#SPFBO Thoughts on my second batch of books

September is upon us and with it my thoughts on the next five books for the Self Published Fantasy Blog Off. For more details on the first five books drawn check out this post. My thoughts on the first five are here. I am intending to read 20% of each book and if one really grabs my attention to carry on and complete that particular book. At the end of the six months I should hopefully have read six books, one from each batch, and will then choose a favourite.
Without further ado here are my thoughts:
Gobln Fruit by S E Burr

This one gets off to a promising start. I enjoyed what I read up to the 20% cut off point however I think it’s probably a little too slow in terms of pace, especially given the length of the story, probably a little bit too much focus on certain elements that don’t really bring too much to the story. Otherwise I would say that I found this to be quite good up to the point at which I cut off.
Search of the Lost by Tom Gaskin

Search of the Lost – I had a shaky start with this one to be honest. I really enjoyed the opening which has a great ‘storyteller’ feel to it but then I lost interest a little with the fight scene and the whole predicament that Havovatch found himself in. Then there was the scene with the King which just felt irrational somehow. Part of me is intrigued by the story and can’t help wanting to keep reading to see how things develop but I have read the first 20% and at this stage it unfortunately hasn’t worked hard enough for me to put it through to the next stage.
War Witch by Layla Nash

I’m really enjoying this one so far, I like the concept and I’m intrigued by the characters. I’ll review this one later as this is my favourite out of this batch and I intend to complete it and see how it works out.
Land of the Gods by Justin Sloan

This story seems to have plenty going on at the start and yet I found myself strangely disconnected from the characters and I think they came across as quite emotionally immature, at least up to the point I read up to. I quite enjoyed the setting and description of place, it wasn’t overburdened with wordiness but overall I found it difficult to become engaged with the characters at this stage.
The Devil You Know by Alan Tucker

A post apocalyptic style book with magic and aliens. I think the writing here is good, the story flows well, but, I didn’t really get a good sense of the place at this point and to a certain extent maybe a little bit too much is going on. I liked the aspect of Abraham and his ‘demon’ companion (for want of a none spoiler type description). Neri – I found her magic a bit too conveniently easy and that it lacked that certain something that would make me feel intrigued.
The #SPFBO 2017

It’s difficult to believe but the #SPFBO 2016 is all wrapped up with a wonderful winning entry and lots of incredibly enjoyable books to read. There are lots of blog posts out there to read about but I’ll point you in the general direction of Mark Lawrence’s blog to get a general feel for what went on. The winner – which you should definitely read – was the Grey Bastards by Jonathan French – and believe me when I say you should read quite a few -or a lot – of the other entrants because there were some awesome reads.
Now, I did intend to write a much fuller piece of my experience taking part and in fact I probably will do so because I thought it had such a good feel – but, for now, this is just a quick post to let you know that the SPFBO ’17 is about to commence. Yes, that’s right, we’re going for our third year and hopefully it will be as awesome as last year.
As I said, a fuller post will follow, this is just a quick heads up. The details are here.
That is all for me today. More to follow. In the meantime thank you to everyone who took part in the #SPFBO ’16. A huge thanks especially to all the authors who put their work forward for review – there wouldn’t be any SPFBO without you after all 😀 And, good luck to everyone this year.
Watch this space for my list of books for 2017.
Remember people – there can be only one.
My 9th book: Final Stage: #SPFBO 16
24 April 2017
Filed under #SPFBO, Book Reviews
Tags: Assassin's Charge, Claire Frank, Guest post, SPFBO
November 1st saw the start of the second stage of the SPFBO – the Self Published Fantasy Blog off organised by Mark Lawrence. All the details can be found here.
Today I’m highlighting the final book that I will be reading for the SPFBO. All the books have been drawn randomly and the books I’ve read so far are as follows:
- Shadow Soul by Caitlyn Davis, review here.
- Paternus by Dyrk Ashton (review here).
- The Grey Bastards by Jonathan French.
- Larcourt K A Krantz ( Fire Born, Blood Blessed #1) My review is here.
- Ráth Bládhma (Fionn mac Cumhaill #1) by Brian O’Sullivan, review here.
- The Music Box Girl by K.A. Stewart. Review here.
- The Path of Flames by Phil Tucker. Review here.
- The Moonlight War by SKS Perry – review to follow.
My final book is :
Assassin’s Charge (Echoes of Imara) by Claire Frank
A cold-hearted assassin. A boy with a price on his head.
Rhisia Sen is one of the Empire’s highest paid assassins. Living a life of luxury, she chooses her contracts carefully, working to amass enough wealth so she can leave her bloody trade. She is offered a new contract on the outskirts of civilization, and almost refuses—until she sees the purse. It could be the last job she ever has to take.
But when she reaches the destination, she discovers her mark is a child.
The contract, and her reputation, demand she kill the boy—if she can banish his innocent face from her mind. But another assassin has been sent to kill her, and a notorious bounty hunter is on her trail. She doesn’t know why the boy is a target, or why her former employer wants her dead. Saving the child could be her only chance at survival.
The Music Box Girl by K A Stewart #SPFBO
6 April 2017
Filed under #SPFBO, Book Reviews
Tags: #SPFBO 2016, K A Stewart, The Music Box Girl

The Music Box Girl was my sixth SPFBO book (details here.). This is a book that borrows very heavily from the Phantom of the Opera story but brings something new to the tale with the addition of steampunk elements and a most unexpected ‘phantom’. To be honest I had a good time with this one. It’s got a good pace, the focus isn’t all on the musical elements, which I did worry about going in but needn’t have done so, and whilst there is a bit of a cheesy feel to the ending I found this a quick and enjoyable read.
At the start of the story we make the brief acquaintance of a couple of characters sorting through the clutter in an attic when they come across an unknown manuscript and this is where the story begins.
We start with a hopeful young man called Anton as he follows his dreams to the Opera House hoping to become the next tenor. The role is currently filled, albeit it by a fellow who is past his prime and is also something of a prima donna to boot. Anton ends the day without an audition in sight but with a job under his belt working with the stage crew. Anton has a wonderful voice, full of promise, if in need of a bit of tutoring. Waiting in the wings, of course, is the character that everyone believes to be the ghost of the Opera House, a character that wants the performance to be perfect and sees in Anton the opportunity to accomplish that goal. All Anton needs is a few lessons from a master performer.
I won’t go too much more into the plot, this is a fast paced book that makes for a remarkably quick read so there’s no need for me to be throwing out spoilers left and right.
The characters – the primary focus is Anton and of course the woman who reappears in his life, an adventurer known as Bess. These two were childhood friends but as their relationship began to develop, and perhaps teetered on the edge of something more, Bess was sent away to school by her mother who was only too aware of the inappropriateness of such a match. For years Bess has travelled the world, taking part in adventures with her stories being written about on a regular basis in the newspapers back home. She doesn’t want to stay at home and wear corsets – and who can blame her – she longs for something more, only returning begrudgingly home to recharge her batteries after her last jaunt went a little bit pear shaped. Of course, the fates intervene and not only does Anton find himself performing on the opening night but Bess, accompanying her old friend and husband on a rare night out, find themselves with box seats. And voila – the two are reunited.
Again, I won’t go into the mystery character – other than to say here lies jealousy, obsession and danger.
The setting is Detroit. A bustling hive of activity. Home to the invention of automatons that are now used far and wide it has become the centre of innovation and culture. The Opera House is the gleaming gem in the Detroit crown.
What did I like about this, there’s mystery and intrigue, secret passages, ghosts, steampunk elements, a mild romance, jealousy, murder and chase scenes that end in escape by dirigible. This is a fast paced read, the pages just fly by and I found myself wanting to read on to find out what was really going on. There is enough attention to detail to put you into the frame without being overdone and the author manages to create a lingering feeling of creepy suspense and provides the place with a touch of old fashioned gothic.
Did I have criticisms. Yes. This could have used a little more finesse. Certain elements were rather cheesy, particularly the ending. The characters are not particularly deep and certain elements of the story didn’t entirely make sense, or at least certain actions of some of the characters. I think if you were of a mind to, you could probably pick a few holes here and there but to be honest, I wasn’t of a mind to – I was, purely and simply, enjoying the fact that I could so easily sink into the story and enjoy the entertainment.
A good read, not particularly ground breaking I suppose but a new twist on an old tale with plenty of action and drama to help you power through it.
Fionn: Defence of Ráth Bládhma (Fionn mac Cumhaill #1) by Brian O’Sullivan
13 March 2017
Filed under #SPFBO, Book Reviews
Tags: Brian O'Sullivan, Defence of Ráth Bládhma, Fionn, Fionn mac Cumhaill #1
Fionn was my fifth SPFBO book and it was a thoroughly enjoyable read. This book is a beginning really. A story that is based deep in the heart of ancient celtic mythology, a story that brings to us the beginnings of a legend. Fionn was a hero and warrior and this book is a retelling of the start of his story.
I must say that that this got off to a terrific start with a young woman, heavily pregnant, making her way alone through harsh territory. She’s followed by a lone wolf. A wolf driven to extremes by desperate hunger. This opening was just so gripping, I have to say that as starts to books go I don’t remember being as captivated as this for a long while.
From here we revert to a young woman working out in the field, a woman touched by a strange vision that strikes fear into her heart. The young woman is Bodhmhall, druid and leader of the small community at Ráth Bládhma. It seems that she’s about to meet up with the young woman we met at the start of the story, a woman called Muirne who seeks sanctuary after most of her own tribe were attacked and killed.
We then jump to a scene out in the wild where Liath Luachra, warrior and partner to Bodhmhall is out hunting. She comes across the tracks of a large hunting party and follows their trail. Upon finding them she beholds a strange man who frightens her so badly that she almost loses her senses.
Not to give too much away it seems that Muirne was running away from something and in seeking sanctuary has brought trouble a plenty to Ráth Bládhma’s door. This is only a small community and though fairly well established is in no way capable of taking on large raiding parties.
The story is told with alternative POVs with Bodhmhall and Liath. Without doubt Liath’s scenes were the more gripping as she’s generally out and about, stealing through the woods and swamps following unseen in the footsteps of others. Liath has a dark past that she has tried to forget, not always successfully. Bodhmhall’s chapters have a much more restrained feel but I did really enjoy these chapters as they helped to set the scene and show us the hardships of life – and boy was life hard then! Cold and hunger were the two constants that could be relied upon. But, in spite of the hardships the small community under Bodhmhall’s care are content, little do they realise how content until their world is ripped apart and turned upside down.
In terms of plot. Well, this certainly isn’t convoluted. A young woman seeks sanctuary for herself and her baby and a couple of other war tribes seem to seek her. We never really know exactly why and in that respect I felt like Muirne was being a bit careful with the truth.
There are plenty of fight sequences, a siege and an attack on Ráth Bládhma that are absolutely gripping to read about – the fight that involves Liath and a large number of warriors was breathtaking – my heart was literally in my throat.
The writing is smooth and persuasive. I could easily picture the place and the people. Their hardships, their loves are all easily spelled out here and the strength of feeling they have for their community and the lengths they go to to protect it and each other is really well portrayed and very touching.
I have to say that this is a totally gripping read and the start to a series that I will undoubtedly continue. Very entertaining, well written and populated with very likeable characters. This author can certainly conjure up a picture in your mind’s eye, his writing flows easily, he doesn’t feel the need to dump large amounts of information, he allows the story to develop naturally and for you the reader to reach your own inclusions without hand holding.
This is a book with a good deal of gritty realism, at this point fairly low in fantasy although there is obviously the druid aspect and also the strange and totally creepy magical man who was following in Muirne’s footsteps. I will mention there is also quite a bit of bloodshed and gore but nothing that detracts from the read or makes it feel gratuitous, just more a statement about the brutality of the time.
I think probably the only niggle I had was with the various words that were sprinkled throughout the story that I assume were Gaelic and also the names – but, whilst I think this may present a bit of a challenge in terms of pronunciation I really do appreciate the author’s use of the original names and phrases. I think, yes, it may take a little time to come to terms with pronunciation, but it’s worth it for the authenticity that it brings to the story.
A very good start to a promising series and one that I have no hesitation in recommending.




