothing that really spoiled it for me but, there are three romances that all seem to spring out of nowhere and become quite quickly ‘big things’.  Now that’s something of a coincidence – three sisters all finding love interests at exactly the same time – but, hey, it could happen.  There is a little foreshadowing that make it fairly obvious in which direction certain storylines are going.  Also, there is the trauma of Calliope’s past which may be difficult for some readers and finally there’s the usual ‘missing parents’ – definitely an overused trope for me – but, again, nothing that made me want to stop reading.

Overall, I had a good time with this book and if the second book was available I would have undoubtedly picked up a copy straight away.

I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opiniion.

My rating 7.5

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