Stormdancer by Jay Kristoff
22 July 2013
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Tags: book No.1, Jay Kristoff, Stormdancer, The David Gemmell Legend Awards, The Lotus War
Just finished reading Stormdancer by Jay Kristoff. I enjoyed this although I didn’t absolutely love it and it’s difficult to say why exactly. I do think it’s a really interesting idea and it certainly has plenty going for it. Set in an alternative Japan where the air is polluted by toxic fumes and the countryside is being slowly destroyed with many animals becoming extinct as their habitats disappear. Kigen City is the centre of everything. It’s residents wear goggles and masks to avoid damaging their lungs. They travel in airships manned by Cloud Walkers. Kigen is a city of contrasts. The Shogun living in decadent splendour whilst many of the residents live in squalor and die in poverty. On top of this we have the Lotus Guild. A strange organisation seemingly controlled by religious zealots whose aim is to rid the population of the ”impure” (people who have developed certain abilities such as telepathy or the ability to connect to animals (keening). This Guild provides the machines and technology that keep everything ticking over and so there exists between them and the Shogun a strange relationship which basically means they both overlook each other’s imperfections because it suits them to do so. The Lotus Guild are responsible for the production of Lotus. This plant has many uses one of which seems to be to send anyone who smokes it into a temporary oblivion – it is also of course highly addictive!
And so, at the start of the story, and following a dream in which the Shogun sees himself riding into victory on the back of a Thunder Tiger, Masaru, the Emperor’s master hunter, is commanded to hunt and capture such a beast and as much as this may seem like the impossible (or the whim of a madman) Masaru is honour bound to carry out the instruction and so he sets off, aboard an Airship named ‘Child’, with his daughter Yukiko and two companions Kasumi and Akihito. Of course, the Thunder Tiger (or Griffin) does exist and Masaru succeeds in capturing the creature – however, his triumph is short lived as the airship is consumed by flames following a lightening strike. The Griffin, captured and caged aboard the ship is about to plummet to his death until Yukiko makes a heroic bid and comes to it’s rescue and this is the where the story really begins.
Yukiko and the thunder tiger, Buruu, find themselves in the forest where the strange bond they have developed, through Yukiko’s ability to mentally connect to animals, begins to grow. Yukiko starts to look at the world with different eyes and Buruu, through his connection to Yukiko starts to develop a more complex way of thought. For me personally Yukiko and Buruu are what make this story special. Their bond and ability to speak through each others minds are really special. I really did love the griffin and his straightforward, no nonsense, way of thinking. He’s just this beautiful, majestic animal, huge, terrifying and stunning. Wouldn’t everyone love such a companion.
Anyway, Yukiko and Buruu start their journey through the forest. They pick up another companion along the way, Kin. Kin is one of the Guild and as such despised and abhorred by others. He’s lonely and developed a liking for Yukiko whilst aboard the Child but Yukiko must be careful, she wants to help Kin but she has to keep her secret abilities hidden – otherwise she will be taken by the Guild and burned alive to rid the world of her impurities! The three also uncover a strange hidden village and this is where the main thrust of the story really picks up – I won’t go further into detail about the plot. Suffice to say that Yukiko and Buruu are going to return to Kigen and play a strange game of intrigue that will prove to be very dangerous to both of them and their friends.
Okay, I think the world building is one of the author’s strong points. He really does put a lot of thought into this and provides plenty of detail, back stories and myths and legends. However, I think in some respects, although I think he has a lovely style of writing I do think he has a tendency to overdo certain detail. Don’t’ get me wrong, I’m a bit of a stickler for attention to detail but I think that there are certain elements of the story that have become a little bogged the description – almost to the extent that you lose the thread a little and have to backtrack! I certainly wouldn’t say it spoiled the story for me but definitely the first third of the book felt a little slow and I think this was due to the wealth of information – I suppose it’s a trap for some ‘first in series’ books where the author is trying to paint as thorough a picture as possible of his imagined world.
The Characters were a mixed bunch and to be honest not the strong point of the story for me. The father, seemingly a hopeless addict wallowing in his own personal world of grief. The loyal friend Akihito. The tough female warrior Kasumi, strangely devoted to Masaru. The latter two could definitely have done with a little bit more definition although that being said they don’t play a massive part. The father, I felt quite detached from in a lot of ways. I wouldn’t say I disliked him but then I didn’t particularly like him either and I had a similar feeling of ambivalence towards a number of the other characters. I really wanted to detest the Shogun – again, I definitely didn’t like him – but he wasn’t the baddie that you love to hate! His sister was a particularly interesting character and one that I would have enjoyed reading more of – not quite the silly girl that her fancy dresses and make up at first portray. I think the characters are my biggest criticism in a way. I thought the endings were a little rushed, the Shogun’ s character was underdeveloped, his sister could have played a much stronger part and the whole romance issue felt like a token gesture really and not necessary to the plot.
Yet, in spite of the criticisms I didn’t dislike this and it is an impressive debut – I just simply didn’t love it as much as I first thought I would. I will still pick up the next in the series. I would like to see how the story develops from here. I think the author has come up with a really unique fantasy with an interesting central theme. I enjoyed the setting, although how authentic any of this is I really couldn’t say, I liked the style of writing and, on top of that, check out this absolutely gorgeous cover:

Stormdancer, image from Goodreads
I received a copy of this from the David Gemmell Legend Awards in return for a honest review and the above is my own opinion.
Emperor of Thorns by Mark Lawrence
18 July 2013
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Tags: dark fantasy, Emperor of Thorns, Grimdark, King of Thorns, Mark Lawrence, Prince of Thorns
Mark Lawrence is the author who brought to us Prince and then King of Thorns. Both excellent reads. The first book a quite unique experience for me in fantasy and the second which I felt actually surpassed it! (No small achievement) So I confess I went into Emperor with a certain amount of trepidation about whether or not the author could pull the rabbit out of the hat yet again. Personally I think he managed to pull not only a rabbit out of the hat but a long line of knotted hankies and a bunch of other random magical props! I loved it and in fact would go so far as to say it is the perfect way to conclude the series.
How to begin. If you’re reading this review you’ve probably already read the first two books and so the violence and bloodshed that make up a part of Jorg’s life are more than likely known to you. If you haven’t, what the hell are you doing here – get out right now and go and read these in sequence. Believe me when I say you can’t join this story half way along in some half ditched attempt to find out what’s going on. Get thee to the beginning!
Okay, I always try to write a review that doesn’t contain spoilers and this review will be no different. Obviously with the proviso that a review of a third book is actually already spoilery before you even put pen to paper! The very fact that there are sequels clearly means that the lead character has survived thus far after all.
So, again, with Emperor we have a dual time line taking place. Jorg has grown a little older but we still flit to his earlier self. He’s just as ambitious as he ever was and still equally afraid of the memories he carries around with him (quite literally). His father remains the only person who can instill fear in him – something that never happens to Jorg at any other point or with any other foe no matter how terrible. Looking at the current time line, Jorg’s wife is pregnant. He still thinks occasionally of Catherine but he’s now set his sights on attending the meeting of the 100 and becoming Emperor. He’s going to this meeting of his peers and he’s determined that nothing will stand in his way (and knowing Jorg you kind of think he’ll make it happen). In Jorg’s younger timeline he’s travelling the world in search of knowledge and also support. Led on by the ghost of one of the builders from the past he goes from pillar to post – almost without knowing it being led by the nose – and yet even under those circumstances never failing to cause surprises and manipulate even the most dire circumstances to his advantage along the way.
As with the last book you need to think of the bigger picture. It may feel at points as though you’re simply reading a little anecdote from here or there. A faint reminisence of something from Jorg’s past. But this isn’t the case. The stories are, of course, all entertaining by themselves but this isn’t the overall intention so take note. Lawrence is the master of looking at the whole and nothing contained within these pages is unnecessary. Every word plays a part. Lawrence wrote a masterful story and then deconstructed it in such a way to make it both incredibly compelling and much more difficult to second guess than if it was told in a linear fashion. This may seem like a fairly simple plot device, or even like a lack of straightforwardness but for me it made all three books riveting. That’s not to say that I didn’t sometimes feel like growling when I was dragged away from the current story, just as it reached a critical scene, to be taken either backwards or forwards to another part of Jorg’s timeline. And yet, no matter how begrudgingly I might tear myself away before I knew it I was completely immersed in the new story which then seemed to gain equally compelling status. To be honest Jorg’s stories are gripping and in this final instalment we get to see so much more of his inner emotions. The more human side of him if you will. I’m not trying to say he’s become a bit of a simpering faint heart but he has developed. He longs for certain friendships, he doesn’t really love his wife but he cares for her in his own way, he’s scared to be a father. On the flip side of course, and just in case you’re getting all worried round about now, he’s still a raging psychopath who stabs and beheads people first and asks questions later. I’m not saying it’s big or clever but the way in which this is done never really gives you much sympathy for the victims because they’re frankly usually pretty horrendous and the sort who you can’t help thinking he’s doing his world a favour in getting rid of. Okay, there are a few victims who you have a degree of sympathy for, who are simply in the wrong place at the wrong time but I think Lawrence has a reason for all this. Put simply I love what Lawrence has done with all of these individual threads. Basically I think that in writing a character such as Jorg there are very few limits. He will do and say virtually anything and as a reader you’re never quite sure what to expect. You still hang on in there each time a new situation arises and foolishly expect Jorg to act in a typical fashion and of course he never does and this is his surprise. This must be such a liberating experience for the author.
The other thing that I loved in this last instalment is the resolution and the coming together of the story in a way that leaves you no internal niggles. The answers to all the ‘whys’ and ‘wherefores’. Okay, I’m not talking about a straightforward show and tell here. But, as far as I’m concerned every piece slotted into place for the grand finale. Unlike that really annoying puzzle where you get to the end and there’s a piece missing, or, the bookshelf you’re putting up only to find you have a piece missing, or more worrying a few pieces left over. This all comes together like a symphony. Taken individually and the pieces might be pleasing to listen to, interesting or amusing even but put them all together, the full orchestra and now you’re listening to something amazing that will for a moment make you sit perfectly still and listen, take you some place else.
So, as a fairly brief synopsis we have a convergence of worlds here. As in previous worlds the veil between things living and dead has grown thin. The Dark King and his necromancers, also not content with their lot in life and equally as ambitious as Jorg, are crossing that veil. The other rulers are also all trying their hand for the ultimate prize. Jorg, blood thirsty and afraid of nothing is marching forward with his retinue and another faction, not previously acknowledged as a threat, now enter the fray – the ghosts of builders past. They’re all going to come together for an explosive ending. It’s a brave ending and I think it’s perfectly fitting not to mention has a couple of twists that I didn’t see until they were upon me. It’s obvious that ML had an amazing time writing this character and threw convention to the wind and it makes it a great reading experience. As a result Jorg is unlike any character I’ve ever read before. He’s terrible but in such a way that I still want to like him! That’s just so wrong isn’t it?
Be in no doubt though – there is violence here not to mention other scenes such as torture that some people may find uncomfortable to read. You’ve been warned.
End result. A great trilogy. Dark fantasy at it’s grimmest and an absolute must read.
Totally unconnected to books…
But, randomly I was thinking about movie soundtracks and the effect they have on the movie itself. Okay, it wasn’t totally random, I was watching a particular movie and thinking how much of an impact the music has. (I was watching Star Wars – in case you’re intrigued – the first one, by which I mean the actual first one and not the fourth one that is now called the first).
So, thinking about films there must be loads of examples where you can think of a film where you also love the music and more to the point how many films would you be able to guess instantly by just a short snippet of the music from the film. I think the following are good examples:
- Jaws – (Horror)
- The Good the Bad and the Ugly (Western)
- Pulp Fiction (Gangster)
- Lord of the Rings (Fantasy)
- Star Wars (Sci Fi)
Stuck on examples from comedy, romance and historical – feel free to chuck in some suggestions!
The Ocean at the End of the Lane by Neil Gaiman
14 July 2013
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Tags: Neil Gaiman, The Ocean at the End of the Lane
Just finished reading The Ocean at the End of the Lane by Neil Gaiman which I loved, enough that it gave me goose pimples and tears in my eyes!
This is only a short story, like a snippet of memory from childhood when you think everything is possible and anything can pretty much be something else. The underneath of your kitchen table is a fort, the tree at the bottom of the garden is Nottingham Forest and the pond in the farmyard at the bottom of the lane is an ocean. What I loved about this story is it makes you think back. There’s always one perfect summer from your past, you can recall being on holiday, sitting on the beach eating sandwiches and sausage rolls, everything tasting a little as though it had been seasoned with sand grains, and you still believed in the impossible. You wanted to explore that rock pool and you believed the caves to your back might have ghosts, smugglers from the past or maybe something more sinister. This is what this story captures for me and perhaps that’s why I still love to read books like this because it keeps that small grain of something special alive inside. As you grow older you forget the stories you created and lived in, those weren’t fairies at the bottom of the garden and of course you can’t really do magic! Not to mention the world seemed so much bigger – when you revisit the places you used to live and play they’re not the same as you remember somehow. That field is just a field – it’s not the size of a continent any more. This story reawakens some of those memories – or at least it did for me.
The tale is told in a flashback. A man revisiting memories from his past. We jump back a number of years to a young boy who lives in one of those ramshackle houses that no longer seem to exist. Bits added on and no particular order. This young boy lives in a world of books and imagination, which makes him into something of an oddity and probably not the most popular boy at school – a fact that is revealed by the absence of attendees at his seventh birthday party. But he’s happy, he has his books and his kitten for company, until a lodger comes to stay and starts a string of events that turn things upside down for a while.
What I love about this book is that whilst it’s fairly short the author’s use of words bring the world to life for me. I can picture the house and the countryside, the farm and even the pond. Granted my imagination might convey something completely different from the next reader but I think that’s part of the magic of this story. It will be unique for each reader. I really enjoyed seeing the world through a 7 year old’s eyes. Gaiman has managed to reach back and give this a child’s perspective. When you read you can see the truth behind what is really taking place but only momentarily before the world shimmers and you’re back inside the fantasy again.
At times quite sinister, certainly the varmints turn into something very creepy not to mention Ursula Monkton – the nanny from hell! The whole scene where the young boy is unable to get beyond the confines of his home and garden, like he’s trapped – is it just that Ursula is a regular nanny, protecting him and keeping him from trouble or is she keeping him trapped and exactly how does she manage to be everywhere at once! She really has got eyes in the back of her head.
Evocative of lots of things all rolled into one and playing on superstition, folklore and myth the tale is beautifully told.
I’m not going to elaborate further. All I can say is that I loved this and hopefully that comes across here. And, I don’t think this is just some ‘Neil-Gaiman-can’t-do-anything-wrong-hero-worship’ type of review because frankly I don’t ‘love’ everything that he’s written. Personally though I enjoyed this as much as The Graveyard Book and Neverwhere and it will be one of those books that I will pick up again and again. I think that if you want a little flashback, to be taken back to an age when things held magic then you should give this a go. Who knows what will happen…
Three by Jay Posey
Just finished reading Three by Jay Posey.
This is a post apocalyptic world where people are all connected through internal ITs (wired). The world as we know it no longer exists and small pockets of civilisation exist living behind high walls and strong gates. Protection from the Weirs. The Weirs are a sort of zombie type creature. No longer alive or cognisant but with glowing blue eyes, the frantic compulsion to hunt and kill and the ability to communicate through sounds that can only be described as static.
Enter into this world Three. A lone bounty hunter. Tough and with killer instincts. He’s used to living alone and surviving in a harsh world where the phrase dog eat dog is closer to the truth than you would like to think. He’s brought in his latest find, been paid in hard cash which is pretty rare in these times and is now looking forward to making the acquaintance of some hard liquor to try and help him chill out – the hard cash will certainly help him along on this mission – and he almost succeeds, just starting to bask in the hazy glow verging on drunkenness when a woman in need, with a small child in tow, comes crashing into his life with her pleas for help. Three isn’t used to caring about others. He lives by a strict code that keeps him alive and taking on others who are not so finally tuned can frankly mean death in this world. Cass is the damsel in distress with her son Wren although don’t be fooled into thinking she’s some shrinking violet here because that’s the furthest thing from the truth. Cass is not innocent, and whilst she may be seeking some sort of last minute redemption for her past actions, you won’t be in any sort of doubt from fairly early on as to the past life she led. Basically, Cass is running away from her former life and in doing so has set up a chase which will lead in bloodshed.
Okay, it’s difficult to say too much about the characters without giving things away. What I can say is that none of the characters are exactly as you think and there are surprises along the way in terms of all of them. I really enjoyed the way the author kept things back in the story not giving much away and drawing me in with a slow reveal. I also quite enjoy the fact that he doesn’t hold your hand. You’re chucked straight in and expected to hit the ground running. No gentle introduction, no coddling. After all, we’ve all ready zombie/post apocalyptic books or seen the movies that give us a flavour for this type of world and I think it’s sort of assumed that you’ll pick things up (even if you haven’t you’ll be able to jump on board). There is a little element of sci-fi thrown in with all the ‘wired’ attributes that people have which mean they can contact each other, access internal time clocks and other such information – it’s all a bit ‘big brotherish’ – I read it almost like people are chipped and so whilst they are able to access certain information it also means they are traceable and ultimately all linked. I also thought this gave me an understanding of the Weirs – almost like the ‘person’ has died or been taken over, but the body was still alive and running on something else – maybe the strange ‘wired’ connection keeping them going somehow – basically I’m not 100% sure!
I liked the pace of the story. There’s no messing about or going round the houses. It’s fast and there’s plenty of action and I think that the author’s use of the whole mystery concerning the characters keeps your attention because you simply have to know what’s going on.
I wouldn’t say the world building is exactly thorough but I didn’t find it a problem. I got the impression of a world lying in ruins and dust. Little food or water. Very few other resources. People, in most instances, reduced to their very basic self with little pity or self respect for other humans. There isn’t an over abundance of words here, no flowery descriptiveness. If a leaf falls from the branch you won’t know, well, there may not be any branches for that matter! But, I quite like the style here. To the point and with nothing wasted.
In terms of characters. I quite like Three. He’s a good deal more patient than I would have been given the circumstances he finds himself in and in fact shows a completely vulnerable side to his character along with his ninja-kick-ass-building-climbing-knife wielding self. A bit of a stereotype in that he’s a tough guy who is suddenly compelled to help someone else (who just so happens to be incredibly easy on the eye) but, nonetheless, quite likeable. Cass. I liked her, but I also disliked her. Sometimes she was tough, and quite merciless, she loves Wren, and that much is apparent, she’s lead a very dubious past and is now trying to run away and make things better. I can live with all of that but sometimes the assumptions she made about Three sort of grated a little, felt a little bit judgemental, which given her own past…. She wanted it all ways. Throw herself on the mercy of others and then give them a hard time about themselves. It sort of came across as a little hypocritical on her part – given that she was being a good deal less than honest about who she was – or more to the point what she was involved with and running from (and in the process bringing down upon others). Basically, I’m all for the strong, tough females but if you’re going to go in that direction then don’t then turn on the ‘female’ switch when it’s convenient. Put bluntly, Cass was trouble with a capital T. I’m not saying that she’d not had her share of trouble and hard times but that’s nothing unique in a world this harsh – but, if you look at it objectively – she involved a lot of other ‘relatively’ innocent others in her running, caused a bit of a tide of circumstances. She’s the pebbles in the pond, throw it in and watch the ripples grow.
In terms of criticisms. I had the obvious mixed feelings about Cass – which I won’t clarify any further to avoid spoilers. There is very little clarification given about the world portrayed in the book – no explanations for the ability of certain characters – other than that maybe they’ve mutated perhaps?? On top of that I found the action scenes a little jarring – only in that they sort of read a little bit more like a commentary than a description. I realise that’s probably a bit vague but it was the feeling I had on a couple of occasions – not enough to spoil my enjoyment though.
I enjoyed this book. I think it’s a great idea that if not totally unique manages to bring something different to the scene. I liked the tension and suspense that the author achieves. I also like the fact that he assumes that as a reader you will bring your imagination with you. I will certainly read other books by this author.
I received a copy of this book from Net Galley in exchange for a honest review.




