Review: Cinder House by Freya Marske

My Five Word TL:DR Review: DIdn’t Quite Work For Me

Cinder House is a retelling of the Cinderella story with a twist in the tale.  It has all the components that you would expect.  The terrible stepmother and her ghastly daughters, a Prince who must choose a wife, a grand ball, a member of the fae (perhaps not a Godmother as such), time restrictions about returning home and one significant change that was interesting but that I won’t spoil here.

I can say, as it’s already mentioned in the description that at the start of the story Cinder dies and remains from that point forward a ghost, tethered to the house and with various restrictions.

I confess that the start of the story really intrigued me.  It takes a step away from the original story and I was very curious how things would play out – ultimately it’s probably this twist that presented me with mixed feelings.

In terms of what I enjoyed.

I do enjoy a good retelling and as I already mentioned this has all the components to make it a clear retelling.  The writing is solid, in fact I’ve read this author before and enjoy her style very much.

The characters come across as you might expect.  The stepmother is cold and calculating and completely lacking in emotion other than her ambitions for her daughters.  Her daughters – well, one has magic and is a horrible excuse for a human being, taking great delight in persecuting Cinder, the other sister isn’t quite as nasty.  The Prince – well, his tale also has a twist and also moves in a direction that I really didn’t foresee – and I’m sorry, but I’m not going to give away spoilers for that either.

What didn’t work quite so well for me.

I think first and foremost this is a novella.  I usually do avoid novellas because they don’t always have the depth that I’m really looking for, but, I do find that fairytale retellings can work well with a shorter length so, strictly speaking, perhaps this is more a ‘me’ issue.  The other issue is that, and again this is really down to me and personal preferences, but I kind of expect a fairytale to have a happy ending.  And, well, in some respects maybe this is a happy ending, it just didn’t quite work for me.  That being said, this is an easy, bite sized story that I can see plenty of other readers simply wolfing down.

I received a copy through Netgalley, courtesy of the publisher, for which my thanks.  The above is my own opinion.

My rating 3 of 5 stars

10 Responses to “Review: Cinder House by Freya Marske”

  1. Charlotte's avatar Charlotte

    I’m sorry this one didnt fully work for you. Im still eager to check it out, and discover the twist with the prince, although itll be interesting to find out if I come away from it wanting more too. I havent really gotten to any novellas before but ive had mixed results with short stories. So I guess I’ll just have to wait and see. And I really hope your next read clicks more for you.

    • @lynnsbooks's avatar @lynnsbooks

      I’m curious to see what you think about it. TBH I’m not usually a fan of novellas as I always want more so that could have been part of the reason that held me back a little.

      Lynn 😀

      • Charlotte's avatar Charlotte

        I’ll let you know what I think when I pick it up. I think I saw it in my online libraries collection so hopefully I’ll get to it fairly soon 🤞

  2. Mogsy @ BiblioSanctum's avatar Mogsy @ BiblioSanctum

    I enjoy a good retelling too! But I’ve also been seeing mixed things about this one including your review. Still, it’s so short, I think I can knock it out real quick!

    • @lynnsbooks's avatar @lynnsbooks

      Yes, it was a very quick read even though it wasn’t really the right fit for me.

      Lynn 😀

  3. Tammy's avatar Tammy

    I’m starting this tonight, so I’m curious to compare notes😁

    • @lynnsbooks's avatar @lynnsbooks

      I think this one worked better for you than it did for me. I think maybe being a novella could have been a block.

      Lynn 😀

  4. Susy's Cozy World's avatar Susy's Cozy World

    I thought this was a full length novel, not a novella! And I am sorry that it didn’t work out! I was curious because I saw this around and it sounded promising but now… I am not so sure. I may still try it, but I will read some reviews more before deciding. I hope your next read will be more satisfying!!

    • @lynnsbooks's avatar @lynnsbooks

      Yeah, I don’t think I’d realised it was a novella. I always find I want more.

      Lynn 😀

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