#SPFBO 9: Finalist Review: Master of the Void by Wend Raven
18 March 2024
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Tags: #SPFBO 9, Book Reviews, Fantasy, fiction, Finalist Review, Master of the Void, Wend Raven

What is SPFBO 9? This is a competition where authors of self-published fantasy can enter their work. The objective to find a winner out of the 300 entries submitted. Ten judges (or judging teams) each receive 30 entrants. Each judge/team will eventually submit one finalist to the second round where a winner will eventually be decided upon. Check out Mark Lawrence’s post here to look at this year’s entrants, judges and allocations list. Also, check out this page to see all the lovely finalists and the scoreboard for Phase 2 of the competition.
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This is a coming of age story with an interesting magic system and multiple povs. The writing is good, there is plenty of travel and mystery and I enjoyed the whole ‘void’ concept. However, I did have some issues that stopped me from loving this book as much as I’d hoped.
Set in the Seven Lands magic is fundamental to everyday life. Basically, everyone has some element of magic even if it’s fairly simple or mundane. We quickly learn that when a person turns 13 they can choose to undertake a magical ability test, of course, most participants expect this to be fairly run of the mill – the worst that could happen is maybe a low level magical ability. As the story begins we meet our two primary characters – Derrius and Orimond. Disaster strikes for both these characters – which I won’t go into – and sends them both on totally different, independent voyages of discovery.
What I liked about this – I really enjoyed the way the author takes the two main characters along completely different paths. I enjoyed in particular the way that one character physically went on a real adventure and eventually seemed to find a measure of happiness in his life in spite of his disappointment at the start of the story. I personally thought the way the characters’ disappointments fed into their eventual choices was very well executed.
The world is quite well explored and I enjoyed all the travel involved – particularly when a group of characters band together to go in search of someone.
I would say this has an epic fantasy feel. There’s definitely a ‘the world is under threat’ feel and a sense of things generally coming to a head in the most critical fashion.
In terms of my issues. I think there were too many povs. I usually enjoy multiple povs but I felt that the characters didn’t feel distinct enough, I was sometimes muddled in terms of who I was reading about and I found the jumps forward in age a little perplexing. Maybe that just speaks of a level of impatience on my part because the timeline/confusion about the characters’ ages does resolve itself. On top of this I just didn’t find myself forming firm attachments to any of the characters. Which isn’t to say I disliked their storylines just that a firm favourite never really became apparent.
On top of this, and this is a personal thing of course, but this felt like it could have been shortened to make it a bit more punchy. As it is the pacing felt a little inconsistent, certain areas felt like they progressed very slowly and then the conclusion seemed to plough forward very quickly indeed.
Anyway, issues aside, this has an easy style of writing, a good amount of world building and a well thought out elemental style magic system that I really liked and although I experienced a few issues I think it will have no problem finding its audience.
I received a copy through the author, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
My rating 6.5 of 10
Booking Ahead/Weekly Wrap Up
17 March 2024
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Tags: Booking Ahead, Caffeinated Book Reviewer, Sunday Post, Weekly wrap up

I’m trying to get back into the habit of doing a round-up of the week just completed and also take a look at my plans for the forthcoming week. I rather got out of the habit of doing so but I would like to reinstate this type of post as I feel it keeps me on track. So, I’m linking up to The Sunday Post over at Kimberly’s Caffeinated Reviewer. Without further ado:
Books read this week:
This week I feel like I’ve been on a go slow for some reason. Not just in reading and blogging but everything. An overall lack of oomph. Anyway, I did manage to finally post an update about where I’m up to with SPFBO. I completed and reviewed Oracle by Thomas Olde Heuvelt. I also read another SPFBO finalist and picked up another – which I feel I will complete today, which will then leave me with two more finalists before my SPFBO reading is complete. I have one more review book this month which I will start this forthcoming week. Play of Shadows by Sebastien de Castell.

Next Week’s Reads:
Hoping to read my remaining SPFBO finalists and also my final review book for March. Mmm, I’d also like to fit in a backlist book.

Reviews Posted:
- Oracle by Thomas Olde Heuvelt
- The Storm Beneath the World by Michael R Fletcher
- Crucible of Chaos by Sebastien de Castell
Outstanding Reviews
- SPFBO Finalist
- SPFBO Finalist
- SPFBO Finalist
- SPFBO Finalist
- SPFBO Finalist
- SPFBO Finalist
- SPFBO Finalist
- The September House by Carissa Orlando
- Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros
#SPFBO 9 Update

What is SPFBO 9? This is a competition where authors of self-published fantasy can enter their work. The objective to find a winner out of the 300 entries submitted. Ten judges (or judging teams) each receive 30 entrants. Each judge/team will eventually submit one finalist to the second round where a winner will eventually be decided upon. Check out Mark Lawrence’s post here to look at this year’s entrants, judges and allocations list. Also, check out this page to see all the lovely finalists and the scoreboard for Phase 2 of the competition.
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Okay, I realise that I’ve been very quiet in terms of posting about SPFBO. Rest assured this is not a reflection on the Finalists or indeed my progress in reading them, rather that I have been more fixated on getting some reading under my belt before I started to post any reviews.
As you may know, for Phase 1 of the competition I was joined by the wonderful Critiquing Chemist, Sarah and her trusty boffin Jennie, who helped with the initial phase taking on board half of the book allocation and helping to choose our finalist (A Rival Most Vial).
For Phase 2 Sarah has taken a step back due to family commitments but Jennie was still keen to join me in reading through the finalists and scoring each one. However, Jennie also has less time for reading at the current time due to pressures that I won’t go into here and whilst she has been reading we’re both not sure that she’ll manage to complete all the finalists before the end of the competition, and I certainly don’t want to add any additional pressure in that respect.
What does this mean going forward?
Well, as it currently stands I have now read 6 of the 9 finalists (i’ve started book 7 and I’m hoping to complete that and the remaining two books before the end of the month). I thought I’d make that clear first in case there were any concerns that the finalists wouldn’t all be complete.
In terms of scoring, Jennie has read and scored some of the finalists, however, as we cannot guarantee that she’ll be able to read all of them before the deadline at this point I will score the books alone – this seems fair and consistent (to be honest, our tastes have aligned very well so far so I don’t think this will affect the overall scores in any sort of dramatic way).
With that in mind I’m going to start posting my reviews very soon, I’ll hopefully be posting one every four to five days.
That’s my update for now. I’m so sorry that it’s taken me so long to post an update, but, as I mentioned, I’ve been concentrating more on reading than reviewing, and also I wanted to give my partner in books time to get through some of the finalists without adding any stress.
Watch this space, hopefully my first review will go live this forthcoming week.
Friday Face Off : The Hungry Dark by Jen Williams
15 March 2024
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Tags: art, Books, Friday Face Of, Jen Williams, The Hungry Dark

Today I’m returning to the Friday Face Off, originally created by Books by Proxy). I’ve missed these for the past few months and so would like to get back to comparing covers (and hopefully I will be updating this page with a new banner. This is an opportunity to look at a book of your choice and shine the spotlight on the covers. Of course this only works for those books that have alternative covers (although sometimes I use this to look at a series of books to choose a favourite). . So, if you have a book that has alternative covers, highlight them and choose your favourite. If you’re taking part it would be great if you leave a link so I can take a look at what you’ve chosen.
This week I’ve chosen a book that I’ll shortly be picking up and very much looking forward to – The Hungry Dark by Jen Williams. Here are the covers:
My favourite this week:

Which is your favourite?
Join me next week in highlighting one of your reads with different covers.
Oracle (Robert Grim #2) by Thomas Olde Heuvelt
14 March 2024
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Tags: Book Reviews, fiction, Horror, Oracle, Robert Grim #2, Thomas Olde Heuvelt
My Five Word TL:DR Review : Scary Concept, Little Over Stretched

Oracle is a really interesting idea for a horror story, in fact I can’t recall reading anything quite like it. It got off to a great start with a slowly building sense of unease that really does turn into all-out-horror. For me, I didn’t quite enjoy the last third of the book as much as the earlier chapters, which was something of a surprise given there’s plenty of action and utter chaos at points. I preferred the creepier elements I think to the outright horror, although I would just clarify this isn’t bloodfest slasher horror.
I would mention that this is the second instalment in the Robert Grim series but I can confidently say that this can be read as a standalone.
This story really hits the ground running. We meet Luca and his neighbour/friend/crush, Emma, they’re on their way to school, it’s a foggy morning and visibility is really bad. Then, out of the blue they come across the strangest thing? obstacle? – basically, a 17th century fishing vessel, in excellent condition, has manifested from out of nowhere – literally it’s landed in a field of tulips. Lucas is very wary but Emma is determined to explore and climbs aboard. She enters the hatch, an ominous bell tolls, and she disappears. Within fairly short order a number of people have disappeared into the ship’s hold. Each time, the ominous bell tone rings out and that person isn’t seen again. Luca’s dad, responding to his desperate call also ventures on board, and in spite of taking extra precautions he also goes missing. From this point onwards the whole episode falls under the remit of a secret agency who seem to wield enough power to make the ship and all the missing people seem explainable and mundane.
I won’t go into the plot. There is a lot of cloak and dagger type subterfuge going on, at the same time, the families with missing relatives are trying to rally and desperately hoping for good news – which is in short supply.
I won’t elaborate further on the plot at this point.
What I really like about this.
Well, having read the author a couple of times already I expected there to be some chilling moments and there certainly is. He has such a great way of creating a situation, infusing it with atmosphere, inserting something so insidiously creepy that you’ll have the goosebumps and then creating pandemonium amongst the characters. And, I liked the characters, mostly. Luca is a sensible boy, he makes some good decisions and he was easy to read about – no eye rolling at all. Grim is a character enlisted by the secret agency people because he seems to be the only person who has dealt with an unexplained incident before (aka supernatural). I wasn’t totally enamoured with some of the ‘baddie’ types though They felt a little James Bond OTT villain to me.
I love all the old lore, and some of this really does go back in time and delves into the unknown, powerful deities that have been around longer than you can imagine. There are visions and oracles and fascinating undersea discoveries. This is also mixed in with the strange history of the fishing ship that appeared out of nowhere and started these strange events. The Oracle, as it was/is known, has a dark and disturbing history and it’s sudden appearance foretells certain disaster.
I enjoyed the different settings, I particularly thought the abandoned and structurally unsafe oil rig was brilliant for the grand finale – what more could you possibly want in terms of downright spookiness – oh, a storm you say – you’re covered. Of course there’s a storm with winds so strong that the characters are in danger of being swept overboard into the thrashing waters.
Now, in terms of criticisms. I don’t have anything that spoiled the read for me, but the final chapters felt a little drawn out. Strangely, this isn’t a feeling that I often experience, I’m more likely to conclude a book and feel like it was a bit rushed than the reverse, but in this case, and perhaps it’s because the author really was putting his characters through the wringer, I wanted to get to the crux of the matter and it seemed to drag a little.
Overall though, this was an intriguing story that I enjoyed by an author whose work is always compelling.
I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks. The above is my own opinion.
My rating 3.5 of 5 stars



