The Blade Within (Raike #1) by Jackson Lear
25 November 2019
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The Blade Within is one of the titles on my list of books for the fifth SPFBO competition and was one of the books that I decided to roll forward after having read the first 30% with the idea of reading and reviewing fully. In this respect I have 1 more review to follow which I’m hoping will be in fairly quick succession followed by a post to reveal my semi finalists and the book I will be taking to stage two of the competition. So, straight to my review of The Blade Within.
I have to say from the outset that The Blade Within was very entertaining and a quick read, I was always keen to get back to the story in fact I was more than eager to pick it back up.
The central character is called Raike. Raike is not a character that you really want to meet at the dead of night in a dark alley. Although that being said he’s not quite as bad as he likes to make out. I guess you could call him a diamond in the rough. He’s part of a mercenary gang who wields magic. This is a book that is very territorial. Any gangs wandering into another gangs area – it doesn’t go down well – and Raike is about to enter just about everyone’s territory and bring down a lot of trouble in the process.
As the story begins a young girl has disappeared from an orphanage. You could be forgiven for thinking she ran away – but there was a note (not from the girl herself) – and a strange ghostly appearance only nights before that seemed to single her out for attention. Raike appears on the scene. He makes enquiries and receives answers. He knows things are rotten in Denmark and is determined to try and find the girl. This is personal.
Okay, I will just step back a little. Raike was himself an orphan, he lived at the very orphanage that this young girl went missing from, and a number of years ago a young girl, that he was very attached to, also went missing, and the same, or very similar, note seemed to accompany her disappearance. The whole experience never truly left Raike, he left the orphanage and took up with a band of mercenaries, learning magic in the process and now here he is, with history repeating itself. The problem is. Raike has been renamed, his past his behind him and to return to such things places not only himself, but all his comrades in danger. But, Raike isn’t the only orphan determined to bring this young girl back and pretty soon he has a small band of his comrades out investigating.
I won’t go further into the plot other than to say that this is a mystery story with a dose of fantasy thrown in.
The world here, in fact the characters too, feel a little generic. If you read quite a bit of fantasy I don’t think this will feel like it’s reinventing the wheel in either respect but at the same time it’s very easy to get along with and is actually a very compelling read. This book has a grimdark feel but I would say on the lower end of the grimdark spectrum – it’s not overly blood thirsty and didn’t make my stomach turn over, there’s banter and cursing but not enough to make your toes curl and overall it seems like a really good mix.
We meet a number of characters. I’m not going to name them all but I found myself really enjoying the crew that Raike surrounded himself with. One of the characters in particular is a real charmer and another is strong with magic not to mention incredibly intimidating and a little almost invincible seeming. Raike himself is like a dog with a bone, he doesn’t always make good decisions but I liked that he wanted to help the underdog here. He’s not about money or profit more right instead of wrong – even if his methods of achieving that are sometimes dubious.
In terms of criticisms. Well, to be honest, I had only one thing that worried me and I really can’t discuss it in a review because it would definitely be a spoiler. It’s just something that didn’t sit quite right for me, but of course might differ for other readers. Of course we’re dealing with a bunch of reprobates here but at the same time, as a reader, I want to be on their side. I know they’re not perfect characters, but, I’m grasping at whatever straws are thrown my way to make me feel that basically, deep down, badass or not, their bark is worse than their bite, they still have that core of decency even if it’s well hidden. Now, I’ve probably made that seem worse than it is, it’s one element of the story that just worried away at me and so I couldn’t deny it’s presence but it might not cause that reaction in others. Did it spoil the read – no. I still found this a really good story and would definitely read more in the series to see what scrapes Raike gets into next.
Good writing, likable-in-spite-of-themselves-characters and a thriller that intrigued me to the end.
I received a copy courtesy of the author for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
Weekly Wrap Up : 24th November 2019
Another week races by! I’ve had a super busy week this week – both personally and with blogging – and I realise I’ve not visited other blogs for a few days but I will be doing so very soon – catching up. I’ve not exactly stuck to schedule but plowed on with my SPFBO books and reviews. Hopefully, all going to plan with my reviews I should be able to announced my semi finalists and finalist by Wednesday coming. Fingers crossed for sticking to plan.
So, here’s what I’ve been reading:
- Vortex Visions by Elise Kova
- River of Thieves by Clayton Snyder
- Sir Thomas the Hesitant and the Table of the Less Valued Knights by Liam Perrin
Next scheduled reads:
- Angel Mage by Garth Nix
- Forever and a Doomsday by Laurence MacNaughton
SPFBO update:
I’ve read all my SPFBO books now and have been steadily posting reviews I just now need to make my final decision.
Upcoming Reviews
- King of the Road by RS Belcher
- Queenlayer by Sebastien DeCastell
- The Absinthe Earl by Sharon Lynn Fisher
- Ninth House by Leigh Bardugo
- The Blade Within by Jackson Lear
- River of Thieves by Clayton Snyder
- Sir Thomas the Hesitant and the Table of the Less Valued Knights by Liam Perrin
I’d love to know what you’re reading this week.
#SPFBO Review of Vortex Visions (Air Awakens: Vortex Chronicles #1) by Elise Kova
24 November 2019
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Tags: #SPFBO5, Air Awakens, Elise Kova, Vortex Chronicles#1, Vortex Visions

Vortex Visions is one of the titles on my list of books for the fifth SPFBO competition and was one of the books that I decided to roll forward after having read the first 30% with the idea of reading and reviewing fully. In this respect I have 2 more reviews to follow which I’m hoping will be in fairly quick succession followed by a post to reveal my semi finalists and the book I will be taking to stage two of the competition. So, straight to my review of Vortex Visions.
Firstly, I would point out that I haven’t read the Air Awakens series by Elise Kova, I understand that Vortex Visions is a book that can be read without having read the previous series however, it is possible that if you plan to read the first series this book and review could contain spoilers so please be aware of that.
As the book begins we meet Vi Solaris, heir to an empire. although she has never lived at it’s heart. Little more, it seems, than a pawn in a political game of power. From the ruling south she has been placed in the north as a means to keep peace. That being said, Vi has led, to all extents, a happy existence, even though she dearly wants nothing more than to be reunited with her family and twin brother.
Great expectations rest upon Vi’s shoulders, particularly with regard to her magical abilities which seem, as the story commences, to be lying almost dormant. She’s not unhappy in her situation although she deeply desires to return to her family home. When a delegation from the South arrives it brings with it mixed tidings. Vi’s friend and deliverer of messages from home, Jayme, returns with not only tidings from her family but also a new acquaintance. Andru, he seems to be an envoy from the South sent to judge Vi and her worthiness to rule. Of course this puts Vi on the backfoot somewhat as she tries to go about her regular life whilst being observed and trying to make a good impression, but, meanwhile, Vi’s magic will awaken and far from giving her comfort it only serves to heighten the unusual predicament she is in. She has strange visions, is able to make contact with an unknown entity and on top of all that her life is under threat.
Vortex Visions got off to a really good start. I loved the writing style and became easily immersed in the world.
Vi finds herself a ward of sorts. This was an unusual situation for me to come to terms with because I guess I’m more familiar with wards being taken by the rulers from the defeated as a means of forcing compliance. In this case Vi is taken to the North (following their defeat) as a means of pacifying the Northerners that the heir of the Empire will be brought up sympathetically to the other realms. There is more to this than at first meets the eye though so you do have to read further to discover more.
As the story begins you immediately feel Vi’s longing to return to her family, an event that is long overdue and you start to feel her doubts about why she hasn’t been recalled sooner. She personally feels it’s her lack of magical ability and this new person, sent to judge her, certainly isn’t going to help her abilities manifest or help her to gain confidence.
Okay, I got off to a very good start with Vortex Visions. It really is a strong start. You get an immediate feel for the main protagonist and her situation, her desires and hopes. You’re also introduced to the people surrounding her, one being a best friend. Vi, Ellene and Jayme have a close friendship, the three enjoy all sorts of nonsense and gossip and they’re about to go on an adventure, a release for a few days as part of a celebration for Vi’s birthday. This is where things start to change.
So, yes, a really good start to this, I was intrigued. The writing is good, it’s an easy read with decent pacing. I had my doubts about certain characters which I won’t reveal for the sake of spoilers (although these are only my own speculations and I have no real idea if they’re correct or not at this point).
I’m not entirely certain I understand everything about the world here. Other than there seems to be a north/south divide. Vi lives with people who live high in the trees, The place sounds quite lovely and almost put me in mind of a Tolkien landscape of elves – but that’s probably my own imagination running riot.
The plot is really quite good, there’s more to Vi than meets the eye, plots are afoot and strangers are going to make some rather unannounced appearances and upset things somewhat.
In terms of criticisms. I felt the first half of the book was the more gripping part of the story. The latter half felt a bit more easy to second guess and didn’t really move things forward in the way I’d expected. Also, Vi. I couldn’t help feeling she bemoaned her situation much more than was necessary. Of course I understand that she missed her family and felt abandoned or stranded a little but to be honest she was still incredibly pampered and privileged and so I couldn’t help but feel a little irritated sometimes by her thoughts. Particularly as she wasn’t treated badly, she wasn’t a prisoner, and in fact the heir to the North’s own daughter was her best friend.
On the whole, I had a good time with Vortex Visions. The writing is really strong and persuasive, it had a little bit of a ‘set up’ feel for the next instalment but I imagine this would only increase readers eager anticipation, particularly in terms of the romance that seems to be budding.
I would like to thank the author for the copy of ‘Vortex Visions. The above is my own opinion.
#SPFBO Review of Sir Thomas the Hesitant and the Table of Less Valued Knights by Liam Perrin
23 November 2019
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Tags: Liam Perrin, Sir Thomas the Hesitant and the Table of Less Valued Knights, SPFBO 5

Sir Thomas the Hesitant is one of the titles on my list of books for the fifth SPFBO competition and was one of the books that I decided to roll forward after having read the first 30% with the idea of reading and reviewing fully. In this respect I have 3 more reviews to follow which I’m hoping will be in fairly quick succession followed by a post to reveal my semi finalists and the book I will be taking to stage two of the competition. So, straight to my review of Sir Thomas The Hesitant.
Straight out of the gates I will say that this one was a fun story and very enjoyable for being so completely different from my normal sort of read. To be honest, I very rarely pick up books that are described as humorous or comic, or great fun. I don’t really understand why not because on the occasions that I do so I inevitably have a good time and really welcome the breath of fresh air that comes with the change of style.
Sir Thomas is a story based on Arthurian legend and as such it has all the old favourites cast into the mix, Arthur – unsurprisingly, Merlin, the round table, Camelot and lots of other names that I won’t go into here. What it does, that I felt was so very different, is it looks at the underdog of the story, or at least not the typical hero. Thomas isn’t about to save the world, in fact, he’ll be lucky if he saves himself, let alone his brother.
Thomas has an elder brother who is truly the golden boy, unfortunately his brother gets himself into a spot of bother (aka thrown into prison) when he approaches the local Baron to beseech him to help the local villages who are dying of starvation whilst his granaries seem to be full to bursting. Thomas finds himself thrown into the mix when he decides that to help his brother he will seek a boon from King Arthur, who is feeling particularly generous with the approach of his wedding to the lovely Guinevere. Long story short, Thomas ends up being enrolled as one of the Less Valued Knights (a long and secret ambition of his was to become a knight) and his brother remains, for the time being, incarcerated, although still very much at the forefront of Thomas’s thoughts – when he’s not thinking of a particularly lovely young lady in waiting.
Anway, I’m not going to go overboard with the plot. Thomas needs to find a way to help his brother, whilst undertaking his trials and duties as a newly made member of the LVKs. It’s the sort of story where two steps progress are made usually followed by a succession of events that knock things back a step or two.
What I really liked about this, apart from the very obvious fun elements, was the narrative voice and style of writing. It’s a very easy, charming, book to read. I realise that humour can be hit or miss but this one really just worked for me. I hesitate to say it but it almost has a slapdash, Monty Python type feel to it, in my head at least. Just look at the trials and the jousts as a fine example.
Thomas manages to gather around himself a bunch of the most unusual and unlikely characters and you can’t help liking them and becoming attached as you laugh at the predicaments they get into. There are giantesses who are no longer quite so giant, evil wizards who have reformed and are no longer quite so evil, magic swords that are a little cursed and smelly and mischievous compasses. And, underlying all of this there is the mystery of the Baron and the starving villagers. It’s all rather tongue in cheek, entertaining and very easy to read and Thomas is an easy to like character, he takes risks, stands up for himself and wins friends – even if they are a little oddball.
It’s a book that stays true in that even though Thomas makes great strides by the conclusion of the story – he still isn’t the hero. It just isn’t destined to be.
In terms of criticisms – I’m struggling to really come up with anything to be honest. I went into this wondering if it would make me laugh and be an easy book to read and it was both of those things. I suppose, if pushed, I would say the worldbuilding is a little skimpy but to be honest, it’s medieval fantasy based on King Arthur so I didn’t really feel the need for extensive descriptions.
So, in conclusion, even though isn’t going to be an overly long or elaborate review that certainly isn’t a reflection of my feelings for the book itself. I would definitely like to read more of Thomas’s adventures.
I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks. The above opinion is my own.
#SPFBO Review of Never Die by Rob J. Hayes

Never Die is one of the titles on my list of books for the SPFBO competition and was one of the books that I decided to roll forward after having read the first 30% with the idea of reading and reviewing fully. In this respect I have 4 more reviews to follow which I’m hoping will be in fairly quick succession followed by a post to reveal my semi finalists and the book I will be taking to stage two of the competition. So, straight to my review of Never Die
Okay, Never Die is a story of revenge, but it’s one of the most unusual and unique revenge stories that I’ve ever encountered. This is a story of heroes and honour, it’s packed to the rafters with action, steeped in Asian culture and folklore and delivers a fast paced tale that ends on a, well, I’m lost for words exactly how to best describe the ending, ‘it’s a little jaw dropping’ is the first thing that springs to mind.
Here we meet a young boy on a mission to bring down an Emperor. Of course he can’t do this by himself. He’s a young boy of eight or nine years maybe, he doesn’t have the strength, he isn’t a fighter, he doesn’t really have a plan for that matter, come to think of it he has very little, not a pot to piss in or even a pair of shoes. But he knows his heroes and embarks on a hero recruitment drive if you will – the only slight deterrent for anybody wanting to take up a position, they have to be dead in order to do so. It’s not the best incentive to apply for the role. As it happens the heroes have very little say in the matter, they need to die and so die they must.
Now, first things first. I am not going to be discussing the plot at all other than the above paragraph. This is a story that delivers a number of twists and I’d sooner leave further elaboration well alone in order to avoid spoilers. Strangely enough, and although I obviously now know the final reveals this is a book that I would very much like to revisit. I think it would be really interesting to see how, or if, the knowledge of the ending affects the rest of the story for me.
So, what really shone for me with Never Die.
I have to applaud Hayes’ ability to come up with such an action packed novel that plowed forward relentlessly and intensely yet at the same time invited me to get to know the characters. How many times do you read a book where the characters suffer from the intensity of world building, or the furious nature of the adventure takes centre stage and you can’t get a feel for the place. This really is an incredibly well rounded novel which is even more impressive when you consider it’s just shy of 300 pages. The action is delivered at breakneck speed. The story, in fact, opens with a battle sequence where the fighting is portrayed so well that I could see the characters playing out their deadly dances. The characters are introduced one at a time which gives you the chance to get a feel for them without becoming overwhelmed. And the world building – well, it’s taking place in every sentence really. Names, places, clothing, food, back stories, they’re all related with an effortless grace that really belies the skill that it must take.
The characters are all so very different. And they start out with no small degree of hatred for each other not to mention a good deal of competitive swaggering and banter. Eventually though, they begin to develop bonds which I suppose gives weight to the idea that there’s nothing like a shared goal to bring people together. They’re all masters in their own way, whether with the sword or with fighting without the use of weapons. I’m not going to try to describe all the different techniques, frankly I’d just make an absolute mess of it. Just lets say they’re all masters in their given fields and leave well enough alone. They all have some pretty cool names and some of their abilities make for great reading during the throes of battle – I’m definitely looking at Emerald Wind right now!
In terms of criticisms. Well, this is a conundrum because I did have a couple of little issues as the story progressed, but, the ending kind of answered my qualms and it’s really difficult to discuss what they were because, obviously I’m being all secretive. I will say that I did guess one of the twists part way through the story. I actually have no idea how because I wasn’t reading the book at the time, in fact I was doing something a bit brain numbingly mundane when suddenly a light bulb went on in my head in a most unexpected and comic book style fashion. I wasn’t aware I’d even be thinking of the book but there you go. So, yes, I had my little ‘ah-ha’ moment and of course I was feeling quite smug and also not a little bit disappointed (like, if this is what the ending is all about then really….) but, of course there’s a but, yes, I had guessed what I will call one third of the twists – but (again with the buts) it was only the smallest element of the twist in the tale and the other two revelations – well, hot damn – and that’s why I need to do a reread.
I guess this leaves me with only one downside, or maybe two. This was shorter than I would have liked (even though it does have a certain epicyness to it – that is a word, I’ve seen it on the internet so it must be true) and it’s a standalone. In a world where series of books can sometimes reach double digits I guess I should be applauding a standalone – but, please sir, I would like more.
Oh, and I suppose I forgot to mention all the fantasy elements, ghosts, and monsters and the like, but – go and pick up a copy and discover them for yourself.
I received a copy courtesy of the author, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.



