Review: The Wilding by Ian McDonald

My Five Word TL:DR Review: A Little Slow to Start

I enjoyed The Wilding.  The writing is really good, very evocative and the author sets the scene very well.  Yes, it was a little slow to start as we get to know the characters.  To be honest, on the one hand, I’m not totally sure that all the character building was totally necessary as some of these characters are about to meet a grisly end, but, on the other hand, if the author just skimmed over these characters and gave them no depth it would be immediately obvious that their roles were going to be short lived, so, for me, it’s worth taking the time to get to know these people as it definitely makes their sudden demise much more shocking.

The premise of the story is a group of rangers and young adults, going into the wild to spend a night, at one with nature.  It’s an unlikely group of characters in some respects.  Lisa, the MC, is longing for a new start in life at University and in fact this little wilderness trek is probably going to be her last mission.  The other young adults don’t particularly come across as enthusiastic (at least not all of them) about this little jaunt into the wild and have an almost bored, are we really doing this, attitude, but they’re going to get a sudden jolt of nasty reality in fairly short order.

The author sets the scene early.  There have been unexplained attacks on farm animals and other unexplained incidences.  The setting feeds into the atmosphere perfectly.  This is a rewilding project based deep in rural island where the locals, the project itself and nature are struggling to come to a balance and, well, ultimately failing it would seem.  There’s a lovely build up of tension, I would say that at one point I was on the brink of wondering when the action would kick in but then suddenly I was in the middle of chaos.  When the proverbial hits the fan things go batpoop crazy.  The wilderness seems to take on a mind of its own causing confusion and driving the party deeper into the bog.  There’s bad weather, marshy boglands, bugs and that awful feeling of being watched coupled with the hysteria and panic created when people are desperately trying to survive. And there are some really unusual settings where our little group find shelter.

I don’t really want to say too much more for fear of spoiling the read for others.  I enjoyed this, it had a slightly slow start but I think that initial build up makes the story more dramatic.  There is definite horror and blood and guts.  I don’t know whether I’d call this a folk story.  It’s more like nature as a whole – showing us it’s power coupled with the journey of one character in particular – Lisa – who starts the story longing to move on before going on something of a self discovery jaunt herself, becoming very protective of the young people in her charge and throwing caution to the wind as she tries to keep them alive.

I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 3.5 of 5 stars rounded to 4 for the strange and dark appeal

Review: The Ravening by Daniel Church

My Five Word TL:DR Review: Didn’t Really Work For Me

I enjoyed The Hollows by this author so was really looking forward to this one but ultimately it just didn’t work it’s magic. But, first things first.

This gets off to a very intriguing start.  Jenna and her mother are travelling when their car breaks down.  Stranded in the forest things escalate quickly and Jenna’s mother disappears.  Fast forward and Jenna is 30 (ish), the mystery of her mother was never solved and has left her with severe trauma and trust issues  She struggles to hold down a relationship for more than a couple of months until recently meeting Holly.  The two, on the face of it, feel like opposites, but they click somehow.  They’ve just returned from a camping holiday, not something Jenna would usually undertake as she remains afraid of the forest since that terrible night when her mother went missing.

From here the story takes a completely different tack and not one that I was particularly expecting.  The horror wasn’t what I was hoping for, don’t get me wrong, the situation that Jenna finds herself in is definitely horrific, claustrophobic and anger inducing – and I don’t want to go into detail here as it’s probably best discovered during the read – but it simply wasn’t what I was hoping for.

So, what did and didn’t work for me.

I liked the ancient evil that is at play.  It’s a terrifying beast and there were some very creepy moments whenever it put in an appearance.

There are a couple of occasions where Jenna is, let’s say, making a break out – I found these gripping and tense.

In terms of criticisms.  I found it very difficult to like any of the characters and this is really a problem for me.  I wanted to like Jenna, she’s been through a lot and in fact continues to experience some terrible situations, but I didn’t find myself really caring.  The same with the relationship with Jenna and Holly, it just felt very flat, they didn’t really come across as though they even liked each other to be honest, it was all super prickly.  And, this is a small niggle, but the constant use of the word ‘babe’, it really irritated me, to the point I was actually becoming really grumpy and skipping over the dialogue in order to avoid it.  On top of that, I’m not really a lover of dream sequences in stories and they play quite an integral part here.  They rarely work for me.

I think some of my issues literally fall into the ‘its me not you’ category.  There were some exciting moments, some tense scenes and the final chapters rolled out more of the horror that I was expecting.  It just felt like a lot to get through in order to get to that point.

I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 2.5 of 5 stars (rounded to 3)

#SPFBO X: Review: Smile and Be a Villain by Yves Donlon

For those who don’t know about SPFBO (the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off) – this is a competition created and run by Mark Lawrence.  The competition is now in its tenth year and you can find out more about all the other entrants and judges over on Mark Lawrence’s blog.

I separated my books into three batches which you can find herehere and here.  Having read the first 25% (at least) I’ve chosen five books that I intend to read further before choosing potential semi finalists to pass to the Critiquing Chemist to read. Today I am posting my fifth and final SPFBO review for Smile and Be a Villain by Yves Donlon.

SABAV is a reimagining of Hamlet with magic.  This is very well written and so lovely to read, I really enjoyed it.  I would say that no former knowledge of Hamlet is necessary, I only have the bare basics of the story personally and I didn’t feel that this suffered as a result.  I would also mention that this is only the opening gambit that provides a thoughtful backstory and concludes more or less where the play begins.  It’s well done and cleverly thought out.

As the story starts Hamlet is being sent to Wittenberg, in shame after being discovered in a compromising situation.  Here he is expected to study and before long he’s made friends with two characters who he spends most of his time with, Rosencrantz and Guildendtern.  His new friends beguile Hamlet with their knowledge of magic and begin to show him the basics although you can sense that they were rather careful with exactly how much they shared.  Meanwhile, back at Helsingør, Ophelia is also suffering, the Queen has cast her off in shame and on top of that she’s really struggling to cope with the Corruption that seems to be overcoming the castle, constantly renewing wards in a bid to overcome the dark tendrils that are encroaching and nipping at everyone’s heels.  Added to this there is tension and war is brewing.

What I really enjoyed about this.

I thought the writing, the dialogue and the set up were excellent.  I found myself simply enjoying the read just for the joy of reading.  I wouldn’t say that there’s an over abundance of description but I had no struggle imagining the set up.  Ophelia and Hamlet are the narrators, I enjoyed this aspect of jumping between the two and also it gave us eyes and ears in both locations.

The characters come across well.  They have so much more depth here with the time given to explore their inner thoughts and insecurities.  Hamlet, for example, comes across as an indecisive teenager whilst Ophelia comes across as strong willed and determined.  The two share a close friendship and argue almost like brother and sister.  

I really liked the magic.  The Corruption in the castle is a byproduct of too much magic use.  Mirrors can be used as portals to other magical places and this is an element that I really enjoyed.  On top of this there are little asides, such as one of the characters who has a hidden object with an interesting backstory.  Hamlet in particular is absorbed by the need to know more about the magic and his heedless rush to find out whatever he can puts him in a predicament that almost sends him crazy.

In terms of criticisms.  I think I would have liked to know more about the magic and the Corruption.  Helsingør seems to be almost overrun with dark tendrils which makes me wonder just who is using enough magic to create so much byproduct.  I would also mention that this is not a short and snappy read.  It comes in around 500 pages, but, again, I didn’t have an issue with that personally.  I liked the style of writing and was quite immersed. 

In conclusion, this was a really good read and I look forward to seeing what the author comes up with next.

I received a copy from the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My review for Fortitude’s Prize by Ceril N Domace, The First Assignment by Billy Kramer, River of Crows by NP Thompson and Touched by Magic by Celine Jeanjean can be found here, here, here. and here.

Review: So Thirsty by Rachel Harrison

Posted On 12 September 2024

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My Five Word TL:DR Review: Two Friends, One Wild Party

Rachel Harrison is a great storyteller and I love her supernatural stories which usually involve strong female friendships (well, the books I’ve read so far at least).

So Thirsty is her latest creation and in her usual style she brings the supernatural to life once again, this time in the form of vampires.  Vampires are definitely the new ‘black’ at the moment.  It seems we went through a very dry spot for a while and I confess I was happy for some vampires to show their fangs once again.  The creatures in between these pages are the bored and beautiful type.  They’ve embraced their monstrous natures but at the same time live a life that causes the least possible problems (and there are far worse predators out there).

As the story begins we quickly meet our leading ladies.  Sloane, our MC and her bestie Naomi.  The two are chalk and cheese but their friendship has stood the test of time, even if they don’t see each other for months at a time they speak often and when they get back together it’s usually intense.  Sloane is about to have a birthday, she’s not feeling upbeat about another year in fact she’s reached the age where she’s beginning to not only notice fine lines but also to reflect where she is. With that in mind she’s not really in the party mood but it seems her husband has organised a get together break for Sloane and Naomi at a luxury retreat.  Personally, I smelled a rat – would he not want to spend time with his wife on her birthday – but what do I know, he’s perhaps being incredibly selfless and trying to cheer his wife up by reuniting her with her BFF.  Mmm, we’ll see.  Or more to the point – he’s a so-and-so.  Anyway, moving on.

So, our two ladies.  Sloane wants security.  She’s chosen stability, a home, a 9 to 5 job, a husband and the picket fence.  Is she happy, not really.  Naomi on the other hand is something of a wild child, travelling the planet, enjoying each day as though it’s her last, well, until she found herself working for her rock star boyfriend in a role that is becoming more intense as his star rises.  As you see, both our women are not totally happy.

Now, the setting.  The two are sharing a luxury cottage in a resort type setting with a small town nestled close by.  The cottage is a little unwelcoming and the weather is harsh but the two decide to make the best of it.  They pay a visit to the small town where Naomi promptly ditches Sloane for most of the night to talk to a handsome stranger.  The next night, Sloane’s birthday, Naomi has arranged for them both to attend a party.  Sloane has mixed feelings about the whole thing which are only intensified when the gates to the house clang shut behind them.  From there, well, find out for yourself.  In a nutshell though, the two women find themselves transformed.

What I really enjoyed about this.

Harrison is a gifted storyteller, I love the way she writes and she can really build atmosphere.  The chapters where Sloane and Naomi go to the party, for example, you just know that something is going to go wrong and boy does it go wrong.  From this point forward the women panic, they leave the house, determined to be alone and frankly to put as much space between them and the party scene as possible.  Of course, they have terrible thirst, they’re young vampires and they have little control.  The ensuing chaos is very dramatic.

The vampires here almost take a backseat to the transformation of these two friends as they feel their way into this new life.  It’s like they’re the parents (which I suppose they are) cleaning up the messes.  Of course, vampires can’t recklessly move through society killing and destroying at will, they’ll be discovered and eliminated.  They need secrecy and security.  Bolt holes to escape to.  They don’t need newbies running amok, leaving destruction in their wake.

I enjoyed this.  Never a dull moment.  I was happy to return to a world of predators with a lot of the lore that I’m already familiar with, if switched up a little.  I did have a few little issues that kept this from being as good a read as Cackle or Black Sheep.  I didn’t totally buy into the friendship between Sloane and Naomi.  Sometimes they just didn’t fit as well as I was being led to believe, there was resentment and anger brewing.  Also, there is quite a feeling of slow(ish) build up earlier in the novel before we really get to the meat of the story.  To be fair this isn’t something that really bothers me, I appreciate backstories and setting the scene, but, I felt like the ending was quite rushed by comparison.

Overall, I enjoyed this, I had some issues, I think I would have liked a little more from the vampires (just to be clear, I mentioned that they fall into the bored, beautiful variety, – this isn’t because being ‘turned’ creates some strange sort of beauty, yes, they are immortal and seem to remain ageless at the point they were turned, but they’re beautiful because they choose other attractive people to hang with and, in some respects, they’re bored because – ‘seen it, done it, been there’ is real for them.  The lore follows some already fairly established lines.  Thankfully, the author doesn’t try to elaborate on certain things – such as why vampires have no reflection – although this did give me a moment of pause, if they can’t cast a reflection, can they be caught on camera – please, somebody tell me the answer because I am literally not smart enough to figure this out.

Anyway, apart from a slightly peeved feeling about the rushed nature of the ending this was an entertaining read and one that I enjoyed.

I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 4 of 5 sink-your-teeth-into-this-one stars

#SPFBO X: Review: River of Crows by NP Thompson

For those who don’t know about SPFBO (the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off) – this is a competition created and run by Mark Lawrence.  The competition is now in its tenth year and you can find out more about all the other entrants and judges over on Mark Lawrence’s blog.

I separated my books into three batches which you can find herehere and here.  Having read the first 25% (at least) I’ve chosen five books that I intend to read further before choosing potential semi finalists to pass to the Critiquing Chemist to read. Today I am posting my third SPFBO review for River of Crows by NP Thompson.

River of Crows would not be a book that I would normally be drawn to, primarily because it’s aimed at the older end of MG/lower end of YA.  That being said, having read the first 25% of the book I did find myself hooked and wanting to read more.

I completed River of Crows last night and I can say that this was such a good read.  It’s the kind of story that is definitely aimed at a younger audience but can also be enjoyed by adults at the same time.  It brought back fond memories of stories such as The Wizard of Oz and The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe whilst standing quite firmly on it’s own two feet.

River of Crows is a story that brings to you a prophecy of the Chosen One and I think would make a great gateway book for younger readers into the fantasy world.

I thought this was really well executed.  The storyline had good pacing, the characters were easy to like and there are a few twists along the way.

As the story begins we meet Ty Baxter who is about to be sucked into a grand adventure after trying to help an injured bird, along with a classmate, Ayslenne, when they find themselves disappearing down a portal into another world (okay, I’m over simplifying so you’ll have to go and read it).

The world here is split between two places.  Ordane and Arcania.  Ordane has no magic whilst Arcania has sorcerers, shape shifters and mythical beasts.  There’s a good history to the setting.  There used to be only one place until the mages of the time separated the two in a bid to intensify the magic and keep none magic wielders at bay.  Arcania is now run by a tyrant, a strong mage who uses his talents to entrap children into the form of crows and use them as his Black Guard.  In turn this keeps his subjects in order as they are terrified of any repercussions.  This backstory is all delivered in a very natural way, no info dumps or huge drawn out history lessons.

The characters are easy to get along with.  Ty is very easy going and likes to help others but at the same time wants to find a way home.  Ayslenne is in search of her brother who has been taken by the Emperor and Ty, whilst homesick, promises to help her.  The two both go in search of a powerful mage who may be able to help both.  Along the way they make the acquaintance of three others and the five join together in search of answers.

The plot is well thought out.  The writing is clear and easy to get along with and the dialogue is quick and witty.

I have to say this was very entertaining.  Definitely not my typical read but it had no problems sinking it’s talons in and keeping me hooked to the end.  I highly recommend this for younger readers seeking out a good fantasy adventure.

I received a copy from the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My review for Fortitude’s Prize by Ceril N Domace, and The First Assignment by Billy Kramer can be found here and here.

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