#SPFBO 9: Finalist Review: Master of the Void by Wend Raven

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What is SPFBO 9?  This is  a competition where authors of self-published fantasy can enter their work. The objective to find a winner out of the 300 entries submitted.  Ten judges (or judging teams) each receive 30 entrants.  Each judge/team will eventually submit one finalist to the second round where a winner will eventually be decided upon. Check out Mark Lawrence’s post here to look at this year’s entrants, judges and allocations list.  Also, check out this page to see all the lovely finalists and the scoreboard for Phase 2 of the competition.

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This is a coming of age story with an interesting magic system and multiple povs.  The writing is good, there is plenty of travel and mystery and I enjoyed the whole ‘void’ concept.  However, I did have some issues that stopped me from loving this book as much as I’d hoped.

Set in the Seven Lands magic is fundamental to everyday life.  Basically, everyone has some element of magic even if it’s fairly simple or mundane.  We quickly learn that when a person turns 13 they can choose to undertake a magical ability test, of course, most participants expect this to be fairly run of the mill – the worst that could happen is maybe a low level magical ability.  As the story begins we meet our two primary characters – Derrius and Orimond.  Disaster strikes for both these characters – which I won’t go into – and sends them both on totally different, independent voyages of discovery.

What I liked about this – I really enjoyed the way the author takes the two main characters along completely different paths.  I enjoyed in particular the way that one character physically went on a real adventure and eventually seemed to find a measure of happiness in his life in spite of his disappointment at the start of the story.  I personally thought the way the characters’ disappointments fed into their eventual choices was very well executed.

The world is quite well explored and I enjoyed all the travel involved – particularly when a group of characters band together to go in search of someone.

I would say this has an epic fantasy feel.  There’s definitely a ‘the world is under threat’ feel and a sense of things generally coming to a head in the most critical fashion.

In terms of my issues.  I think there were too many povs.  I usually enjoy multiple povs but I felt that the characters didn’t feel distinct enough, I was sometimes muddled in terms of who I was reading about and I found the jumps forward in age a little perplexing. Maybe that just speaks of a level of impatience on my part because the timeline/confusion about the characters’ ages does resolve itself.  On top of this I just didn’t find myself forming firm attachments to any of the characters.  Which isn’t to say I disliked their storylines just that a firm favourite never really became apparent.

On top of this, and this is a personal thing of course, but this felt like it could have been shortened to make it a bit more punchy.  As it is the pacing felt a little inconsistent, certain areas felt like they progressed very slowly and then the conclusion seemed to plough forward very quickly indeed.

Anyway, issues aside, this has an easy style of writing, a good amount of world building and a well thought out elemental style magic system that I really liked and although I experienced a few issues I think it will have no problem finding its audience.

I received a copy through the author, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 6.5 of 10

Booking Ahead/Weekly Wrap Up

Sunday Post

I’m trying to get back into the habit of doing a round-up of the week just completed and also take a look at my plans for the forthcoming week.  I rather got out of the habit of doing so but I would like to reinstate this type of post as I feel it keeps me on track.  So, I’m linking up to The Sunday Post over at Kimberly’s  Caffeinated Reviewer.  Without further ado:

Books read this week:

This week I’ve had less time for reading and blogging – life ‘things’ keep getting in the way –  in particular the freezer going on the blink involving lots of running around cleaning up and cooking things that I wouldn’t otherwise have been cooking plus overall very bad weather and storms and wind blowing things into places they shouldn’t be.  Still, I managed to  complete The Classified Dossier – Sherlock Holmes and Dorian Gray by Christian Klavier.  I then went off track slightly and picked up Murder Road by Simone St James which I loved and in fact have already reviewed. Finally I picked up Oracle by Thomas Olde Heuvelt.  I was hoping to complete this by the end of the day but I’ve been side tracked again so probably one to complete next week now.

Complete Oracle by Thomas Olde Heuvelt.  I then have one final review book for March, Play of Shadows by Sebastien de Castell.  After that I’m going to see if I can complete the rest of my SPFBO finalists.  I’m also hoping to provide an update next week followed by reviews – one to be posted every few days (once I’ve drawn up my schedule).

Reviews Posted:

  1. The Warm Hands of Ghosts by Katherine Arden
  2. The Classified Dossier – Sherlock Holmes and Dorian Gray by Christian Klavier
  3. Murder Road by Simone St James

Booking Ahead/Weekly Wrap Up

Sunday Post

I’m trying to get back into the habit of doing a round-up of the week just completed and also take a look at my plans for the forthcoming week.  I rather got out of the habit of doing so but I would like to reinstate this type of post as I feel it keeps me on track.  So, I’m linking up to The Sunday Post over at Kimberly’s  Caffeinated Reviewer.  Without further ado:

Books read this week:

I’ve had a good week.  Although, our young dog Noodle managed to find (or make) a break in our perimeter fence and break free for a morning.  Her cunning plan for a bit of fun was thwarted when she realised that she couldn’t get back in the same way she’d left so she eventually called on the neighbours who kept her entertained until we got home.  Naughty Noodles.  In reading I managed to complete two backlist books, the Secrets of Hartwood Hall by Katie Lumsden and Crucible of Chaos by Sebastien de Castell.  I’ve started the audio book of Gods of The Wyrdwood by RJ Barker – still early days but I’m being pulled into this strange world.  And, I completed The Warm Hands of Ghosts by Katherine Arden which I loved.  I’ve also started another review book which I think I’ll probably finish today with luck – The Classified Dossier – Sherlock Holmes and Dorian Gray by Christian Klavier.

Complete The Classified Dossier – Sherlock Holmes and Dorian Gray by Christian Klavier.  Then I’m hoping to read another of my review books, Oracle by Thomas Olde Heuvelt.  I won’t make further plans than that.

Reviews Posted:

Booking Ahead/Weekly Wrap Up

Sunday Post

I’m trying to get back into the habit of doing a round-up of the week just completed and also take a look at my plans for the forthcoming week.  I rather got out of the habit of doing so but I would like to reinstate this type of post as I feel it keeps me on track.  So, I’m linking up to The Sunday Post over at Kimberly’s  Caffeinated Reviewer.  Without further ado:

Books read this week:

I’ve been playing catch up this week which I think is going quite well in spite of having a bad cold.  In terms of reviews I’ve managed to squeeze in quite a few – well, in fairness I scheduled one of my regular posts on the wrong day by accident so I made use of that and posted an extra review and I also posted a double review – two mini reviews in fact.   My reading has gone very well this week.  I read and absolutely loved The Tainted Cup by Robert Jackson Bennett.  My review will be posted very soon.  I’ve also read and already reviewed An Education In Malice by ST Gibson – it didn’t quite work for me unfortunately but I confess it’s a beautifully written story and incredibly atmospheric. I’ve also read two of my SPFBO finalists – so I’m very much on track in that regard – only four more finalists left to read now.  I need to start thinking about a posting schedule soon.  I’ve also started listening to an audio book – Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros.  So, that’s a lot of reading – but, this was probably assisted by the fact I wasn’t feeling well so not socialising as much or gardening, etc, – more time sitting around under a den of blankets with a hot drink and my kindle.

Next Week’s Reads:

Hopefully complete Fourth Wing.  I’ve also made a start on Empire of the Damned by Jay Kristoff.  This is a sample and not the full book but given what a chunkster this book is it will be good to get a head start on things.  Once I complete EotD my review books for February are all complete so I might then try one of my backlist books if time allows.

Reviews Posted:

The Trials of Empire (Empire of the Wolf #3) by Richard Swan

My Five Word TL:DR Review : I’m Missing This Series Already

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Wow.  Just wow.

Okay, the Empire of the Wolf has been a truly amazing series.  In fact I hardly know where to begin with this final review.

I was in fact scared to pick up this final instalment, I always feel a little worried when I’m on the last book of a series, especially one that has been so very good.  Will it continue to impress – in fact sometimes I think that’s why I have so many incomplete series in my past – fear that things would go pear shaped at the very end and ruin my happy glow.  Basically, right now, I’m procrastinating because I can’t get my thoughts into order.

I would mention that I’m going to dive straight into my review without too much description of plot, I hope to avoid spoilers but I can’t promise anything more and I would say if you’re reading this review without having read the first two books you should go back and start from the beginning.  This is a series that has gone from strength to strength, the characters have grown – not always in ways you may like, some have fallen along the way and the plot has developed into this terrific melting pot of religious zealotry, horrific infernal beings that threaten the existence of humankind and one man’s stand for justice and peace – even if he’s becoming a little frayed around the edges.

TToE drops us back into the story where we left off.  Lets just be brutally honest, the Empire is having a nightmare of a time, it’s basically teetering on the brink and faces almost certain destruction.  Vonvalt, one of the few men with the strength and faith to make a difference is living in exile, outlawed by the Emperor but still not ready or prepared to accept defeat.  In this final hour he is determined to rally together allies from the most unexpected quarters. at the end of the day (which coincidentally is nigh), when all humanity is faced with evil and chaos, well, the enemy of your enemy is your friend (for a short time at least).  So, yes, Vonvolt looks to all quarters for aide.  Of course he has some explaining and convincing to do because why should these old enemies help the Empire now?

This third in series does have a different feel to the previous two books.  Previously there’s been a mystery of some description taking place that Vonvalt has been called to investigate and mete out justice.  This time round, well, there’s no time for such niceties.  There’s much racing across the country in search of allies.  The tension is ratcheting up nicely, nerves are fraught and the main two characters are definitely not getting on well.

Which brings me to Helene.  I love her as a narrator and in fact love the choice that the author made to have her as the storyteller.  She surprised me a little in this edition.  She’s always been quite a steadfast character but in this final edition she becomes a little too inflexible at times.  She judges Vonvalt for his actions.  Lets just say she’s always had him on a pedestal, a paragon of virtue and now he is sullied by his actions – in her eyes at least.  Of course, he isn’t acting totally within the parameters that he would have previously.  Vonvalt is a man of the world, he’s older and more experienced than Helene and he realises that sometimes you have to sacrifice some of your values for the greater good.

In this final edition not only the tension is ramped up – there is plenty of action.  Vonvalt manages to rally some of the strangest allies to the cause and for a brief moment you begin to feel almost hopeful.  Then things get absolutely crazy and literally go to hell – with or without a handcart.  The finale, well, what can I say.  There was so much going on, so much death and destruction on both the mortal and spiritual plane – which actually leads me into another trail of thought.  Swann has given us such a lot to think about with this series.  Ultimately, it feels like everything revolves around right and wrong, good or evil, but at the same time it shows us that nothing is ever quite that simple be it religion or justice.

And, I think I should end there. I don’t want to inadvertently give anything away although I also feel like I’ve said not nearly enough – and such it is when reviewing a book that has stolen your heart.

To conclude the Empire of the Wolf is an absolutely brilliant series.  It took my breath away and completely surpassed any and all expectations that I had.  The third was perhaps a little heavier on action and missing the mysteries that I had enjoyed previously but regardless was a perfect end to an absolutely fantastic fantasy trilogy.  If you haven’t started this series, or maybe you’re sitting on the fence a little, I would encourage you to jump on board and give this a try.  Frankly I’m hopeful of a return to this world.

I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 4.5 of 5 stars

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