#SPFBO X: Review: Smile and Be a Villain by Yves Donlon
16 September 2024
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Tags: #SPFBO X, blogging, Books, hamlet, literature, ophelia, Review, reviews, shakespeare, Smile and Be a Villain, Yves Donlon
For those who don’t know about SPFBO (the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off) – this is a competition created and run by Mark Lawrence. The competition is now in its tenth year and you can find out more about all the other entrants and judges over on Mark Lawrence’s blog.
I separated my books into three batches which you can find here, here and here. Having read the first 25% (at least) I’ve chosen five books that I intend to read further before choosing potential semi finalists to pass to the Critiquing Chemist to read. Today I am posting my fifth and final SPFBO review for Smile and Be a Villain by Yves Donlon.
SABAV is a reimagining of Hamlet with magic. This is very well written and so lovely to read, I really enjoyed it. I would say that no former knowledge of Hamlet is necessary, I only have the bare basics of the story personally and I didn’t feel that this suffered as a result. I would also mention that this is only the opening gambit that provides a thoughtful backstory and concludes more or less where the play begins. It’s well done and cleverly thought out.
As the story starts Hamlet is being sent to Wittenberg, in shame after being discovered in a compromising situation. Here he is expected to study and before long he’s made friends with two characters who he spends most of his time with, Rosencrantz and Guildendtern. His new friends beguile Hamlet with their knowledge of magic and begin to show him the basics although you can sense that they were rather careful with exactly how much they shared. Meanwhile, back at Helsingør, Ophelia is also suffering, the Queen has cast her off in shame and on top of that she’s really struggling to cope with the Corruption that seems to be overcoming the castle, constantly renewing wards in a bid to overcome the dark tendrils that are encroaching and nipping at everyone’s heels. Added to this there is tension and war is brewing.
What I really enjoyed about this.
I thought the writing, the dialogue and the set up were excellent. I found myself simply enjoying the read just for the joy of reading. I wouldn’t say that there’s an over abundance of description but I had no struggle imagining the set up. Ophelia and Hamlet are the narrators, I enjoyed this aspect of jumping between the two and also it gave us eyes and ears in both locations.
The characters come across well. They have so much more depth here with the time given to explore their inner thoughts and insecurities. Hamlet, for example, comes across as an indecisive teenager whilst Ophelia comes across as strong willed and determined. The two share a close friendship and argue almost like brother and sister.
I really liked the magic. The Corruption in the castle is a byproduct of too much magic use. Mirrors can be used as portals to other magical places and this is an element that I really enjoyed. On top of this there are little asides, such as one of the characters who has a hidden object with an interesting backstory. Hamlet in particular is absorbed by the need to know more about the magic and his heedless rush to find out whatever he can puts him in a predicament that almost sends him crazy.
In terms of criticisms. I think I would have liked to know more about the magic and the Corruption. Helsingør seems to be almost overrun with dark tendrils which makes me wonder just who is using enough magic to create so much byproduct. I would also mention that this is not a short and snappy read. It comes in around 500 pages, but, again, I didn’t have an issue with that personally. I liked the style of writing and was quite immersed.
In conclusion, this was a really good read and I look forward to seeing what the author comes up with next.
I received a copy from the author, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
My review for Fortitude’s Prize by Ceril N Domace, The First Assignment by Billy Kramer, River of Crows by NP Thompson and Touched by Magic by Celine Jeanjean can be found here, here, here. and here.
Booking Ahead/Weekly Wrap Up
15 September 2024
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Tags: #SPFBO, blogging, Booking Ahead, Books, Weekly wrap up

Books read this week:
I seem to have had a busy week this week so I’m a little behind with blog hopping and comments. I’m quite happy with my reading and reviewing (it felt like my reading was going slowly but when I look at my books this week that clearly wasn’t the case. I’m still reading The Gods Below by Andrea Stewart (although I’ve decided to put it down and pick it up in a few days – it’s a mood thing). I read and reviewed So Thirsty by Rachel Harrison, I also read the other vampire story that I was excited about Lucy Undying by Kiersten White. In SPFBO news I’ve now completed the five books I chose to read fully. Touched by Magic by Celine Jeanjean and Smile and Be A Villain by Yves Donlon – I’m now waiting to see what books the Critiquing Chemist will be giving me to read..
Next Week’s Reads:
This week I am hoping to read a ghost story with an interesting historic setting, The Haunting of Moscow House by Olesya Salnikova Gilmore and I’m also keen to pick up Gorse by Sam K Horton.
Reviews Posted:
- This Girl’s a Killer by Emma C Wells
- So Thirsty by Rachel Harrison
- Touched by Magic by Celine Jeanjean
Outstanding Reviews
- The September House by Carissa Orlando
- Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros
- Lucy Undying by Kiersten White
- Smile and be a Villain by Yves Donlon
#SPFBO X: Review: Touched by Magic (Razor’s Edge Chronicles #1) by Celine Jeanjean
14 September 2024
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Tags: #SPFBO X, Book Reviews, Books, Celine Jeanjean, Fantasy, Razor's Edge Chronicles #1, reviews, Touched by Magic
For those who don’t know about SPFBO (the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off) – this is a competition created and run by Mark Lawrence. The competition is now in its tenth year and you can find out more about all the other entrants and judges over on Mark Lawrence’s blog.
I separated my books into three batches which you can find here, here and here. Having read the first 25% (at least) I’ve chosen five books that I intend to read further before choosing potential semi finalists to pass to the Critiquing Chemist to read. Today I am posting my fourth SPFBO review for Touched by Magic by Celine Jeanjean.
I had such a good time reading Touched by Magic. This is the first in an urban fantasy series, it’s a relatively short instalment and there is, as you would expect for an opening book, a feeling of the stage being set. But, the pacing was good, the storyline was interesting and I liked the characters. I’m always on the lookout for something new and I would definitely like to read more from this world.
We are introduced to the character of Apiya, one of the magic touched. Apiya has very little magic and the little she has is of a very gentle nature. Consequently, she lives a fairly sheltered life under the protection of a much more powerful Mayak. Apiya is a barber to the supernatural but she’s keen to begin seeing more of this world and her wish is granted when she becomes the custodian of a Pari-pari egg, an undertaking that is much more dangerous than it first appeared.
Apiya lives in Panong, an island that provides a home to many supernatural creatures. In this world we have the Mayak – magically powerful that covers a range of different creatures such as the pontianak, kitsune, etc. I loved the Asian influence that comes through easily as the story progresses, not just by references to food and clothing, etc, but also the coming together of different cultures that lead to am impressive and diverse cast and some interesting and new creatures.
The characters are easy to like. Apiya tells the story well, alongside her witty remarks you can see she’s modest and doesn’t overplay her own abilities. If she’s in a sticky situation she knows it and she’s very aware of the shortcomings of her own magic. She has a magic touched friend called Chai, a powerful Mayak boss called Mr Sangong and a trusty dog called Hunter (for the cat lovers out there – never fear, there is a talking cat at the Barber’s shop – because of course there is (and it has a cockney accent being from London). On top of this we have the introduction of a Mayak character, a businessman known as Sarroch who is easy on the eye, although we don’t yet know is true form – but, I must stress, there was no romance here, it has potential to develop in that direction in future instalments but that might not necessarily be the case.
The story is very easy to fall into and the pacing is pretty much consistent. I mean, this is a short book so there isn’t too much time for hanging around or hand holding – although I thought everything was well laid out.
Put simply, I enjoyed this one and I’m keen to read more.
I received a copy from the author, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
My review for Fortitude’s Prize by Ceril N Domace, The First Assignment by Billy Kramer and River of Crows by NP Thompson can be found here, here, and here.
Friday Face Off: The Bay by Allie Reynolds
13 September 2024
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Tags: Allie Reynolds, Friday Face off, The Bay

Today I’m returning to the Friday Face Off, originally created by Books by Proxy). I’ve missed these for the past few months and so would like to get back to comparing covers (and hopefully I will be updating this page with a new banner. This is an opportunity to look at a book of your choice and shine the spotlight on the covers. Of course this only works for those books that have alternative covers (although sometimes I use this to look at a series of books to choose a favourite). . So, if you have a book that has alternative covers, highlight them and choose your favourite. If you’re taking part it would be great if you leave a link so I can take a look at what you’ve chosen.
This week I’ve chosen a book by an author that I like. The Bay (or The Swell) by Allie Reynolds. Here are the covers:
My favourite this week:
I like both. They both feel ominous. Which is your favourite?
Join me next week in highlighting one of your reads with different covers.
Review: So Thirsty by Rachel Harrison
My Five Word TL:DR Review: Two Friends, One Wild Party
Rachel Harrison is a great storyteller and I love her supernatural stories which usually involve strong female friendships (well, the books I’ve read so far at least).
So Thirsty is her latest creation and in her usual style she brings the supernatural to life once again, this time in the form of vampires. Vampires are definitely the new ‘black’ at the moment. It seems we went through a very dry spot for a while and I confess I was happy for some vampires to show their fangs once again. The creatures in between these pages are the bored and beautiful type. They’ve embraced their monstrous natures but at the same time live a life that causes the least possible problems (and there are far worse predators out there).
As the story begins we quickly meet our leading ladies. Sloane, our MC and her bestie Naomi. The two are chalk and cheese but their friendship has stood the test of time, even if they don’t see each other for months at a time they speak often and when they get back together it’s usually intense. Sloane is about to have a birthday, she’s not feeling upbeat about another year in fact she’s reached the age where she’s beginning to not only notice fine lines but also to reflect where she is. With that in mind she’s not really in the party mood but it seems her husband has organised a get together break for Sloane and Naomi at a luxury retreat. Personally, I smelled a rat – would he not want to spend time with his wife on her birthday – but what do I know, he’s perhaps being incredibly selfless and trying to cheer his wife up by reuniting her with her BFF. Mmm, we’ll see. Or more to the point – he’s a so-and-so. Anyway, moving on.
So, our two ladies. Sloane wants security. She’s chosen stability, a home, a 9 to 5 job, a husband and the picket fence. Is she happy, not really. Naomi on the other hand is something of a wild child, travelling the planet, enjoying each day as though it’s her last, well, until she found herself working for her rock star boyfriend in a role that is becoming more intense as his star rises. As you see, both our women are not totally happy.
Now, the setting. The two are sharing a luxury cottage in a resort type setting with a small town nestled close by. The cottage is a little unwelcoming and the weather is harsh but the two decide to make the best of it. They pay a visit to the small town where Naomi promptly ditches Sloane for most of the night to talk to a handsome stranger. The next night, Sloane’s birthday, Naomi has arranged for them both to attend a party. Sloane has mixed feelings about the whole thing which are only intensified when the gates to the house clang shut behind them. From there, well, find out for yourself. In a nutshell though, the two women find themselves transformed.
What I really enjoyed about this.
Harrison is a gifted storyteller, I love the way she writes and she can really build atmosphere. The chapters where Sloane and Naomi go to the party, for example, you just know that something is going to go wrong and boy does it go wrong. From this point forward the women panic, they leave the house, determined to be alone and frankly to put as much space between them and the party scene as possible. Of course, they have terrible thirst, they’re young vampires and they have little control. The ensuing chaos is very dramatic.
The vampires here almost take a backseat to the transformation of these two friends as they feel their way into this new life. It’s like they’re the parents (which I suppose they are) cleaning up the messes. Of course, vampires can’t recklessly move through society killing and destroying at will, they’ll be discovered and eliminated. They need secrecy and security. Bolt holes to escape to. They don’t need newbies running amok, leaving destruction in their wake.
I enjoyed this. Never a dull moment. I was happy to return to a world of predators with a lot of the lore that I’m already familiar with, if switched up a little. I did have a few little issues that kept this from being as good a read as Cackle or Black Sheep. I didn’t totally buy into the friendship between Sloane and Naomi. Sometimes they just didn’t fit as well as I was being led to believe, there was resentment and anger brewing. Also, there is quite a feeling of slow(ish) build up earlier in the novel before we really get to the meat of the story. To be fair this isn’t something that really bothers me, I appreciate backstories and setting the scene, but, I felt like the ending was quite rushed by comparison.
Overall, I enjoyed this, I had some issues, I think I would have liked a little more from the vampires (just to be clear, I mentioned that they fall into the bored, beautiful variety, – this isn’t because being ‘turned’ creates some strange sort of beauty, yes, they are immortal and seem to remain ageless at the point they were turned, but they’re beautiful because they choose other attractive people to hang with and, in some respects, they’re bored because – ‘seen it, done it, been there’ is real for them. The lore follows some already fairly established lines. Thankfully, the author doesn’t try to elaborate on certain things – such as why vampires have no reflection – although this did give me a moment of pause, if they can’t cast a reflection, can they be caught on camera – please, somebody tell me the answer because I am literally not smart enough to figure this out.
Anyway, apart from a slightly peeved feeling about the rushed nature of the ending this was an entertaining read and one that I enjoyed.
I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
My rating 4 of 5 sink-your-teeth-into-this-one stars





















